I was a bit distracted by the cuddly toys :)

The background is the only thing I think requires any form of improvement. Maybe something more RELATED might do.......

EBI: if you had a background similar to the topic

EBI - didn't notice a link to a specific SDG

EBI - Carl said 'like' too much and alpha didn't speak a lot.

EBI: had graphs,images and visuals to represent what you mean by “Artist work”

Their performance in the presentation was truly something extraordinary. Their portrayal was both deep and authentic, drawing out a wide range of emotions that resonated with me on a personal level. Every line they delivered, every glance, and each movement on stage felt purposeful and heartfelt. They had an incredible ability to embody their character fully, showing both strength and vulnerability. It was as if they weren't just acting but living the character's journey, which made it impossible not to get emotionally invested in their story. This presentation really made me rethink about the environment and I enjoyed it!

Too many sharks ;)

EBI: included the graphs at the starting to support your argument and it would overall make more sense and also follows the structure well

Only Nathan really talked and Austin barely talked

EBI - include more statistics and local relevant information

EBI: used statistics to support your points,made eye contact, and presented as a whole group not just one person

Only small thing would be less reading direct from the slides but that's very minor!

Not preferring the reading off the slide though.

A lot of text, not easy for the audience, try to only include key info on slides then say the rest!

and talk with a good loud voice

EBI: maintained eye contact for more engagement, if you explained how your SDG is effecting the environment

The presentation could do with being a bit more inspiring visually.

u could have added some maps or graphs

EBI: some group members maintained eye contact for engagement, and didn’t speak quietly