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msmileyclass — 2021-11-22 04:16:52 UTC

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msmileyclass — 2021-11-22 04:17:35 UTC

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msmileyclass — 2021-11-22 04:18:09 UTC

TOPIC 1

2021-11-22 04:21:18 UTC

I strongly believe in the fact that human development has negative impacts on controlling gases from the greenhouse because of the following reasons. Firstly, human policies with purposes of developing like urbanization, cutting down trees for buildings,... have contributed to the increasing level of emissions (carbon dioxide, ozone,...) emitted which may cause climate change badly. Furthermore, the daily amount of waste that people have in the production process discharged into the environment can not be controlled leading to pollution. For example, packages from e-commerce companies would be a big problem in wasting amount. To sum up, although it is a good sign for improving human lives, it still affects greenhouse gases in some aspects.

Wang

quangnmss170783 — 2021-11-22 04:21:52 UTC

Topic 1:
Topic sentence:
It is positive that greenhouse gases can totally be controlled because of several reasons. To begin with, there are already several(a number of) organizations and government-oriented works that were created to deal with the problem. For example, the latest team by the name of #TeamSeas that was announced(endorsed) by celebrities are carrying out a campaign focusing on purifying the air and also on planting trees. Additionally, there is also a trend at the moment for people to use bio-friendly products and be vegan, causing the rate of humans emitting greenhouse gases to go downward. (EXAMPLE)For instance, by using the "fake" meat in restaurants, McDonald has lowered half of the Carbon Dioxide in there production lines, thus, make the products come out cheaper and also save the ecosystem more. Overall, greenhouse gases can be controlled without a doubt.

already sevral=> a number of
was endorsed by celebrities

Topic 4: Living in a city is bad for our health. _mikneiht_

2021-11-22 04:22:10 UTC

I strongly disagree with the idea of living in a city is bad for our health because of some reasons. Firstly, there are many modern facilities such as prestigous hospital, medicine, etc. Therefore, when people are sick, they have the best condition to cure and take care of your health. Secondly, people live in a clean, comfortable and modern accommodation, so their health is guaranteed. Thirdly, a lot of people study well and have knowledge about how to take care of theirself, skincare or have a healthy lifestyle. EFFECT PLEASE To sum up, in my opinion, those who live in a modern city can live healthy and the idea "living in a city is bad for our health" is not true.

TOPIC 3 : SOCIAL RESPONSIBILITY NOT COMPANY ITSELF

2021-11-22 04:22:19 UTC

Nowadays, some people believe that all companies should have corporate social responsibility . Personally , I agree with this statement for the following reasons .

SỮA HỘT GÀ

2021-11-22 04:22:31 UTC

TOPIC 4 :
I disagree with the idea that living in a city our health can be decreased because it has a lot of health improvement technology and a lot of advanced hospitals than the countryside. Firstly, with the modern technology and high-quality life, the city has a big problem that makes a negative impact on the environment and is harmful to our health, so many stores sell health-promoting products to improve our lives at different prices. Everyone can buy that and put it in their life to make their health improve. For example, if you buy the air purifier and put it in your home or your work, the air will be purifiers and your nose can be breathing clean air. Secondly, the countryside does not have enough hospitals, especially advanced hospitals. Opposite the city has a lot of that, people can heal and take care of their health every month at the hospital, there is much modern technology to take note and find your health's problem to heal at the right time. So, that is why I disagree with the idea that living in a city is bad for our health.

nguyenlss170697 — 2021-11-22 04:22:52 UTC

I totally agree with the idea of our health will be bad when we live in a city because of some reasons. First of all, there are many transportation in a city this leads to air pollution and sound pollution. Second, the food is not clear because in the city, the food is imported from many where, they are not tested. Third, there are a large population, it will occur a lot of society's evils like racing, stealing, etc. In conclusion, living in a city is bad for our health.

topic 2

2021-11-22 04:23:08 UTC

I entirely disagree with the fact that spending time studying history and philosophy is time-consuming, based on several reasons. The first reason is getting more bits of knowledge of culture. If we don't study history, we won't know how the world significantly changes, ancient customs, become more and more modern. furthermore, philosophy gives a broader view of the field of science. secondly, learning philosophy has a thorough view. for example, children have to think obviously about their questions and brain development. in addition, it makes independent life. as a result, history, and philosophy can not lack off in study, they bring many advantages for recent life, making life much better.

