https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 14:47:21 UTC 2021-06-21 15:40:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1067726199  “There was a Tennis court and we were seeing how could jump the highest over the net like to a plane in the sky.“ I really like how you described that.”There was a pinata and when it was my turn next the person in front of me hit me on the head with a wood stick. The pinata looks like a llama with blue and black.  sounded like KA BA Blood coming down my forehead. My life flashes before my eyes. what is going to happen to me?” I like how you also described that but I also hope you were ok then. But I wish you described more of some stuff.]]> 2021-01-08 16:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1067726199 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1091986820 2021-01-15 16:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1091986820 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1513409789 I really liked your piece and I agree with what you said about you can make great friends over the years of sports.I also liked that you stayed on topic and you used a lot of persuasive words.however I wish you had elaborated more maybe next time you could put more detail  in your writing but overall I really liked your piece  

]]> 2021-05-11 14:00:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1513409789 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1517865596 Star- One star that I have for you is that you did a good job explaining on how people die from heart problems but if you play sports you have less of a chance which actually surprises me because with all the running I’m surprised it actually would help your heart. Star- Another star that I have for you is good job saying the importance of playing sports and how much they can help you by giving you better grades or giving you a less of a chance of dieting from heart problems and diseases. Wish- One wish that I have for you is I wish you would have made it longer because I feel like if you did it could improve your essay even more then it already is. Otherwise great job!]]> 2021-05-12 15:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1517865596 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1614443641 Hi Will! I really liked how you described the military base and what it was like and what had happened to the president from biting his finger/toe nails. Another thing I liked was how you described the guy named Jeff and how he went out to the military base in there dessert and to use his special tool to help the president. One wish I have though is for maybe some sentences to not use the same word to much because at one point I felt like I just kept on repeating the same word over and over again but other great story overall.]]> 2021-06-18 14:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1614443641 27amanguiat https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1614520213 I really like the log where it says that 7.9 billion people When you were writing about the book. A thing that shined out to me was the amount of detail with the president and about that one guy who saved them all. I would like it to have more detail and more descriptive scenes. ]]> 2021-06-18 15:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1614520213 https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1617889935 I thought story was funny. The story was very creative.i have no wish ]]> 2021-06-21 15:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/27wrooney/xlrnwqhj7u1o6o23/wish/1617889935