Post your comment to Classmates here about their Narrative Writing by Wendy Blount https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk Make sure that your comments are appropriate and that you stick to the topic of the narrative writing. en-us 2021-05-11 14:18:05 UTC 2021-05-17 14:06:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f981.png https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513528770 good job Noah





]]> 2021-05-11 14:23:35 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513528770 noah https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513529591 i really like rubens writing]]> 2021-05-11 14:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513529591 Axel https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513533366 2021-05-11 14:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513533366 axe https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513536891 2021-05-11 14:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513536891 i really like rubens writing because he has a very good plot but make it a little longer maybe explain the charecters but i like how he wrote the guinea pigs names in! Axel https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513537570 2021-05-11 14:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513537570 I love everones writting. https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513540732 2021-05-11 14:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513540732 noah https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513540957 i really like evreyones writing]]> 2021-05-11 14:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513540957 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513542506 Jeremiah's wirting is pretty good mabye stop using the word "we" so much]]> 2021-05-11 14:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513542506 you do good but can you said like at the end is i hope you like the stoy by axel https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513543958 2021-05-11 14:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513543958 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513544309 2021-05-11 14:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513544309 Akeel add a little more detail to your writeing. https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513546795 2021-05-11 14:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513546795 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513556974 i like noahs writing but i think it needs some more chapters]]> 2021-05-11 14:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513556974 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513557111 2021-05-11 14:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513557111 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513561785 2021-05-11 14:30:10 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513561785 jeremiahbrooks3342 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513562228 Axel your writting is really good]]> 2021-05-11 14:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513562228 noah https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513563018 axels writing is the best]]> 2021-05-11 14:30:25 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513563018 miguelponcianomejiaalvarez3046 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513563277 i like your oner




]]> 2021-05-11 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513563277 akeel i like your work but i expeted more work of you but i can tell your work is good https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513564443 2021-05-11 14:30:44 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513564443 i like noahs writing but i think it needs some more chapters https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513569036


]]> 2021-05-11 14:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513569036 good axel now said like how you meet the game axel https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513571627 2021-05-11 14:32:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513571627 S miguelponcianomejiaalvarez3046 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513577685 2021-05-11 14:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513577685 jeremiahbrooks3342 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513582168 I love you guys writting.]]> 2021-05-11 14:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513582168 my opinion of noahs writing https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513583960 i like noahs writing but i think it needs some more chapters]]> 2021-05-11 14:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513583960 i like ounr work because ounr has a lot of work elijahreyes2809 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513594223 2021-05-11 14:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513594223 i like axels rubenpantaleonlumbrano3902 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513599105 writing

]]> 2021-05-11 14:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513599105 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513602087 majesty did a good job]]> 2021-05-11 14:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1513602087 noah https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517466701 kyries was nice it was pretty good but i think you need to improve punctuation]]> 2021-05-12 13:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517466701 Elijahs writeing is good but it needs a little bit more detial https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517467991 2021-05-12 13:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517467991 good job https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517470778 2021-05-12 13:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517470778 ounr i like your work but add more to it yo elijahreyes2809 https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517475101 2021-05-12 13:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517475101 cattleya https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517479276 I love rubens writing

]]> 2021-05-12 13:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517479276 everyones work is really good https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517479319 2021-05-12 13:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517479319 noah https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517487448 onurs is pretty good]]> 2021-05-12 13:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/wendy_blount1/xixa5u62e8k880kk/wish/1517487448