AP Art Presentation Padlet by Lauren Jackson

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:12:04 UTC

* I love the baby pictures !
* I relate to you on the attempt to be as artistic as I can be.
* Your outlook on your life has a lot of meaning and you have a wonderful way of expressing it.

Eva

2022-09-07 12:13:37 UTC

I love your approach to growing and learning both in your self and in your art.

Ariel G.

2022-09-07 12:14:37 UTC

What do you want for yourself in the future?

Evy

2022-09-07 12:14:58 UTC

I know you mentioned you wanted to do 3D art earlier this year, I wonder how you’ll make 3D art that deals with the subjects of self and growth?

Mia

2022-09-07 12:15:06 UTC

I loved your past self slide, the pictures seemed to give a good representation of who you were. I also love your emphasis on growth and being proud of what you make—that’s one of my goals as well.

Amy

2022-09-07 12:15:20 UTC

I really liked the way you expressed yourself especially how you live and want to live !

The baby pics were adorableee !

do you have any careers in mind ?

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 12:16:03 UTC

I genuinely enjoyed your information about your tattoos, and the way u feel each one impacts you and your future self.
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Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:16:54 UTC

You said you don’t want to make a decision, you’ll regret in 40 years. How does that translate into something as permanent as tattoos?

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:17:50 UTC

*Your inspirations of artists are cool
*I relate to you.
*Try to speak up a bit more! :)

Ace

2022-09-07 12:18:51 UTC

I love the inspiration photos id love to see what you'll do with it

Ariel G

2022-09-07 12:19:08 UTC

Your atrwork looks amazing!

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:19:29 UTC

What about people interests you?

2022-09-07 12:19:36 UTC

Try talking a bit louder, it might help.

Evy

2022-09-07 12:19:47 UTC

I thought it was really cool to see some of the pieces you’ve already made, as well as the pieces that inspire you. I liked being able to see how the artists that inspire you most influence your personal art style. I wonder if you’ll stick to digital art or try some traditional pieces this year?

Amy

2022-09-07 12:20:05 UTC

Your research and inspirations are really cool!
You’re work is awesome! :))

Mia

2022-09-07 12:20:08 UTC

I really loved your past slide-it was nice seeing some of your artwork.

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 12:20:43 UTC

I was intrigued by the artist you decided to pick as your inspiration.

Evy

2022-09-07 12:23:48 UTC

I thought it was great how precise you were with your language, I was hoping to see some examples of work you’d created or work you’d been inspired by as well!

Ariel G

2022-09-07 12:23:50 UTC

Add visuals

Mia

2022-09-07 12:24:06 UTC

You seem really passionate about drawing-I really like how you mentioned career flexibility in relation to art.

Arcana

2022-09-07 12:24:16 UTC

i love that you found something you liked to do for a better use of your time

Danielle C

2022-09-07 12:24:17 UTC

I like that the connection with family is so good and the artworks that inspire you are so lovely as well but I still see your own style coming through

Anysha H.

2022-09-07 12:24:17 UTC

I like that they have the ability to draw at least 3-4 pages a day. For me, it takes a lot of motivation to be able to draw something. I also like how they want to learn how to paint and color as well, which again is something I'm also trying to do.

Eva

2022-09-07 12:24:57 UTC

Your dedication to teaching yourself new skills is admirable

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-07 12:24:58 UTC

I think it's cool that you know where you wanna go with your art path because art is such a broad field and I kinda have no clue what I wanna do with it.

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:25:09 UTC

Like how you can draw so much/often.

Danielle C

2022-09-07 12:25:42 UTC

Seeing Kevin draw and the standards seem so high for themselves is inspiring to see as well as 3-4 pages is crazy. Great volume, nice expanding on the slides as well

Amy

2022-09-07 12:25:44 UTC

Its cool how you draw 3-4 pages a day! Also liked how you kept it simple

Add more of a visual aspect so that people could have something to attract them as you talk.

2022-09-07 12:25:57 UTC

Estrada

Ms. Jackson

laurenmjackson723 — 2022-09-07 12:33:47 UTC

What artists have you started looking at that talk about similar themes?

