https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n Period 3 en-us 2017-02-06 13:32:28 UTC 2023-02-07 00:59:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837196 What else should I add?]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837196 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837217 What should I do to make it look better/what should i add]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837217 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837226 Should I make my colors brighter?]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837226 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837261 I dont know what to do in the background, what colors should i do]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837261 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837267 I don't know what else to add on the bottom or anywhere]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837267 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837325 Stuck on what else to add..]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837325 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837333 what should I add to the bottom or top?]]> 2017-02-06 14:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837333 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837418 I do not know what else to add to my word]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837418 pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837443 Not sure about the placement, is it good to the left or should it be somewhere else?]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837443 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837444 is the colour choice good?/does it generally convey the message?]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837444 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837465 Is my design very simple? Should I add more detail? Are my colors too plain? 

]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837465 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837467 Do I change the colors 
Tom Brady is a god]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837467 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837556 can't make clouds on the o's, what else should I add ]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837556 tph191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837590 How can I make the B look better]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837590 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837785 What else should I add]]> 2017-02-06 14:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151837785 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151838145 idk what else to add

]]> 2017-02-06 15:00:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151838145 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151838480 Are the colors okay?]]> 2017-02-06 15:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151838480 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151839176 is there anything i should add or take away?]]> 2017-02-06 15:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151839176 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151839848 2017-02-06 15:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151839848 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841579 I Like how it fades away at the end. i think you should make the blue in the back darker and make the howl come out of Tom Brady's mouth. KM]]> 2017-02-06 15:08:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841579 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841878 WOW! This is really good. I love how you pull out the ssss like a snake does. I would maybe make it fade into he back ground. 
WH]]> 2017-02-06 15:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841878 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841925 2017-02-06 15:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841925 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841961 I like the font, but I think you should make all the letters big and ot just the ACK part.  You could also make the colors orange and black if you want.
-AC

The idea of the font you chose is great. Think of different colors to represent the font- maybe yellow and orange color scheme?- Miss Palmer]]> 2017-02-06 15:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841961 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841988 I like the concept of spreading out the letters but I think the letters could also be altered. SJL]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151841988 pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842046 I like how the howl was drawn out; it's how I would imagine the sound! I would suggest making the "o"s a little bit bigger than the rest because often when you think of the word "howl" the O sound stands out the most. MT]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842046 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842085 Insaneeeeeeeee, i think the color scheme is kinda fresh. -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842085 tph191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842087 I like how it fades off at the end TH]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842087 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842095 I like the creativity of the O's. Do more with the h and t.
TWM]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842095 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842127 I like how the H drags out throughout the whole word. Maybe center the word. BC

]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842127 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842174 I think your design is very good.  I would make the colors more dull , to show the boredom of the word. BS

I love the feeling of your word. Maybe make the letters a little more grey- Miss Palmer]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842174 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842295 I like the font of your word.
One thing that you can add to this is maybe repeating the word more than once and making it smaller each time.
ER]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842295 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842302 i like the color contrast but the B could be bigger and a shape behind the word to  give the shape more emphasis. 
MK]]> 2017-02-06 15:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842302 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842445 I think the placement is good as is. I also really like your font choice. Since the word is mumble, I recommend to start the word out big, then as it repeats it gets smaller. MB

I love the repetition that you used! Maybe use a slightly darker grey- Miss Palmer]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842445 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842503 the colours are actually very nice and i really like the way the red fades out!! a suggestion is to make the 'L' more of a continuous diagonal line bc it looks more like an 'S'. -ys]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842503 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842544 I love the use of the background misty-effect. I maybe you could add sort of wisps or clouds to fill up the space? SJL]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842544 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842635 How does this represent Vroom at all. Fix it. Idk what I like yet lemme think
WH
I have since thought and came up with nothing]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842635 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842748 I like the letters, but maybe you could add an exclamation mark.
NB]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842748 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842761 I like how you extend the howl, it really paints a picture in my mind. Its like i'm sitting next to a wolf! Though its kinda blurry, maybe just the site. -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842761 tph191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842802 I like how the word is written the way a wolf would howl
TH]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842802 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842819 I like the style of the letters.
Choose a more defined background color.
TWM]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842819 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842851 Maybe add a background color
AM]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842851 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842870 like: colors are look good together 
change: h is a little big, maybe make some of the other letters bigger
JL]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842870 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842882 NH]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842882 pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842913 I really like the how the letters seem to be shaking! The color scheme is good, it gives the feeling of dirt/ground like an earthquake. I would suggest add a few more "r's or make the "r" a bit more drawn out to really show the sound of the word. MT]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842913 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842915 I like how the end of the word gets squished together. Maybe add arches to the bottom of the word. BC

]]> 2017-02-06 15:10:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151842915 elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843059 I love your color scheme! Maybe add a stroke of dark red around the letters- Select the letter, and then click on the Stroke Box in your tool panel- Miss Palmer

