https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4 en-us 2016-05-31 11:17:34 UTC 2025-12-21 13:03:50 UTC hello@padlet.com jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113153736 Good power point information was easy to read.
REally good explanation of the bones and the role of the skeleton.

Good to see both of you sharing the presentation. 

Enjoyed the information provided on broken bones.

Overall a very thorough well planned presentation. Good job boys!

Time : 6.18]]> 2016-05-31 11:24:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113153736 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113153934 nice brief explanation Jonte, your voice is clear and easy to understand.

Fun facts were good boys!

Good physical activity, i liked the way thst you linked heart rate to exercise and got the class to measure heart rate. It was also good that you compared resting heart rate to exercising heart rate. 

Riley you need to contribute to the presentation.

Time: 6:59


]]> 2016-05-31 11:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113153934 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113154002 Good work boys liked the quick explanation ]]> 2016-05-31 11:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113154002 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113154563 good info page - and good overview and fun facts. Explained the information on the powerpoint really well.

Good quiz at the end to reinforce the concepts of the respiratory system.
 Tom P you need to be more involved and have some form of speaking role.

time: 4:19]]> 2016-05-31 11:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113154563 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113243753 Please write your name and feedback for the presenters.
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Note: Keep comments appropriate and sensible.

Mr Behan - Alright presentation next time try to be cooler]]> 2016-05-31 21:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113243753 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553554 2016-06-03 02:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553554 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553676 TOM AND TOM
Good start try to memorise it a bit better and not just read of the screem. good job getting the audience involved and their was some interesting 
SAM AND ETHAN 
Great job guys it wasnt A+ standard but it was good you coulve learned it a bit better and not read of the screen but good facts 

MIKE AND FAQUAR
Yeah good use of swapping the talking and some crazy pics. You guys are good speakers and try to speak a bit louder but you guys put in your best effort and thats all that counts. I commend on your presentation. Next time work on your punctuation and grammer i appreaciate your efforts fantastic job.

FAB EZ AND JOSH
WEll you guys tried your best but the presentation just wasnt the most organised one. Try and brearth and slow down as you talk and just look into the audiences eyes. Very good effort but try to know the talk better i hope you take this as feedback and not critical. use this to inspire you and motivate you good job boys.



]]> 2016-06-03 02:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553676 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553836
you need to say something different to what ]]> 2016-06-03 02:27:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113553836 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113554248 good ppt but maybe Tom VG could yalk a little more ]]> 2016-06-03 02:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113554248 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113554289 Hayden!

Ethan & Sam

. The powerpoint is very appealing and the colours help with that
. Sam's voice projescts across the room very well and he shows where the bones are to help the audience
. They have highlited the important imformation the help us to learn about the skelital system
. The powerpoints and imformation is very well presented 
. The Presentation is to long and goes over 3 minutes which is the set maxium time of the presentation 
. They explain the imformation really well and that helps to learn about the skelton]]> 2016-06-03 02:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113554289 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739329 Mikey and Farquar - 
Mikey, tone was very good, interesting to listen to. power point was interesting to look at; could reduce the amount of writing on power point. video included was interesting and slightly weird. 

Josh, Fab and Ezra -
Could have revised speech to so it flows more. Don't just read of the Power point either, make some palm cards or read of a Computer. On the good side, there was a descent amount of information included and obvious amount of research.

Owen and Josh - 
Nice way of showing the digestive system, while keeping the audience engaged. Again, a bit of practice would have let you speak clearer and let the speech flow more easier. video was a good way of keeping the audience engaged. Josh could have been a bit more engaged in speaking. 

Jai and Hayden -  
Jai needs to speak slower so he is more comprehensible and look at the audience, not the white board. they could have done more than a few lines and a video. Hayden had a good tone and spoke clearly.

Noah and Marty - 
Both of your voices were well projected and clear, though you could have had more information both spoken and on the power point. Try and be more organised with your power point and lines.

Oscar and Lachie - 

Will and Jacob

Voices are well projected and clear, lots of information spoken. Power point had just the right amount on it and kahoot was a good addition







]]> 2016-06-06 04:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739329 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739330 MIKE,JAMES

nice PPT and well Presented 
Cool Video 
Great work ]]> 2016-06-06 04:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739330 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739352   
James/Mike: ]]> 2016-06-06 04:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739352 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739353 Mike and James: Try to have varied sentence structure. good info. good sharing speaking time. good video

Ezra, Fab and Josh: Good info. Try to put more emotion into your voice.

Will and Frank: Good amount of information. and good picture to reinforce the info. good work swapping talking. 

Josh and OWEN: good way of getting the class involved. YUM!!!!!!! LOLLIES!!! Lots of info. looks like you guys went to a lot of effort.

Jai and Hayden: Good funny video. very quick.

Marty and Noah: Try to be more organised.

Jacob and Will: Very well thought out. Will's voice carries very well.]]> 2016-06-06 04:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739353 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739357 mike and james f
that was a good powerpoint funny video!


josh L, fab, ezra
good info 
more eye contact would be better but powerpoint is good


frank and will PH
good info good eye contact
make sure you don't stand in the way of the powerpoint while presenting 
good presentation


]]> 2016-06-06 04:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739357 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739380
- Good opening and great use of scientific terms for different muscles

Enjoyed the pictures, some were quite funny and kept it interesting -balloon muscle man was my fave!

Content of presentation was relevant and informative

Video at the end was entertaining, overall a great presentation well done boys!