linn

2021-11-22 04:23:22 UTC

Topic:1
I totally agree with the idea that human development has made greenhouse gases uncontrollable because of SOME reasons. Firstly, when people develop lead to economy also develops, so many companies were born= LIKE SPEAKING. Untreated factory emissions are discharged directly into the environment, that=> WHICH CAUSES cause air pollution. For example, ABC company specializes in the production of household appliances, and emissions during the production process are released into the environment without treatment for a long time. Which has seriously affected the atmosphere of that area, causing climate change.=> , WHICH Secondly, dust emitted from vehicles also contributes to air pollution and increases the amount of greenhouse gases. Therefor, the more people develop, the more the environment is threatened... (NO "...")

TOPIC: 4 - Linktree_nee

2021-11-22 04:23:27 UTC

The increase in factories, transportations and industrial factors led to serious air pollution in cities. I totally agree that those elements cause harm to our health
the increase of industrialization / industrial development can worsen air pollution/ air qulity in cities, which is harmful to our health.

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nganltss170859 — 2021-11-22 04:23:37 UTC

Topic 4:
Living in the city has numerous better conditions, so it is impossible to worsen people's health.

TOPIC 3

2021-11-22 04:24:02 UTC

Corporate social responsibility bring back so many benefits to company. That's why corporate social responsibility should be the priority for the company. First of all, corporate social responsibility help company to connect to society, it make = IT MAKES the company become more popular to everyone. Once the company is popular= BECOME FAMOUS/ WELL-KNOWN, it has created a good realtionship between company and customers. Moreover, corporate social responsibility help the revenue of the company increases day by day. For example, a company have corporate social responsibility increase their profit 100% after planting 10000 trees for environmental protection because people belive they are right for investting in this company. Beside that, corporate social responsibility also help company reduce the cost they have to pay, improve reputation, it will make employee feel more enjoyable and interested in the working environmental. In conclusion, corporate social responsibility is a good way to delvelop a company.

PotATo

thanhnnss170864 — 2021-11-22 04:24:07 UTC

Topic sentence (4):
As far as I am concerned, I completely side with this statement that living in city is bad for our health because of these reasons.

Vuy

2021-11-22 04:24:19 UTC

TOPIC: 1
TOPIC SENTENCE:
I totally agree with the idea THAT the human development impress / worsens/ increases greenhouse gases c~~annot be controlled~~ because of some reasons. First, a person produce or use waste electricity which make the greenhouse gases are emmited. For example, the forest exploitatiion make increse the carbon dioxide cause the desert is more wider and the land is eroded. Additionally, the carbon dioxide and methane are emitted by the human activities burn fossil fuels, power factories. To sum up, I think in spite of the fact that the life is improve, the greenhouse gases are badly affected.

Cá viên chiên

2021-11-22 04:24:21 UTC

Topic 2:
Studying history and philosophy subjects could give you several benefits in your future career for many reasons.
First of all, history and philosophy majors can help you practice some analytical and critical skills which are useful to develop your career. For example, if you are good at those subjects, you could have the ability to think logically, or you could analyze and solve problems much faster. Furthermore, you could be aroused patriotism by studying history and philosophy subjects. You will discover a lot of events, sacrifices of previous generations to protect our country.

Rạp Xiếc Trung Uơng

2021-11-22 04:24:58 UTC

topic 4
i totatlly agree with the idea that our health suffers because of living in the city.

topic 4

hoanglvss170849 — 2021-11-22 04:25:31 UTC

It is indisputable that city life is becoming more popular, nowadays. But it is argued that city life is not good for people health. However, I have parted with this occurrence

TOPIC 4

linhphss170900 — 2021-11-22 04:25:36 UTC

Life in the city has a lot of bad effects from the environment, which is harmful to our health.

The first reason is emissions pollution, the city is crowded with vehicles and factories, so all their activities why cause air pollution. In other words, we will be susceptible to lung diseases when living in polluted air. Second, our health will be threatened by dirty food. Due to some farms unwittingly use water contaminated with chemicals from factories for animals (pig, cow, chicken,...). To sum up, along with modern life in the city, there are many bad effects to our health.

