https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq en-us 2023-02-01 11:45:42 UTC 2023-02-01 14:53:28 UTC hello@padlet.com usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444343 Example A

Part A
Headings

Sources

Notes

Gap

Part B
Intro 

Structure

Sources 

Voice]]> 2023-02-01 11:52:25 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444343 usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444453 Example A

Part A
Headings

Sources

Notes

Gap

Part B
Intro 

Structure

Sources 

Voice]]> 2023-02-01 11:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444453 usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444571 Example A - generally a 3.

Part A
Headings
Subheadings were vague - factors? - and long and complex/ messy.  Not general to specific.  Perceptions is irrelevant and too specific at end.  Audit quality is not mentioned and it doesn't have a logic overall progression.  1 - Amber 2. -2

Sources
4 - good selection / more may be needed when the headings are developed.

Notes
Well-focussed but a couple of points may be overlooked or not focussed enough.  -3
More strong support or details from research (setting)
5 - 2
6 - 3
7 - 3

Gap
The could phrased more clearly gap - may need some revision when writing the final section has been written. Will need citations.  -3

Part B
Intro 
Too brief, unclear scope.  Outline doesn't match part A -2.
Structure
10 - 3 more focus needed
11 - 2 lacks clarity 

Sources 
12: Support used but synthesis is poor - more linking needed. -3


Voice
13 - No interpretation 1
14 - Basic geographical critique and unclear mention of sample size but critique at least attempted.  -2

]]> 2023-02-01 11:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464444571 usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464445387 Example B

Part A
Headings

Sources

Notes

Gap

Part B
Intro 

Structure

Sources 

Voice]]> 2023-02-01 11:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464445387 usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464446706 Example B - high 1

Part A
Headings
Too general and descriptive / essay-like with the wrong structure (overview is the most general).  Subheadings too long and one
2 for both criteria.

Sources
only 5 sources - 1. 

Notes
4 - unfocussed, general descriptive 2
5 - same topic throughout / poor 2
6 - inappropriate support
7 1 - some headings have one or no citations
Cut and paste

Gap
1 - no gap

Part B
Intro 
1 - where is the research?

Structure
10 - 1 no focus
11- mostly digression -1
12 - Hint of synthesis in the last paragraph but links needed.  Support not in Part A so impossible to evaluate the support. -2


Sources 
13 - no interpretation
14 - no critical comment
Voice]]> 2023-02-01 11:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/xhg9cpk7t5oucfwq/wish/2464446706