]]> 2016-06-06 04:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739380 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739382 Mike, James 
Mike needs to speak louder 
Great pictures and power-point 

Ezra, Fab and Josh.L
Need more eye contact and great power-point and at times speak louder

Frank and Will
Need more eye contact but great presentation

Jai and Hayden
Great presentation 

Noah and Marty
great speaking and grate presentation 
 ]]> 2016-06-06 04:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739382 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739390
could be a little louder 
and dont read off the screen 

good infomation]]> 2016-06-06 04:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739390 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739422 Mike and James
Good content
Good voice 
Why did you show us the video, what was the value? This isn't a criticism just a curious question
Fab, Ezra, Josh L
Copy and pasted 
You couldn't read some words
No eye contact
Voice stopped and started
Read off power point (pointless) because we can read
Frank and Will
Great content 
Good information
Good clear voices
Bit more eye contact
Owen and Josh

]]> 2016-06-06 04:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739422 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739532 Good work]]> 2016-06-06 04:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739532 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739539 EZRA,FAB,JOSH L


be more organised
MORE ORGANISED
Practice PPT
ALL PRACTICE PPT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice PPT



]]> 2016-06-06 04:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739539 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739576 Power point slides had plenty of information - try not to just read straight of it

Try to limit the amount of text on the power points so that the viewers are not just reading the whole time 

Pictures were good in providing a visual explanation of the text

Josh need to make eye contact and engage with the class a little more

You had a lot of good information but need to work on presenting it in order to keep the class engaged and interested, maybe practice beforehand!]]> 2016-06-06 04:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739576 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739609 josh fab and ezra

good content very interesting

try not to copy and paste and learn the big words]]> 2016-06-06 04:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739609 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739645 2016-06-06 04:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739645 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739659
good job james and mike 

good :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)))::::::))))):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

good job josh ezra and fab 

good reading ezra and josh and fab 
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nice work josh and owen]]> 2016-06-06 04:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739659 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739673 fab, ezra and Josh 
Good information and powerpoint but you need to be more organised when switching roles and slides.

Will PH and Frank
cool information and rheotorical questions. fantastc switching between speaking and slides and you had a good tone but you could have been louder and slower. overall great presentation.

Owen and Will 
great powerpoint, amazing lollies and video activity. Great visuals and information. 

Jai and hayden 
good information, visuals powerpoint and video 

 Noah and Marty 
Noah your tone is really good and you know the facts and finformation really well. you seem so confident good on you. nice switching between each other and good information and powerpoint. 

Will jacob and bamford
Great powerpoint 

]]> 2016-06-06 04:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739673 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739749 will and frank

good power point and voice

i found the information very interesting and you knew the facts and powerpoint very well.

]]> 2016-06-06 04:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739749 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739775 Great introduction on the topic

Loud clear voices made it easy to hear and stay engaged; good tone of voice

Facts were relevant and interesting.

Good explanation of kidneys 
and the excretory system - linked really well with the prac!

Try not to just read of your script - give palm cards a shot next time, overall though a really good presentation!]]> 2016-06-06 04:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739775 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739819 WILL PH,FRANK
good PPT
look at everyone more 
Overall great presentation]]> 2016-06-06 04:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739819 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739883
frank and will 

good info and powerpoint!

good volume and well rehersed 

josh and owan 

nice lollies 

first video was a bit dull 

second vid was good 

Jai + hayden 

JAI SPEAK LOUDER 

video was good

noah + martine  

a bit short but good info 

maybe speak a bit louder 

]]> 2016-06-06 04:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739883 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739949 owen and josh

the powerpoint was very good and the facts were very relevant.

i liked the idea of making the audience involved by giving them food. it was very yummy]]> 2016-06-06 04:26:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739949 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739957 Noc

Frank and will
Great powerpoint good infomation and great eye contact 
good prezi joshhhh and owen ]]> 2016-06-06 04:26:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113739957 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740002
Owen/Joshua: cool idea, need to take less time to get the video. interesting facts, 
need to talk about, you look like you don't want to be there Owen, look more alive.

Hayden/Jai 
too quick, slow down more eye contact.

Marty/Noah: be more prepared, didn't finish or wasn't saved.

Oscar/Lachlan

Will/Jacob: you are well prepared,]]> 2016-06-06 04:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740002 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740008 Great way to hand out lollies and discuss digestion - love your work boys! Was a great way to link digestion and put it into a practical context

Just be aware of technical difficulties like the video not working, maybe have it already loaded on the internet or downloaded in future to avoid any difficulties

Good way to compare two different digestives systems between snakes and humans.

Enjoyed the way that you discussed the snake video as it played. 
Really good presentation, very engaging and informative. 


]]> 2016-06-06 04:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740008 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740068 owen and josh

lollies good idea]]> 2016-06-06 04:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740068 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740128 good presentation 

]]> 2016-06-06 04:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740128 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740292 HELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHELOHEL]]> 2016-06-06 04:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740292 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740350 2016-06-06 04:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740350 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740438 Great start it was good to see you explain the organs & their function.

The video linked really well with the information on your power point slides.

Informative presentation boys enjoyed the way you used visual stimulus to keep the class engaged. Well done. ]]> 2016-06-06 04:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740438 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740591 good info and video

good voice and you were very confident in the word you were saying]]> 2016-06-06 04:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740591 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740774 Great use of powerpoint and animations - i enjoyed that you put each dot point up one at a time and discussed it so not to overload the viewers.

Great confidence and tone of voice from both of you.

Covered all the necessary concepts which was really good to see. 

Next time make sure you have completed the task so you don't get stuck up there.]]> 2016-06-06 04:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740774 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740960 very good PowerPoint Noah and Marty ]]> 2016-06-06 04:44:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740960 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740996 2016-06-06 04:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113740996 jareddroza1 https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113741225 Good use of pictures and power point slides

Definitions were clear and consistent with what we have learned in class time

The kahoot was a great way to keep the class engaged

Short and sharp presentation, good work boys]]> 2016-06-06 04:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jareddroza1/xtxdpzoq2wy4/wish/113741225