景物照 by Wang Yu Fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i Made with good vibes en-us 2022-04-18 01:07:43 UTC 2023-09-25 05:39:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413268 或许这是每周三和五都会看到的景色。没什么特别。但说告别，有种莫名的空虚。听着远离的制服团体，思绪慢慢地抽离，内心被榨干。我们应该是一家人吧？]]> 2022-04-18 01:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413268 auzra35 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413313 林祉萱 (21)
中正湖以及琢噗楼
水似镜子，返照了美景]]> 2022-04-18 01:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413313 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413398

]]> 2022-04-18 01:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413398 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413995 2022-04-18 01:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146413995 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414369 2022-04-18 01:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414369 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414704 风景很美]]> 2022-04-18 01:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414704 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414826 2022-04-18 01:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146414826 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415374 2022-04-18 01:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415374 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415499 2022-04-18 01:50:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415499 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415932 学校里有一片碧绿的湖。在河边的杨树，叶子都黄了，挂在树上像是在对着我微微点头，飘在空中的叶子像是一只只黄色的蝴蝶在翩翩起舞，落在湖上的叶子像一艘艘金色的小船在飘飘荡荡。]]> 2022-04-18 01:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146415932 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416094 2022-04-18 01:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416094 太美了 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416153 2022-04-18 01:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416153 郭一鸣 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416193 2022-04-18 01:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416193 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416785 2022-04-18 01:51:37 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146416785 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417374 2022-04-18 01:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417374 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417436 于雅玟（25）

宁芙是否住在这里？
这里的景色应当是她的作品-
她肯定是不小心把珍珠项链弄断了，
让一颗颗珍珠化成洁白的睡莲，
点缀着那面碧玉色的宝镜。

还有浮萍，自由的生灵。
它无规则地生长，
想漂去哪就去哪。
湖面到处倒映着它的身影，
却料不见
它的下一个目的地。

颢气运裛，
沁人心脾。
我知道我带得走这份美好-
将故事情节串成回忆，
打上顿号。
毕竟，这不是结束，
而是
另一个入场券。
]]> 2022-04-18 01:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417436 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417916 2022-04-18 01:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146417916 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418022 中一那年，中秋那天。我们首次跟大家在学校待到天黑，和朋友们制造了难忘的回忆。时间过得好快；三年一眨眼就过了。]]> 2022-04-18 01:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418022 35 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418678 湖]]> 2022-04-18 01:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418678 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418908 每一天又一个新早晨]]> 2022-04-18 01:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146418908 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419214 中正湖 - 绿色盎然]]> 2022-04-18 01:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419214 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419216 2022-04-18 01:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419216 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419856 2022-04-18 01:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146419856 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420104 2022-04-18 01:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420104 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420277 2022-04-18 01:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420277 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420556 2022-04-18 01:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420556 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420953 亭子很好看，树也很好看]]> 2022-04-18 01:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146420953 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146421602 2022-04-18 01:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146421602 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146421667 2022-04-18 01:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146421667 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146422577 漂亮]]> 2022-04-18 01:58:06 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146422577 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146422645  .]]> 2022-04-18 01:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146422645 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146425404 漂亮]]> 2022-04-18 02:01:26 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146425404 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146425862 乌托邦]]> 2022-04-18 02:01:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146425862 16 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146426181 天空宛若透彻，皓蓝，宁静的湖泊，而湖里长满了银菱，无数个洁白的小船在湖中荡漾。洁白的云絮拂过树梢，掠过蔚蓝的玄鸟缄默不语，漫山遍野的树林，朝暮的云蒸霞蔚。露红艳紫在湖边徘徊，好似“浓绿万枝红一点，动人春色不须多”，湖泊涟漪潋滟，荡漾出万般姿色。葳蕤的枝叶层叠地覆盖着湖泊，花草朦胧若云蒸霞蔚。我像是漫步于葱茏一片的青纱帐底，霞光穿透离离蔚蔚的树叶洒下粼粼的光影。只见迎面而来的是一望无际，清例的湖水里倒映着蓝天白云，青山绿树，和柳绿桃红的花丛。远看，湖泊如一面透亮的明镜，天水一色，浩瀚无边。近看，湖水犹如一潭诱人的陈酒，细看，又宛如苍翠欲滴的翡翠。学生们清脆的笑声淹没在炎热的夏天里，而他们的梦想跨过山海。“少年就应该张扬，青春理应灿烂盛大。”]]> 2022-04-18 02:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2146426181 wang_yu_fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152984730 2022-04-22 02:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152984730 第二步：文字创作 wang_yu_fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152987369 1. 确定抒情的方向：“我”借由这张照片向读者传达“我”怎样的情感？（如：感伤？不舍？珍惜？回忆？难过？...）
2. 找出画面中/想象画面中能看到、听到、闻到、触摸得到的2-3个景物 
3. 安排顺序（如：天空->风声->水面倒影）
4. 利用形容词、修辞手法或直接描写加长句子（如：灰色的天空；沙沙的风声；挺拔的巨人和他的影子）注意！描写的句子要与抒情方向一致！
5. 延伸到个人情感或联想]]> 2022-04-22 02:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152987369 第三步：同侪互评根据检核表内容，评价同学创作的内容。可以直接用数字1、2、3、4表示相对应的评价项目。如：1. 视觉，2个；听觉，1个。（好）2.情感：满足（好）3.天空的形容词好像怪怪的4.没用到修辞手法 wang_yu_fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152988029 2022-04-22 02:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152988029 第四步：点赞时刻你最喜欢哪个作品呢？给它一颗爱心❤吧！ wang_yu_fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152990011 2022-04-22 02:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152990011 第五步：上载最终版作品 wang_yu_fen https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152991082
同学们请在样例的google.doc上点击右键“Make a copy” -->"Rename" (档案命名要求，如：4FG_01_洪小惠）请按照格式完成创作。呈交截止时间为：4月26日2359前【MYE之前】]]> 2022-04-22 02:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2152991082 17 https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2195254495 2022-05-23 05:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/wang_yu_fen/xw75ka36h5u1o89i/wish/2195254495