by penny dee

Sparks Animation

pennydee_eastbu — 2015-05-21 08:26:00 UTC

please tell me what you think of my animation.

cameronharris15 — 2015-05-21 08:31:42 UTC

I like the idea of having the lines colliding and creating fireworks. The sound effects also go well when they collide. Maybe you could add in an effect after they collide, something like a shower

of fireworks. The use of drawing, going through the keyframes has come off as very effective. The text is a little hard to read at the start (mainly the p). Other than that its good.

djwhite11 — 2015-05-21 08:36:02 UTC

Excellent piece of animation, the use of making the lines explode into a little shower like explosion is really good and

effective. However I don't get the little blue circle that goes diagonally it looks a tiny bit miss-formed.

sjholcroft1997 — 2015-05-21 08:36:04 UTC

Very good animation, the sound effects were very good too. However think a different font would have made the text a little easier to read

danielappleton9 — 2015-05-21 08:44:21 UTC

I think the sound effects worked well with the animation however I think the font could have been changed to make it clearer

2015-05-21 08:46:07 UTC

I liked the sound effects and the good use of colors and I like the firework bit at the end.

There was a gap in the middle where there was no sound.

2015-05-21 08:47:40 UTC

Nice animation penny mate, flows really nice and

I like the colours. However you could have maybe found better

sound effects in my opinion.

2015-05-21 08:55:40 UTC

Solid stuff Penny D. The sound effects work very well and are well timed, and the animation itself flows smoothly. The use of different colours makes it appealing.

2015-05-21 09:01:53 UTC

This is a very charming piece, the sound effects are superb and the animation is very pretty on the eye, nice little experimental piece here, i <3 it

2015-05-21 09:15:12 UTC

thoroughly enjoyed pen bae

2015-05-21 09:20:16 UTC

made me so happy i almost forgot that i hate my life and everything in it