4 - very engaging and seamless, title and author are clear

4 - the emotional arc is clear over the video, it goes from hesitant and excited to exuberant and demonstrative

3 - the imaginary Barry in the center could be clearer

3 - performers are making a very clear and consistent choice by putting their hands into the center but not everyone is doing it correctly

4 - very dynamic vocal choices being made

4 - every character in the performance transitions from squatting to standing and the vocal transitions align with the physical ones

4 - everyone genuinely seems to be hyped

4 - Go Barracudas!

2- the teaser clearly presents the title, author, and tone with confidence, however the transition from the teaser to the introduction lack innovation and the characters could use more difference to show how the person driving the car is different from our protagonist

2- while the story arc is very clear along with emotional shifts that follow the story, the story didn't feel like it was building up into a climax with the car crash scene and seem too fast paced

2- choices are clear with the usage of the the rake, holding the basket and driving the car but did not show the transition of the scene well enough to show that the instrument holding was gone when entering Ti-moune's song

3- the whole body was used to bring the character to life with the initial depiction of farmers to Timoune with her hands together praying

3- voice is very emotionally expressive with song and also later when shouting for help of the car crash with a contrast to the deeper storytelling voice at the start

2- characters are distinguishable with Timoune being more up overall in body while the storyteller at the start is low and bent down, though popping is very distinct (though as I have very few characters I don't feel like smooth popping is that much needed, as I think obvious popping is a better fit choice for this piece?)

3- the performance displays very confident delivery and a fully committed performance as all the blocking is smooth and each transition is unique

3- the singing definetly gives a strong impression and the piece is very emotionally resonant. It is cohesive and flows despite being a bit fast along well. With so many actions and transitions, can see that much blocking is done to achieve this piece and had to be polished and gone through many times to achieve this result.

3 - kind of engaging? confidence is enough but should be more immersed into the performance itself

3 - the two characters' emotions are cast to be slightly different but cadence of the performance can potentially be improved

3 - not much use of environment, only the use of a cup of tea; maybe imagine myself in a living room or sth. to make the action more solid

4 - the two characters are characterized with different heights and eye positions are different

2 - voice isn't that dynamic and differentiation of two characters' voices are not that notable

4 - the props are not unnatural and are smooth

3 - maybe be more engaged into the performance, currently not so dedicated into action

3 - the transition between pieces is fine but can be better

2 the teaser includes the info needed for the piece of title and author and the general intro of what the piece is about, but there’s a lack of confidence due to pratice.

2 The 2 narrators have relatively different characterization, but I’m not very good at acting, so it still feels like I’m just being myself instead of authentic acting…

4. There are engagement with the space, but still have to work on the transitions

3. There’s distinct trait for each character, and there are also eye contacts between each character in terms of space

3. Kind of, not really. The second narrator’s voice could be deeper. The little girl’s voice is fine.

3. The popping is not so clear, because narrator 2 has a lot of large movements, so it’s hard to transit immediately to narrator 1, who has a more stationary moevement

4. The performance is still not that authentic since the lines are not fully memorized, so there are moments that I need to stop from the acting and try to remember the lines.

4. The message is clear with the help of narrators. Since the topic of this piece of fairy tale is more well known, the piece is generally appealing.

4 - interesting and humorous plot with funny moments. Lots of plot changes to make it engaging. Monkey King’s soliloquy, his birth as a rock, and the elder monkey showing how he doesn’t belong.

3 - Emotional shifts are present but doesn’t quite build naturally. Strong moments are present, but not sure if audience can relate. At the end, pointed out that Monkey King doesn't belong.

2 - Unclear environment with different pages and lacks constant interaction.

3 - generally appropriate character with very idyllic monkey king and more sarcastic and mean side characters. There’s consistent character changes. Lots of dynamic movement.

2 - monkey king has less change but narrator and other characters have some variety in tone. Unsure if vocal choices enhance performance. Emotional control is unclear.

2 - popping is weird and consists of unclear changes that interrupt the flow. Characters don’t differ as much.

3 - actors are committed and tried to convey emotions and has blocking. Not super confident.

3- Go Leon! Mostly polished speech with some structure, not cohesive and emotionally resonant enough.

3 - teaser and introduction have all the required components, but the transition can be better

2 - the emotional arc is developing a bit too fast, leading to some confusion but the story is still presented

3 - objects were used but more space can be employed to enhance the performance

3 - physicality is generally consistent and appropriate but there can be more to it

3 - voice is being used to express character but t can be more dynamic and strong

3 - no popping because there are only two characters but the characters are distinguishable

3 - strong focus throughout and believable character moments but need more consistency

3 - mostly structured and complete with some issues in delivery

4-The teaser is very interesting as it introduces the main characters and demonstrates the zombie apocalypse concept. The title and author are clear in the introduction.

3- While emotion was clear, there aren’t any highs and lows yet.

3-For the teacher and the student scene, the placement of the eraser and chalk could be clearer.

4-Different characters have different physical gestures.

4-There are vocal differences between different characters and different tones.

3- Popping could be faster and more smooth.

4-Full energy with great focus.

3-Piece is well structured and polished but could be a little bit more interesting.

3 The teaser connects well to the piece and includes all the required info but it’s not as engaging.

2 The emotions for different pieces of literature aren’t as distinct, kind of underdeveloped.

3 I should have used the folder as a prop and show more interactions with the environment.

4 The scene with the 2 characters is well performed showing differentiation of character traits for the 2 characters.

3 Voice is clear and expressive but not extremely emotional expressive.

4 shifts in characters is clear.

4 The performance is committed and flows smoothly. The delivery is confident.

3 The performance is well structured with different pieces of literature presented. It could be more polished and the emotions could be more expressive.