Anysha

2022-09-07 12:34:28 UTC

I like how you included work that you've recently done, as well as drawings from years ago. I also like how you included wanting to create realism-related art while personalizing it to your taste! In addition, I liked how you changed your initial SI due to not wanting to overwork/ stress yourself, I feel it takes a lot to want to switch your initial concept.

W Presentation. 10/10 Loved the visuals and the meaning. just straight dubs all around.

2022-09-07 12:34:36 UTC

Estrada

2022-09-07 12:34:38 UTC

Love the enthusiasm and inquiry statement -kevin

Ms. Jackson

laurenmjackson723 — 2022-09-07 12:34:42 UTC

I thought your presentation was very fitting in speaking to your authentic self. I would have loved to see visuals of some of the artists you're inspired by!

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:34:51 UTC

You have really nice artwork!

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-07 12:34:54 UTC

I don't have a question but your art is amazing !!

Eva

2022-09-07 12:34:59 UTC

I think your SI topic is great and I can't wait to see what you create/where you go with it

Ariel G

2022-09-07 12:35:01 UTC

I really enjoyed your presentation overall and your paintings are outstanding!

Danielle C

2022-09-07 12:35:18 UTC

It’s really nice that you are inspired by nature and want to put personality into your realism as a next step for your art progression. Using your art to continually go over how you view femininity I feel will get across really well

arcana

2022-09-07 12:35:21 UTC

you already have the technical skill but i would love to see how u reach ur goal of personalizing your art

Amy

2022-09-07 12:35:44 UTC

you’re awesome !

You’re idea/question for your portfolio is really intriguing and cool. You’re pieces are amazing too !

Mia

2022-09-07 12:36:02 UTC

I really loved your mood board and how you mentioned why you choose your topic of feminity over something that would make you anxious.

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 12:36:08 UTC

I find your investigative topic very unique and interesting. As someone who isn’t a person in a position who deals with that pressure and ideals in their life growing up. Makes me really think and wonder what art you can make to make change and represent it differently.

Ms. Jackson

laurenmjackson723 — 2022-09-07 12:36:36 UTC

Eva, you have wonderful technical skill and I enjoy seeing your artwork, I am interested in how you will use portraiture and people as your subject matter to bring together a portfolio that brings you joy.

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:37:43 UTC

* I’ve always wanted to design video games and just live life with drawing.
*Could we see more of your personal art?

Arcana

2022-09-07 12:37:56 UTC

i love how you want your art to be heard and seen and how you want your message to get across

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:38:21 UTC

*Your journey is so cool.
* Im glad you found art as a hobby!

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:40:09 UTC

* Your purpose and outlook is very meaningful and relevant.

Maybe add more visuals. Slides are a bit wordy so it takes away the mental aspect. But i love your message and what you want to get out of this all.

2022-09-07 12:41:38 UTC

Estrada

Sorry to hear you had someone like that growing up -Kevin

2022-09-07 12:43:45 UTC

Anysha

2022-09-07 12:43:45 UTC

I like how you included your past life and how it inspired you to create your SI and concept. In a way, it felt like you may have misinterpreted the overall meaning of the self reflection but regardless, I like how it flowed into your SI

Evy

2022-09-07 12:43:50 UTC

I think it’s really cool how your presentation, with all the colors and images and interesting layout, was almost like an art piece itself. I think exploring these relationships is really cool and I’m excited to see where this portfolio takes your ideas!

Mia

2022-09-07 12:44:09 UTC

I really really appreciated your vulnerability in your presentation. I loved the flow everything and how you explained where you are and what you want in your art with like a story structure.

Ariel G

2022-09-07 12:44:29 UTC

I really like how you fully analyzed yourself & what you were focused on and told your story

Amy

2022-09-07 12:44:44 UTC

the baby pics are cuteee ! The way you made you’re presentation with many colors i think is really nice and unique.
a little wordy tho, but i liked how you were able to talk about you’re story and how you want to present it in your art.

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-07 12:44:52 UTC

I love the theme of your story and you speak very well.

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:45:24 UTC

I think your SI is very powerful and important

Eva

2022-09-07 12:46:00 UTC

Your presentation was great

Brian Ocotlán-Urbano

2022-09-07 12:46:40 UTC

I really enjoyed the way you explained the similarities and differences of family and any other person in the world.

