Bespoke Session 4: Feedback 2 by CPD HELP https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh Please provide your comment for each section. en-us 2020-11-20 11:06:47 UTC 2024-10-01 07:08:13 UTC hello@padlet.com Drawing of the monkey helpcpd https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1892909629 2021-11-16 02:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1892909629 look disturbed https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987163 2021-11-19 12:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987163 Looks weird and lopsided leanjacqueline https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987420 2021-11-19 12:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987420 something wrong with the eyes and mouth https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987438 2021-11-19 12:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987438 looks confused https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987645 2021-11-19 12:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987645 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987668 Unsure if monkey or bear - looks confused

]]> 2021-11-19 12:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987668 nice bow https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987681 2021-11-19 12:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987681 CJ https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987732 Doesn't look like a monkey]]> 2021-11-19 12:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987732 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987733 confused]]> 2021-11-19 12:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987733 comical drawing https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987741 2021-11-19 12:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987741 unhappy face https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987778 2021-11-19 12:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987778 Monkey has simple shapes and colors with an interesting facial expression stephaniechia3 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987898 2021-11-19 12:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987898 looks upset margaretperry760 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987928 2021-11-19 12:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901987928 nice drawing of the impression https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988171 2021-11-19 12:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988171 i like how you added many details to make it look beautiful https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988172 2021-11-19 12:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988172 clean https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988184 2021-11-19 12:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988184 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988283 looks confused/ do not where to go..]]> 2021-11-19 12:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988283 the eyes and mouth need to adjusted https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988416 2021-11-19 12:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988416 How someone would look by the end of the working week!! aurorabernard https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988740 2021-11-19 12:56:35 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988740 Looks puzzled and confused. https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988800 2021-11-19 12:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988800 all the parts of the face is drawn well, at the correct place https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988843 2021-11-19 12:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988843 funny https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988848 2021-11-19 12:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901988848 everything in order https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989101 2021-11-19 12:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989101 more details / pics on wat led to this impression https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989152 2021-11-19 12:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989152 Good choice of colors and interesting details stephaniechia3 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989192 2021-11-19 12:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989192 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989321 Creative, very expressive in the eyes and mouth, showing a female monkey by having a bow]]> 2021-11-19 12:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989321 Love the bow on the head.... aurorabernard https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989348 2021-11-19 12:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989348 colourful https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989482 2021-11-19 12:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989482 how I look after a hectic day at work https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989536 2021-11-19 12:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989536 someone took effort and tried to draw a monkey the best they could https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989725 2021-11-19 12:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989725 be happy and go lucky https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989791 2021-11-19 12:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989791 CJ https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989934 More shapes and lines and colour is added, it actually helps to draw easily]]> 2021-11-19 12:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901989934 i can bounce back https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990024 2021-11-19 12:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990024 add other body parts https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990178 2021-11-19 12:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990178 can't think of any https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990239 2021-11-19 12:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990239 more attractive colour would be better https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990361 2021-11-19 12:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990361 i like it as it is - realistic https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990509 2021-11-19 12:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990509 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990551 red bow suits well!]]> 2021-11-19 12:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990551 put on a smile instead aurorabernard https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990583 2021-11-19 12:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990583 Drawing clearly shows confusion. https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990819 2021-11-19 12:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990819 make it smile https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990903 2021-11-19 12:57:52 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990903 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990909 Make it a happy face and put the bow in the centre to see both ears]]> 2021-11-19 12:57:52 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901990909 nearly perfect https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991584 2021-11-19 12:58:14 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991584 Proportions and shape of the head can be improved. Background can provide context for the facial expression stephaniechia3 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991929 2021-11-19 12:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991929 Maybe can add a word bubble. https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991982 2021-11-19 12:58:27 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901991982 pretty bow margaretperry760 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992112 2021-11-19 12:58:32 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992112 CJ https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992226 step by step guide will be helpful]]> 2021-11-19 12:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992226 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992644 return him back to his family.. then he will be "alright"]]> 2021-11-19 12:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992644 i love how you drew the monkey with a bow and next time you can try adding a body if you like https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992881 2021-11-19 12:58:56 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901992881 smiling face margaretperry760 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901993017 2021-11-19 12:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901993017 how we look like after a whole week of working christinaabigaildcruz https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901993439 2021-11-19 12:59:17 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/xpghxz2ey467k0jh/wish/1901993439