Topic 4

2021-11-22 04:25:40 UTC

I totally agree with the idea that living in the city is harmful for our health, and here are some reasons. First of all, the air quality in urban areas is getting worse and worse. Smoke from industrial companies, from vehicles and this situation even more serious in developing countries. Air pollution not only effects our health but also effects our life conditions. Secondly, water pollution in cities touches alarming level. Water is an important part of our life, but citizens have to use it in an unguaranteed way. This may cause unpredictable problems to people's health. Last but not least, people in urban areas have to suffer from uncontrollable noise pollution. This kind of pollution affects both physical and mental health, leads to tons of time people feel dizzy and stress. To sum up, there are many factors in cities such as air, water, noise,.. are not qualified enough for people's physical and mental health.

Lan

2021-11-22 04:26:01 UTC

I choose topic 4.
I totally disagree with the statement that living in urban areas can be bad for people's health because of some reason. This paragraph will give insights into the health benefits when people live in metropolitans. Firstly, urban areas have a lot of living standards than the countryside. Living in a modern city inherits a lot of modern technology, schools, hospitals in that area. For example, when people get injured on-road or have a headache, they can go to the hospital rapidly with the ambulance instead of waiting for a long time. Secondly, the development technology in the urban place was born to support the people’s living conditions. Although many cities have a higher rate of population than that of other places and receive a lot of toxic dust, they always have the devices to filter those poisons. To sum up, living in a modern place is good not only for our health but also for our living standards.

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2021-11-22 04:26:11 UTC

Topic 4
Topic sentense : I disagree with the idea that living in a city is bad for our health because living in a city has many benefits ~~and good conditions~~ for us . First, living in the city will be convenient in all aspects, economic development is favorable for us in work and daily life. Secondly , we have a good learning environment , and when we graduate , it is easy to find a job with good salary , promoting our own capacity . Finally , we are entertained in amusement parks or watching movies , shopping . For example , when you are in the city you will enjoy good services , stress relief and many other benefits . However, when living in the city, we will have to try to overcome difficulties, challenges, and fierce competition in life. Conclusion, if you are a noisy person and want to get the most out of yourself, live in the city.

Mai

2021-11-22 04:26:12 UTC

TOPIC 3:
These days, people believe corporate social responsibility should be a requirement for all businesses that I completely agree with this opinion. => combine
On the one hand, I understand that businesses must create profit to maintain a competitive environment. Besides that, the company also has to pay expenses like employee salaries, office building, and other expenditures. Furthermore, to be successful, the business must continue to invest and improve in addition to these expenditures. If a business cannot afford to pay for and invest in additional development, it will be unable to contribute to society. Finally, when people have the high financial ability, the company may make a positive contribution to society.

Ú Là la

2021-11-22 04:26:25 UTC

TOPIC 4:
Topic sentence:
In my opinion, i believe that living in the city can brings up several benefits. To begin with, you can enjoy everything and have a convenient life when you live in the city. In the city, there are a lots of companies and citizens, however, it usually a lack of employees. With that, it is easy for you to find a job and enjoy the live in the city if you work hard. Secondly, the environment in the city is not as terrible as it look like. Even though the air and water pollution is a problem in thư city, it improving. For instance, the government is making a lots of idea to protect the environment. Moreover, there are many environment activities that fund raised by the government. In addition, the city is not bad as people always talk and the government is trying the best to make the city better.

Hồng Phước

2021-11-22 04:26:40 UTC

TOPIC: 4
TOPIC SENTENCE: Agree/Disagree
From my perspective, i strongly disagree that our health will be bad if we live in a city because of some reasons. It is obvious that the living condition in the city are always better than countryside, so if you live in the city, your life will be improved and better=> YOUR LIFE IMPROVES. You can get a great=> PROPER/ HIGH QUALITY/ TIMELY healthcare service. For instance, in the city, the distance from your house to hospital is very close so you can get there faster, but in the countryside it is so far because there are not many hospitals in the countryside. Moreover, you will get a high-paying => WELL-PAID job if you live in the city. In fact, It has a lot of foreign company t~~hat belong to foreigners~~ ; therefore, you can apply and make more money and improve your life. To sum up, living in a city is a great thing if you want to improve your life.

