Aaliya’s Showcase 2021 by Aaliya https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021 Cats Health en-us 2021-11-14 22:32:17 UTC 2021-11-25 22:35:36 UTC hello@padlet.com Welcome to my Padlet (: azhou116 https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1889729910 2021-11-14 22:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1889729910 Mr H's Feedback choward109 https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1901296903 Home Page: 
  • Cats' Health
  • You need to mention what you are going to do about it. 
Photo Essay: 
  • A lot of these photos look the same. Try to tell a story. 
  • Include some photos about how to fix the problem. 
Infographic: 
  • You haven't mentioned that cat owners should get their cat fixed and should be registered!
Information Questions:


]]> 2021-11-19 04:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1901296903 Bibliography choward109 https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1903819126 Please update your bibliography. Use 'cite this for me' like I showed everyone on Friday. 

]]> 2021-11-20 20:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1903819126 Baylie Shen https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1905248049 You did a good job on explaining everything one I had a question, but you should have spent more time explaining, since you had 9mins left. 

Photo Essay:

- You could use some photos of your cats, since you are doing this because your two cats

Infographic:

- Last paragraph, needs a capital c
- Include more images

I like how you made food bowl and water bowl stand out

Information:

-Make the questions in bold 
- Explain the question in depth on website
- Add images
- the last paragraph, needs a capital c and the statistics need to be from Australia 

Call to Action:

- Add your petition
- Explain more ways we can help
-  Some of the information is not related to a call to action
- A suffering cat is not the best title image

Overall a very good effort!]]> 2021-11-22 04:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1905248049 Feedback https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907516465 I really liked it it’s just some sentences didn't make sense. And there’s some spelling mistakes. I agree with you I love cats and think they should be treated better :)

Catia Placanica :)]]> 2021-11-23 03:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907516465 Emily’s Feedback https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907520396 I found your presentation topic interesting and unique. Instead of choosing one of the known-about problems, like global warming or domestic violence, you chose to use cats health as your topic, which makes it very unique. I like how in your infographic, you showed us how to care for the cats and gave us suggestions. I can see you put effort into this, and i think it was an overall good job.]]> 2021-11-23 03:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907520396 Questions https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907531325 . What moments were you most proud of?
. What’s something that surprised you in your feelings for cats?
. What are some of the most interesting discoveries you made while working on this project?
. What are your first thoughts about this overall project? Are they mostly positive or negative?

Catia Placanica :)]]> 2021-11-23 03:58:57 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1907531325 Aashis feedback https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1913290355 This was amazing! Maybe When your explaining ur photo essay maybe explain what’s happening in the photos. ]]> 2021-11-25 22:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1913290355 https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1913290377 I think that your website was very well presented, one thing maybe you could do is research a bit more for the information page.]]> 2021-11-25 22:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/azhou116/showcase2021/wish/1913290377