How can you improve the writings in the examples given? How can the writings be more critical? by Li, Belinda https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe Critical Writing en-us 2021-09-06 10:46:36 UTC 2025-10-19 07:26:07 UTC hello@padlet.com Example 1 dl483_1 https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2112651358 Brown (2005) maintains that leadership is an essential quality in nursing, but this claim is based on limited evidence and so his views should not be taken seriously.

]]> 2022-03-24 21:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2112651358 Example 2 dl483_1 https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2112651925 Brown (2005) maintains that leadership is an essential quality in nursing.  This is confirmed by the recent requirements of the NHS Plan (DOH, 2002).  This Plan has emphasized the importance of introducing the transformational model of leadership.  Smith (2001) explains that this is a leadership which involves the use of charisma and interpersonal skills to enable achievement. Jones (2004) argues that the key characteristic of transformational leadership is empowering others to achieve….  

]]> 2022-03-24 21:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2112651925 Eg1, https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2113539326 how to prove this evidence is truth, need to find literature to support "but......". 
and should't use those word like "should" in my opinion.]]> 2022-03-25 10:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2113539326 eg2 https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2113542786 I think the author just list different ideas and examples. better to compare their voices and work out a new idea ]]> 2022-03-25 10:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dl483_1/xhryruphhn6kggpe/wish/2113542786