Ms. Jackson

laurenmjackson723 — 2022-09-07 12:48:26 UTC

Really beautiful presentation Danielle! I was really struck by the slide with all of the layered images on one another. I would love to know what current artists you're inspired by or what style of artwork you're interested in making.

Eva

2022-09-07 12:50:16 UTC

I liked how personal/self reflective your presentation was

Anysha

2022-09-07 12:50:43 UTC

I'm sorry about your current battle, I think its pretty courageous to mention your issues regardning your mental health. In addition, I like how it flowed into your SI concept, it seems a little scary to express your issues with mental health without getting frustrated with your art.

Maybe shorten the bullet points so theyre not so long, I like the visuals but i wish we'd see more of you and connections to you.

2022-09-07 12:50:48 UTC

Estrada

Sydney Johnson

2022-09-07 12:50:56 UTC

Thank you for sharing personal details of your story with us such as your sexuality, and your battle with mental illness. You had a lot of detailed info in there ! Great Job

Danielle Clarke

2022-09-07 12:51:17 UTC

I like the variety to your other art forms, the ones you do and ones you take comfort in like music. I wanna be a veterinarian too so very inspiring! I’m excited to see your work as you use it to pull through your mental illnesses

Kevin

2022-09-07 12:51:27 UTC

Keep it up, you can get far.

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:51:54 UTC

I think your SI is very important in todays world.

Evy

2022-09-07 12:51:57 UTC

I thought it was really cool how much of yourself you put out there with your inspiration and research. I liked how vulnerable you were in your presentation. I think it’s awesome that you are taking a very introspective take to your portfolio and I’m excited to see what that means for you

Mia

2022-09-07 12:51:58 UTC

I really liked how vulnerable you were with your presentation and how you plan to incorporate that with your portfolio. I also really liked how I could see your personal style in through your slides.

Amy

2022-09-07 12:52:25 UTC

I like how you were able to share your story, and how detailed it was including the background which shows part of your style :)))

Imeah

2022-09-07 12:53:05 UTC

* I love hearing your journey of finding yourself and your art !

Anysha

2022-09-07 12:57:46 UTC

I can relate to living in a household that only cares about your grades and your achievements rather than your emotional being. Do you feel like you used to get overwhelmed with trying to deal with your emotions? I like how you mentioned starting art recently and that being in AP studio is a step at making better and more meaningful art.

Danielle C

2022-09-07 12:58:09 UTC

Professionalism no love ugh, I can see how that affects your understanding of self as you discovered how intimacy works for you on your own instead of getting introduced to it young. Glad you can appreciate the small everyday things, sometimes we get caught up in wanting a drastic change to happen at the start of our journey. Slayy nails invite that mindful meditation

Maybe add more visuals to portray your slides about yourself. i really like the vibe of your slides they do add to the effect youre trying to give off.

2022-09-07 12:58:12 UTC

Estrada

Eva

2022-09-07 12:58:18 UTC

Out of the different art forms/mediums you have tried which did you like the most?

Kevin

2022-09-07 12:58:34 UTC

Introspection is great.

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-07 12:59:03 UTC

I know what it's like to grow up in an emotionally detached family so I know how it can affect you.

Jonathan

2022-09-07 12:59:06 UTC

I hope you find your artistic self!

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 12:59:13 UTC

I find the methods of your self care and exploring new topics is really nice. Because not many people are able to open up their abilities in craft and art.

Ariel G

2022-09-07 12:59:15 UTC

I like the message youre trying to convey through your art and how you set up your presentation

Evy

2022-09-07 12:59:16 UTC

I think it was cool to see your research and all the pieces that you’ve been looking at. I’m excited to see how that inspiration is reflected in your own art. I also thought it was cool listening to you talk about the violet project because I know I’ve heard about that before. I wonder what style you’re going to explore through your portfolio?

Sydney Johnson

2022-09-07 12:59:23 UTC

I love the transparency shown in your presentation. I can relate to not being in a household where affection was a love language. I'm super excited to see your finished pieces, I can tell they're going to have a lot of meaning behind it.

Amy

2022-09-07 12:59:59 UTC

Its very neat and organized, i like how you had many pictures and were able to talk about your experience. I hope you find yourself! The meaning is behind youre presentation and idea is amazing

Imeah

2022-09-07 13:00:32 UTC

* I love how you were willing to be vulnerable with your presentation, it make your story and intentions more honest and believable.