]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843059 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843093 I like the colors and design of the word, it really adds to the meaning of the word. ]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843093 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843115 I like the color choice. maybe make the word a little bigger. KM]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843115 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843183 I really like the font of the H and T and I like how you emphasized the two O's.
Maybe you can add a background color instead of white.
ER]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843183 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843285 I look the shape and the line under the word. I would change the back round color to black. BS]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843285 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843292 I like the color choice to make it appear like bees but I think you could alter the letters. Maybe make them jagged? SJL]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843292 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843365 This is really really good the colors, shapes and everything works great together 
WH]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843365 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843367 the design is fantastic and i love the shadow/dark colors. i personally don't think you have to change anything. KM]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843367 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843368 I like how it looks like a comic book
AM]]> 2017-02-06 15:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843368 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843412 I like the period at the end, but I would add a circle or something around the word to bold the word a little more. 
-AC]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843412 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843515 I like how you emphasized your letters, maybe you could add a shadow effect to make the word pop out more. MB]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843515 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843517 Vey well done. Be more creative!
TM]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843517 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843575 I like the H and the O's, but I think you should do some more stuff with the T and add a background color. NB]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843575 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843647 Maybe make the letters thicker, like the B, also maybe add something around the word
AM]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843647 tph191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843671 This looks like the cover of a scary movie TH]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843671 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843762 i love the simplicity so far, and a suggestion is maybe add some horizontal motion lines maybe? -ys]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843762 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843768 2017-02-06 15:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843768 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843779 I really love the texture you've created with the scribbles and I love that it reminds me of bacon. Maybe put some use of the circle in the pack, like make it a pan? Add sizzle steam coming up?
SJL]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843779 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843850 2017-02-06 15:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843850 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843878 like: misty effect 
change: maybe make Poof more opaque
JL]]> 2017-02-06 15:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843878 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843907 Absolutely filthy. No constructive criticism.
TM]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843907 pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843965 I like how the letters where scattered! I would suggest making them a bit bigger, or some of the letters a bit bigger and, as said before, alter some of the letters to give it more of a sound. MT]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151843965 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844015 i really like the oval in the back and the color scheme but maybe you could add a bit more emphasis on your words like steam or zig zags to look like its crackling. 
MK]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844015 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844145 I like the letters and the effects. but you should add a background. NB]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844145 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844203 I feel like the background should be a different color, so the coloring of the word would stick out more. That or add outlines of to the word. ]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844203 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844274 Roar, this vroom is very agressive. needs work though. Ive seen better work from you. -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844274 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844333 I really like your design idea overall. The colors seem to all blend in a way and there's so much to look at. Maybe you could add an effect to the word to pop out so the audience can see that it's the main idea. -MB]]> 2017-02-06 15:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844333 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844373 2017-02-06 15:14:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844373 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844543 I like how you emphasized the "ACK" of the word
I think that you should add  color to the background or lines to the background.
ER]]> 2017-02-06 15:14:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844543 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844580 loving the way you sized the words differently to each other!! i agree with the above comments, maybe add a little more motion into them or make the second buzz a little more balanced like the first one? the fourth 'z' kinda throws me off a little... -ys]]> 2017-02-06 15:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844580 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844668 I like the pink because it reminds me of fairy dust, but If you want you can try and add some sparkles like pixie dust
-AC]]> 2017-02-06 15:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844668 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844718 I like how the letters are scattered but maybe add lines in between the letters like tangled string? BC]]> 2017-02-06 15:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844718 rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844755 Maybe add a background color
AM]]> 2017-02-06 15:14:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844755 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844893 like: font 
suggestion: make more complex
JL]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844893 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844970 I feel like a knife is hitting my skin! -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844970 pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844982 I like how the letters are jagged. I would suggest making the circle around the word more jagged as well. MT]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151844982 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845023 This is really good. you don't need to fix anything. NB]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845023 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845255 i like how you made the word go diagonal across the page, but why are the O's grey? Also, change up the words. KM]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845255 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845262 I like how you did the shape of the letter O, maybe you could change the style of the letters to get a better of what vroom feels like. Also maybe add some shadow. MB. ]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845262 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845310 Like the size changes in Z's. Am i watching the bee movie or something?? -Chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845310 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845416 Quality colors and sends message. Make ore readable not a chirp.
TM]]> 2017-02-06 15:16:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845416 eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845597 -AC]]> 2017-02-06 15:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845597 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845970 Ugh. Love the period, great addition. simple is better. -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151845970 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151846053 i agree with the comments about the texture! also the sizzle steam/cackling sounds pretty good and maybe move the text a little down if that's added? -ys]]> 2017-02-06 15:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151846053 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151846623  Add a magican wand! -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151846623 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151847106 Make th word bigger? -Chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151847106 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151847293 what does that even mean -chamoun]]> 2017-02-06 15:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/xvzvae7tfh3n/wish/151847293