Baseline Reflection and ELA Goals by Susan Campbell https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm Please reflect on the baseline essay about "Places We Call Home. After going through the process, what was difficult? What are some of writing goals this year? en-us 2023-09-29 12:16:07 UTC 2023-11-07 18:44:46 UTC hello@padlet.com gary halstead 8/326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2725991449 Some things that were difficult righting the essay 'places we call home" the parts that were hard was finding what evidence to put in my story because there were so many good examples and evidence. In my first piece of evidence about being loved. I had so many good details to show how much my family cares for me. Also for my other detail about safety I had so many good examples to tell in my essay how nice and warm my house and family are. Over all the hardest part of my esay was picking my details and examples]]> 2023-09-29 12:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2725991449 Krystalia Francis 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2725991544 After writing my essay I found the conclusion hard to do because I had difficulty summarizing it. Some writing goals i have this year is to get better at summarizing in my conclusion and making my sentences more clear. ]]> 2023-09-29 12:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2725991544 Eren Ogleton 8-326 9/29/23 ereno3 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726001155 After finishing my essay, I found the conclusion hard to do mostly because I didn't know how to summarize my Body 1 and 2 into a few sentences. I also found it hard to explain my evidence because I didn't want to accidentally say the same thing over and over because that wouldn't make sense so I tried to explain each evidence differently. The hardest part was explaining evidence.]]> 2023-09-29 12:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726001155 Shianne Sylvester shiannes11 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726002785 One of the weaknesses I found in my essay was my lack of understanding of the question. I say this because in the essay I failed to explain my second reason for why I see a certain place as home. Resulting in some sort of confusion throughout my essay. Something I did well was explain my evidence for why I see this place as home. Making my evidence more understandable on why I think this way.]]> 2023-09-29 12:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726002785 Bryant Elome 8-326 9/29/23 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726005959 Writing the essay "Places we call home". One thing that I found difficult is adding extra details to my body paragraph.  The reason why I found this difficult is because I had a lot of different details and it was hard to pick one for my body paragraph. Another thing I found difficult is my punctuation and grammar. During every single paragraph, I had to triple check over my punctuation and grammar. Overall, some writing goals I have for this year is to improve on providing extra details and fix my punctuation and grammar.]]> 2023-09-29 12:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726005959 Josiah Davis 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726008504 After finishing my essay I found finding evidence the hardest to do since it was not something you can find in a book or a text, but you have to think about evidence from the top of your head which was challenging for me.]]> 2023-09-29 12:51:02 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726008504 Rayon Chance 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726015721 Some difficulties writing my essay was the 2nd paragraph, the problems I had writing my second paragraph was capitalization sometimes I would accidentally capitalize words that weren't suppose to be capital and had to carefully revise my whole essay for these errors. I found out that paragraph 2 had the most of these errors, but I also found out the introduction was very easy for me I knew how to hook the readers in to be in depth while reading my essay about home. Some other things I found easy was to smoothly transition so it would make sense while reading my essay. My goal for this year is to get better at writing  essays and not make mistakes on capitalization, and how to properly revise my essay to find hidden errors.]]> 2023-09-29 12:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726015721 Madison Peters 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726021298 The most difficult thing that happened when writing my essay was putting everything on paper and evidence. What I mean by this is if it was not an opinion essay it would be easy for me to write because if it was based on a book it would be easy to find evidence.]]> 2023-09-29 12:59:27 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726021298 Aliyat Williams 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726033257 Writing the essay about home was a little difficult for me because at first, I did not know what to start off with for the intro. another struggle for me was writing the conclusion for the essay. Some writing goals I have for this year is to explain things better]]> 2023-09-29 13:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726033257 Aminat Williams 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726050887 After writing my essay I found paragraph two difficult for me because it was hard trying to find evidence. Some writing goals this year is to get better at writing essays without asking for help all the time.]]> 2023-09-29 13:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726050887 Lianna Toribio https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726055021 After finishing my essay, I found that one of my most significant weaknesses is my grammar and trying to figure out what to type. I know the subject I just can't process what to type, it was strenuous I didn't know what to write for either paragraph. A writing goal I have is to get better on my grammar and have a better understanding.]]> 2023-09-29 13:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726055021 Tayvonn Dublin 8-326 9/29/23 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726316579 After writing my essay about places we call home, One thing I found difficult was capitalization. Sometimes I forgot to capitalize the I in my sentences. Another thing I found difficulty in was punctuation. I accidently putted a comma in the sentence "My home is school because I feel safe in it, and it helps me learn and grow." when I should have putted instead "My home is school because I feel safe in it and it helps me learn and grow". One writing goal that I have would be to improve capitalization. 




 
]]> 2023-09-29 16:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2726316579 Jazera Martinez https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2727258579 After writing my essay it was difficult to find lots of details of what defines my home. Also by summarizing my essay in the conclusion. Mainly, when I describe my home, it was basically repeating what I said, but in a different way But like have the same meaning when I explain it in my body paragraphs.]]> 2023-10-01 05:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2727258579 Marcus Stewart 8-326 10/13/23 marcuss128 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745156610 Some goals that I have for writing is to learn cursive, and to writing neater ]]> 2023-10-13 12:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745156610 sandie danile 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745228567 after finishing my essay i had some words i did not spell correct so i had to fix the words and it was hard to find the terms of the words and how to spell the words that i did not now and my paragraphs where hard to do too because all the stuff i already wrote was on paragraph one so it was hard and my conclusion was hard too cause the words weren't matching with summary.]]> 2023-10-13 13:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745228567 Lily Turner 8-326 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745231611 While writing my essays, I found myself stuck on the introduction & conclusion, I had trouble making a clear claim, as well as summarizing the entire essay in the conclusion. Some goals I have for the future when writing essays are trying to find a clear claim, and writing a clearer summary. ]]> 2023-10-13 13:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/xi1dpwjjk1x1rutm/wish/2745231611