Build Your Paragraph. by MAYKELLYS HERRAN

Paragraph, Omar

omarsantiagogomez — 2025-11-07 01:02:26 UTC

Online education is becoming very popular around the world. First of all, many learners choose this option because it offers flexibility and comfort. Furthemore, students can learn from home using a computer or smartphone. Finally, it also helps people save time and money because they don’t need to travel to class.

Text, Omar

omarsantiagogomez — 2025-11-07 01:23:47 UTC

Writing well is essential for students in virtual learning nowadays. To begin with, let's start with the importance of have good communication with your classmates, and, to accomplish so, it is pretty relevant a good writing process. Next, when you write a good composition, you could improve your arguments and promote a critical thinking process for you and your readers. Moreover, a constant writing improvement makes you a better learner, that is so because you deep into new knowledge through investigation, and, finally, you would become better and more clear explaining your point of view to everyone. Let's improve our wiriting and enjoy our virtual learning process.

prompts

omarsantiagogomez — 2025-11-07 01:39:52 UTC

1. Today I learned that writing process needs cohesion, coherence in order to be clear and good.

2. In my next paragraph, I will improve my use of connectors and try to avoid repeating ideas to be more specific in what I am trying to express.

Passive voice without "by"

omarsantiagogomez — 2025-11-14 01:50:00 UTC

In my hands I have a cellphone. It's not brand new but I made a research before buying it. This phone is made in China, and it is made with a lot of digital components. Some of the parts of this phone are made of glass, copper and plastic. The body of the phone is made from recycled aluminum. It has several components made with high precision and high performance technology. I think I have a very good phone.

JULIO C

2025-11-26 01:08:19 UTC

In the city, I see many people every day on my way to work, and during rush hour there are always countless cars on the streets. On weekends, it’s common to see families and friends gathered, sharing drinks, and couples enjoying their time in restaurants. People here also tend to have many pets. All these scenes remind me that city life is fast, diverse, and full of movement, so staying organized and finding small moments to enjoy becomes essential.

Students.

2025-11-28 03:23:55 UTC

Online education is becoming very popular around the world because it offers many advantages. For example, Students can learn from home using a computer or smartphone. In addition, it helps people save time and money because they don’t need to travel to class. Therefore, many learners choose this option because it offers flexibility and comfort.