TOPIC 2

2021-11-22 04:27:06 UTC

- Topic sentence: ~~I strongly disagree with people who assume that you will waste your time because of learning history and phisolophy subject, which are said that have no value for our future.~~
- Body: First of all, history and philosophy subjects are both compulsory at school, which means a lot of experts agree that it is helpful for student who studies it. For instance, students who want to have a future job which is related to phisolophy or history, this subjects brings them a huge of experience and knowledge. Moreover, it helps us to more understand our life in different aspects. For example, the philosophy mentions a lot about our body and elements around us, besides that the history helps us to know more about our vibrant histories that we are always proud of. Taking everything into conclusion, i think that learning history and philosophy brings a lot of knowledge, benefits and it is definitely necessary for us.
Như

topic 2: l

2021-11-22 04:27:09 UTC

~~Many people, especially youth, assume that studying history and philosophy subjects have no effect on their future. I disagree with that statement.~~ There have been many case where people are ignorant or unwilling to learn from their or others past mistake and ended up repeating it. For example, you or your friend climbed a tree when you were ten and an accident happened and someone broke their foot. Twenty years later, suddenly you wanted to climb a tree again, instead of learning from prior experience you proceed with the impulse and this time you broke more than a foot. Study of history and philosophy subjects can give you a glimpses into the past about culture, politics, medicine....ect, to khow what is good and what is not, so that we can better improve our life as well as society and not replicating the same thing again.
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Flan

2021-11-22 04:28:15 UTC

TOPIC 3:
In my opinion, I strongly agree that corporate social responsibility should be had in all enterprises.

hngan

2021-11-22 04:28:51 UTC

TOPIC:4
TOPIC SENTENCE:
Living in the city is not bad for your health has several benefits, its beneficial for you in many ways
Nowaday, technology is changing fast that made our life is more modern and comfortable. First, living in city reducing each person's time and energy. For example, instead of you holding the broom , there is vacuum cleaners today. it is make your time decrease so much. Second, modern device make you relax like air scanner, support for your health like advanced hospital , modern shopping urban core sections. Increasingly, modern device have developed make our life better. so i think living in the city is good for your health.

Chau

2021-11-22 04:31:18 UTC

Topic 3:
People have different view about all companies should have corporate social responsibility. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. In my opinion, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a high salary to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. Second, businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support charity projects or education initiatives. In conclusion, I believe that companies should focus on their social responsibilities more than they do on their financial objectives

Topic 4

thanhnnss170864 — 2021-11-22 06:54:39 UTC

As far as I am concerned, i completely side with this statement that living in city is bad for our health because of these reasons. First of all, vehicle has been considered as the facilitation of being bad health due to their smoke. People had tended to use vehicle to go to work or play a lot. so it is one of the way that lead to air pollution. Apart from it, the social and econmic development has been regarded as the profound contribution of increasing the amount of grabage. Eventually, increase demand for accommodation that we have to cut down the tree to build either house or department. Hence, these are some reason which lead to air pollution in the city, so that is why living in city is totally bad for our health.

TOPIC 4

2021-11-22 07:01:06 UTC

I strongly agree with the idea of living in a city is bad for our healthy because of two reasons. Firstly, in the city, there are very modern technologies, which means there are many factories that will emit gases such as CO,CO2 that humans rarely enter, which i very harmful to health. Secondly, life here is very busy so people who have little time to exercise. Besides, work pressure also makes them mentally tired. To sum up, I think living in the city has many amenities, but environment pollution also affects your health a lot.

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chilnlss170734 — 2021-11-22 07:01:47 UTC

In spite of several convenient aspects of the living condition in the city.=> INCOMPLETE SENTENCE For the reasons, many pollution factors with our unhealthy inhabit are gradually damaging to our life. Firstly, the growth of technical transportation such as the numerous vehicles, motorcycle cars, ... which cause traffic jam also create air pollution. That have a serious impact on people’s respiratory system. Beside, the countless of transport facility is the main reason for noise pollution.
In context of convid pandemic nowadays, it can be seen that the increase of death related to unhealthy living condition . For example, many people spend a large of percentage for working while a day and do not take care of their both physiological and mental heath, why many people are easy to get diseases like osteoarthritis, eyesight, especially stomach ache.