Thomas Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Thomas Dowling https://padlet.com/26tdowling1/xrdawodv67xe Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:03 UTC 2019-12-10 15:23:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/438881043/4b6c1033df771cc65d81ed296c6788d2/download.jpeg 26jbjorklund https://padlet.com/26tdowling1/xrdawodv67xe/wish/422195398 I liked how he showed that evan was lazy at the beginning and he was not doing good at baseball and then near the end he was not so lazy and started practicing baseball to become better and they end up winning.I like how he made like a climax near the end when it was the World Series game. I like how he made excitement at the world series game and described what was happening with the crowd.I suggest that he should tell the readers about the setting at the stadium.

]]> 2019-12-10 15:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/26tdowling1/xrdawodv67xe/wish/422195398 26jbjorklund https://padlet.com/26tdowling1/xrdawodv67xe/wish/422198168 I like how he described the game in the beginning and what was happening
I like how he explained the ride on the way to his game with the white porsche
I suggest that he should shorten the first game a little bit
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