Feedback give and receive by https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z Give some and receive some en-us 2018-10-18 08:22:37 UTC 2018-10-18 08:43:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Talha talha_w https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294226503 Always use academic vocabulary and add transitional words, always be formal

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Give at least 2 values/ limitations of the origin and purpose ]]> 2018-10-18 08:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294226866 https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294226883
  • Have a strong persuasive introduction
  • Transitional words 
  • Academic vocabulary 
  • Always refer back to the origin when talking about the limitations and values 

    • -ritisha 
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    ]]>     2018-10-18 08:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227071     seohyun_h https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227078 Use som more compelling language and transitional words to add effects

    Improve on value for source B]]>     2018-10-18 08:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227078     OPVL https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227081
    Link the Value and the Limitation back to the origin and purpose



    ]]>     2018-10-18 08:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227081     refer your values and limitations back to the origin and purpose https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227287 2018-10-18 08:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227287 Feedback https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227373 Give an explanation after you make a statement. ]]> 2018-10-18 08:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227373 https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227998 Manage your time well while writing a OPVL. Not finishing the task in time will cost you many marks.]]> 2018-10-18 08:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294227998 https://padlet.com/p_turner1_gwa/xkz6534szq1z/wish/294228019
    Great effort. Excellent sentence "the value of the purpose of the source" this tells me you have referred back to the Origin and purpose. Well done. Can we trust all newspapers? Limitations... propaganda, subjective. The language was improved from previous work well done. Try to use more connecting language like : 'therefore,' 'this is because', 'Furthermore'. Your assessment of the credibility of the source had some excellent points. But some more work on the limitations is needed. Really well done. This is very close to being a 5 but the level of analysis in the final question was not in critical enough in terms of the limitations and values.

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