Were there any points that were confusing or unclear? How could they be made more understandable?

she also went through a divorce

-weini's voice was clear and loud she seemed very confident in presenting about Frida kahlo's artworks

-i think they described her artworks really well

The part where she talks about Frida Kahlo getting into a bus accident that broke so many bones in her causing her to rest in her bed for quite a long time.

She got into divorce and marriage again with the same person. Her husband cheated on her many times but she didn't care as well. Which made her express her pain and sorrows by using art.

I also feel that the way they added the descriptions in the slides were clear and i could understand it well. The way they all presented was clear and Ashley was smart to use the cards for her part in the presentation as there are many things she had to say.

Phyllis: Good that a clear idea of speech was memorised well.

Weini: Obvious that you are very knowledgeable about Kahlo's work. Voice was also very loud and clear, maintained a good balance of eye contact, and some nice incorporation of humor to engage the class.

Chee Xin: Voice was clear and understood what you were sayin, good use of hand gestures as well.

Overall, the slides and details of the artwork were very well thought out, information and art analysis was perfect. I could understand what they were trying to convey and teach. As a person who admires Frida Kahlo as a person and her work, this is a good presentation for people who are clueless/want to know more about her. Kahoot was lowk the best part

they also could have added more pictures.

should look at audience more

and i think more explanation would have been nice

Phylis presentation was interesting and informative, but was too short compare to her teammate.

Weini is creating good atmosphere during the whole presentation by being interactive/humorous. Especially in the Kahoot part.

Chee Xin is good at impromptu her speech. But can't see her talk too often.

The transition between the presenters is not smooth enough. Good to say that like 'now I'm going to pass the time to .." or something like that.

Phylis was kind of shy, but the slides for her part was not too bad. No comment except to be more confident and speak more interactively with emotion.

Weini's slides was quite great. However,it can be more prepared by go through the speaking part with the slides. and be more confident. very good with the slides, also can leave some space after paragraph or point so audience can read easily.(I love you Weini)

Up to this point, the proportion of each person's presentation time is not very successful. The first part, background shall not be that long. Second part is too short compared to the first even thpugh it was informative. Third is fine.

Chee Xin was not too nervous, however is kind of unfamiliar with her slides. Her slides included some long paragraph which was not very friendly to the audience. Maybe can write shorter point and elaborate through oral. However she was still good with producing short point out of the long paragraphs.(I love you too Chee Xin)

Presenters can read through the slides before present, to make sure basic problem like pronunciation won't occur.

-introduction too long

Phyllis: Flow of speech was quite hesitant and fidgetive. Maybe maintaining eye contact while having a script will engage the audience slightly more when knowing that you are clear and knowledgeable about the painting.

Weini: A bit of hesitance and can sense slight confusion at certain parts but it can be easily overcomed.

Chee Xin: Could maintain some eye contact with the class and have a script if needed instead of reading of slides.

Despite a few set backs, with a few improvements like being clearer and memorising some major points, the presentation would be more engaging

Changing of slides and be more smooth.

Can wait more for the audience to copy down information.

Group member seem to not have communicate and rehearse the presentation before presenting.

• gd eye contact

• Ashely was v interesting

  
  

weini

• really confident and loud

• the slides were annotated

  
  

Phyllis

i think she did a really gd job memorising her script

cheexin: used gd hand gestures