https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique Observing Art Critique : Prof. Clara Lieu and Deepti discussing Yukti's work en-us 2020-07-27 08:34:49 UTC 2020-07-27 10:18:42 UTC hello@padlet.com anezkaanjanet https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663181059 One of the art critics told that the artist was very thoughtful]]> 2020-07-27 09:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663181059 anezkaanjanet https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182396 - The blue color used for binding the menstrual pads sticks too much
- Day 1's menstrual pad doesn't really show the feel of agony and there isn't much contrast between the books other than the text and shape.]]> 2020-07-27 09:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182396 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182724 One of the critics said that the artist is very thoughtful because the artist puts her experience into her art ]]> 2020-07-27 09:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182724 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182915 One of them said that the clear box shows that the pads are being preserved (when it's technically a trash). But the fact that the box is transparent shows that it is not confined. ]]> 2020-07-27 09:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182915 anezkaanjanet https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182923 - It's better to use a color that doesn't draw too much attention for the binding, like beige
- To emphasize the agony feeling in Day 1, maybe spill blood over and show intense kind of shock feeling or rip the book to shreds or just something more dramatic.]]> 2020-07-27 09:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663182923 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663183314 One of the art critics said that it was very thoughtful for the artist to drag/input their personal experience, which it have a more powerful impact. ]]> 2020-07-27 09:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663183314 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184089 One of them also said that it shows Yukti's personal experience even though period is common for girls. It also lowkey point out that period should not be a taboo (in this context, in India), shown by the Hindi texts. ]]> 2020-07-27 09:35:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184089 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184799 - The form of the sculpture does not really represent a book. 
-  remove the 'day 1, 2, 3 and' since the artwork already show a sequence/progression between each of the "book". 
- the color of the string (blue) that she use to make the "book".]]> 2020-07-27 09:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184799 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184950 -the form doesn't represent a book]]> 2020-07-27 09:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663184950 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663185911 - removing the "day 1, 2, 3,, 4" because the artwork already shows the progression of time 
- the usage of the color of the tampon string is too bold]]> 2020-07-27 09:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663185911 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663185988 one of the critic said that all aspects of the artwork was very toughtful. they also said that it was very rebelious and brave for her to put her own experience even though it was a very taboo subject in her culture]]> 2020-07-27 09:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663185988 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663186159 through the conversation and discussion between the professors and the comments, it seems like the context plays a big part in the value since periods are taboo in india and the comments are bringing out the fact that women in poverty are ]]> 2020-07-27 09:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663186159 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187073 The idea of interpreting the feeling when the artist was on period to an artwork is very interesting. The use of Hindi plays a big role in the artwork. Not only represent her identity but also give a cultural knowledge where that topic is a taboo in India.]]> 2020-07-27 09:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187073 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187111 one of the artist said that the amount of blood in that sanitary napkind was minimal and then overwelming in the box. where it will be great if the artist can bridge those two that would make sense to the artist.]]> 2020-07-27 09:43:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187111 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187762 The idea of the artworks are very thoughtful and i think that it is very, bold of her to take on the concept.]]> 2020-07-27 09:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663187762 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663188443 -]]> 2020-07-27 09:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663188443 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663190949 removing the text
the bold color of blue ]]> 2020-07-27 09:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663190949 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663192305 to change the background color of the artwork so it shows the blood spilling over ]]> 2020-07-27 09:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663192305 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663194840 The blood is to overwelming on the box which seeing the blue in the napkind just suprise or feel it not belong there.]]> 2020-07-27 10:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663194840 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663195225 the artist can just put less of the blue in the napkind so it not that suprices by having less or use it to make a text.]]> 2020-07-27 10:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663195225 https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663198156 the artist should've use a more natural and not bold color (like beige or white) for the string so it wouldn't be too emphasised. ]]> 2020-07-27 10:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kania_yuliandini/artcritique/wish/663198156