"The Censors" Planning 8/9 by Franziska Federico https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo Censors en-us 2017-10-10 13:10:40 UTC 2017-10-10 18:40:33 UTC hello@padlet.com Vanessa Collado, Zully Iturbide, Abigail Huitzil vanessa306130 https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760434 We think paragraph two is best for portraying conflict since in this paragraph Juan goes through the thought process of realizing what censorship offices do when examining a letter that is about to be sent to another individual.

We think paragraph eleven is best for portraying aspects of Juan's character since in this paragraph, the author is analyzing Juan's characteristics after being employed by the Censor's Secret Command. Juan goes through the phase of being glued to his job, knowing what his real purpose was.]]> 2017-10-10 18:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760434 Gaby and Kiara https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760545 Paragraph two best shows conflict because Juan is afraid that him or Mariana will get in trouble because of the letter he sent to her. 

Paragraph 11 best shows aspects of Juan's character because it shows his loyalty to his job and that he couldn't get distracted regardless of the consequences that came. ]]> 2017-10-10 18:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760545 Jenna McDonough, Alexander Valadez jenna27852 https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760638 Showing  aspects of Juan’s character - Juan snicthes on a coworker, so it looks better on him. (Paragraph 7)

Showing Conflict- Juan had censored his own letter, making him get in trouble, and executed.
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]]> 2017-10-10 18:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760638 Carolina and Kimberly - Conflict & Character https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760666 1) We think paragraph 2 is best for showing conflict because it demonstrates what troubles Juan, which is the probability that the letter will bring harm to him and/or Mariana. 
2)  We think paragraph 7 is best for showing Juan's character since it reveals how Juan acts as an independent individual, acting on his own term, but also selfish, only looking out for himself. ]]> 2017-10-10 18:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760666 Dishant https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760749 I think paragraph 2 best demonstrates the conflict due to the fact that this is the paragraph where Juan realizes that he wrote a letter to Mariana that may get censored and he needs to get it back. The letter consisted of person data, in which he made his mission to retrieve the letter. Paragraph 7 best describes Juan's character because Juan snitches on another worker from striking, which raises his wage and rank for his job, showing his self centered attitude ]]> 2017-10-10 18:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760749 Dev & Seoane https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760822
  • Paragraph two best shows conflict because in this paragraph Juan realizes that his letter is going to get censored which is something he doesn't want to happen. This indicates the conflict of the story.
  • Paragraph 4 best shows aspects of Juan's character because in this paragraph Juan applies for the Censorship to uncensored his letter. This action of Juan reveals some aspects of Juan's character. In this case it is that he is a determined person since he is going to apply for the censorship to make sure his letter doesn't get censored.




    • ]]>     2017-10-10 18:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760822     Sandra and Grace https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760931 We think paragraph 1 is best for showing the conflict because it explains that Juan was caught off guard and that's why he was having a bad day. We also think that paragraphs 2 and 7 is best for showing aspects of Juan's character because in paragraph 2 he is caring at first but then in paragraph 7 when he applies for the job he becomes selfish as he continues to save his own skin.]]> 2017-10-10 18:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195760931 Perla & Sophia https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761054 Paragraph two is best for showing conflict because in this paragraph Juan realizes that his letter is going to get censored and he doesn't want Mariana to get into trouble because of his letter.

    Paragraph four is best for showing aspects of Juan's character because in this paragraph that Juan is determined to get his letter back because he even got a job at the censorship office to get his letter back]]>     2017-10-10 18:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761054     Emily S., Juan, Ethan juan302540 https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761180 We think paragraph two is best for showing conflict because in sentence six it states " and that's why Juan is so troubled: Thinking that something might happen to Mariana because of his letters." This is conflict because it shows how Juan worries over Mariana.

    We think paragraph eleven is best for showing aspects of Juan's conflict  because it says "any distraction could make him his edge and the perfect censor had to be alert, keen, attentive, and sharp to nab cheats." 

    ]]>     2017-10-10 18:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761180     Nidhi, Litzy, and Isabella nidhi24438 https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761206 We think paragraph 7 is best for showing aspects of Juan's character because this paragraph is about Juan snitching on one of his coworkers ho desired to start a strike. This paragraph shows how Juan is a self-centered person and cares more about himself than others. Also, we believe paragraph 2 and 3 shows the conflict because these paragraphs explain Juan's conflict and problem of having to worry about a letter being sent out. The letter contained confidential information and Juan's conflict was getting the letter back and making sure that his letter did not get censored.]]> 2017-10-10 18:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761206 Roselyn & Alondra https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761240 We think paragraph 1 is best for showing conflict because it's saying that Juan can't keep his mind off the letter that he mailed to Mariana which is not letting him sleep. We also believe paragraph 7 is best for showing his character because he did not join the strike and instead reported his coworkers to get a promotion which shows that he only cares about himself.]]> 2017-10-10 18:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195761240 Miguel Perez & David Lopez https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195763917 1. Paragraph 1 is the best for showing conflict because this is where Juan realizes that his letter will get checked and it could get  Mariana in trouble.
    2. Paragraph 4 is the best because Juan's aspects because in this paragraph he applies to Censorship to uncensored the letter. ]]>     2017-10-10 18:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195763917     Monique G./ Reyna G. https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195764322 Paragraph 1 best shows conflict because Juan was found out he was getting his letter censored, which is something he doesn't want to happen.
     Paragraph 4 best shows Juan's character because Juan gets a promotion, meaning he can receive his letter to censor. This shows that he is determined because he works hard for a promotion so his letter doesn't get censored by anyone else.]]>     2017-10-10 18:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195764322     Angel Mejia https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195764332 Paragraph 1 is the best for showing conflict because it shows how Juan is struggling with the letter and being very concerned with censoring it.]]> 2017-10-10 18:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195764332 Nelson https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195765668 I think paragraph 3 best shows the conflict in the story as the part where Juan writes Mariana a letter but has to join the post office service to censors it.]]> 2017-10-10 18:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195765668 Emily & Ambar https://padlet.com/ffederico/xupdv7s3sgpo/wish/195766608  
    I believe paragraph 7 is best for showing aspects of Juan's character because it shows how Juan is selfish and will throw anyone under the bus to get where he wants to get. I also believe paragraph 4 is best for showing conflict because it shows/reveals the plan that Juan has and how he picked the job only to "intercept his own letter" as stated in the text.
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