https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019 COMMENTS AND QUESTIONS en-us 2019-04-12 10:41:53 UTC 2025-10-15 14:15:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padletuploads.blob.core.windows.net/prod/36835150/cc1cbb6824c773b4d9633f50d050ccb7/reflection.jpg kjdevlin https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140626 2019-04-12 13:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140626 kjdevlin https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140721 2019-04-12 13:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140721 kjdevlin https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140859 2019-04-12 13:27:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/351140859 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357975577

]]> 2019-05-08 10:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357975577 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357991623 Strong areas:
- Clear enumeration of strategies for group dynamic and problem solving
- Good number of sources

Areas for imrpovement:
- Too informal
- Irrelevant or unexplained/ uninterpreted quotes
- Bad sentence structure
- Not Harvard style
- Reference list should not be divided
- Should jot reference unreliable sources (Wiki)
- Statements often unexplained or analyzed (Why is collaboration important?)]]> 2019-05-08 11:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357991623 d_dsouza1 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357992107 Cut and paste references without reflections 

Felt disconnected, unstructured, no flow, like 3 different people wrote it 

Not analyzed enough ]]> 2019-05-08 11:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357992107 d_dsouza1 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357992567 2019-05-08 11:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357992567 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357993006 Strong areas:
- Clear structure
Areas for improvement:
- Too subjective
- Bold words distracting
- No theory
- Bad sentence structure
- The point of analysis in the reflective cycle is to analyze and talk about that analysis, not saying “after analysis” i.e. just that you did that. What is your analysis?]]> 2019-05-08 11:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357993006 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357993814 Strong areas:
- Good description of project process (i.e. what is it about and why are you doing it)
Areas for improvement:
- Extremely informal and really poor grammar and sentence structure
- Lacks overall structure
- Blaming others without proper analysis to work better with the team
- No real analysis of the problems and possible solutions or compromises]]> 2019-05-08 11:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357993814 https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357995021 Strong areas:
- Professionally and well written
- Good use of theory, well incorporated
- Well structured and clear topic sentences and enumeration/intros
Areas for improvement:
- Harvard formatting and font size change
- Could have more theory]]> 2019-05-08 11:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kjdevlin/MACollab_2019/wish/357995021