Anysha

2022-09-07 13:02:37 UTC

I enjoyed the art you've done in the past. I also like the idea of you drawing art because its fun but saying you love it. I really enjoyed how you included so much of your art, its really dope!

Jonathan

2022-09-07 13:03:05 UTC

I really like your art style!!

Eva

2022-09-07 13:03:33 UTC

I really like your art that you showed in your presentation

Ariel G

2022-09-07 13:03:42 UTC

All of your art looks amazing!!! Its impressive that you have so many different art styles!

Kevin

2022-09-07 13:03:42 UTC

I strongly suggest you learn some more realism before doing abstract.

Amy

2022-09-07 13:03:50 UTC

youre art style is cool , and its really nice how you included much of your works, they were really nice

Mia

2022-09-07 13:04:01 UTC

I really liked how you shared some of your more recent pieces and some front the past. It’s nice to see how you’re art has progress into a more distinct style.

Evy

2022-09-07 13:04:15 UTC

I thought your presentation was awesome!! It’s so cool that you’ve experimented with so many different art styles and I enjoyed being able to see how your work has improved through all that experimentation. I really liked your digital pieces, they reminded me of a collage, and super excited to see how your portfolio develops!!

I really like your visuals they add a strong representation. I also like your art style its very unique and i think it means alot that your imagination is so broad and that you want to broaden it.

2022-09-07 13:04:44 UTC

Estrada

Danielle C

2022-09-07 13:05:24 UTC

I like what you’re inspired by, it is relatable for me and I wonder if come high school you felt pressured to get into realism as it was considered the main art form for many schools. I’m glad you still stick to your roots with a more cartoony side and your collaging looks really nice

Danielle C

2022-09-07 13:15:04 UTC

Speech started good, nice that you were able to share without saying more than you wanted, you didn’t go into detail but made it understood that the problems you identify with today stemmed from childhood and makes your head feel full yet empty

Imeah

2022-09-07 13:15:19 UTC

* Wassup bro! I’ve had the opportunity to be able to witness your art journey first hand. And I can say you’ve come a long way and excited as to where you will be in the future.

Jonathan

2022-09-07 13:15:27 UTC

I liked all the pictures in the slides.. very colorful!

Anysha

2022-09-07 13:15:36 UTC

I'm sorry for your loss <3. I like the idea of wantng to get more in touch with your artwork. Do you feel like your past is the reason you want to intertwine with your art? I hope it wasn't too hard for you to share how your currently feeling and in a way, I can relate to it.

Kevin

2022-09-07 13:15:48 UTC

You are loud and proud.

Imeah

2022-09-07 13:16:07 UTC

Your presentation was very true to heart and meaningful, I love your journey!

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-07 13:16:19 UTC

I enjoy and admire how open you are. You're well spoken and seem naturally comfortable in front of a crowd.

Amy

2022-09-07 13:16:23 UTC

the little Ariel pictures >>>
i understand the being alone, me too, im also my greatest critiquer
it was really good and the pictures >>>
Its amazing how you were able to share !

Mia

2022-09-07 13:16:30 UTC

I really liked how vulnerable you were with your presentation. Everything flowed really well and definitely showed your personality.

Eva

2022-09-07 13:16:59 UTC

I like your self reflectiveness in your presentation

Ariel G

2022-09-07 13:17:24 UTC

Try not to say as many filler words but i like how your presentation was very honest with yourself

Sydney Johnson

2022-09-07 13:17:43 UTC

Your presentation was very detailed, and definitely shows your personality. I love how you included your future goals, and how it shows growth from your past self. Never stop being you.

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 13:26:38 UTC

Im genuinely intrigued by your passion and heart to your own personal experiences and interest. How they’ve developed you and your interest in art.

Evy

2022-09-07 13:26:53 UTC

It was awesome to see how childhood you was different from you now and to listen to your story about growing up and feeling boxed in. I’m really curious to see how this will be expressed through your work and what your portfolio will turn out like!

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 13:27:45 UTC

I really like your animated, versatile, and Cartoon based art style. I feel like in one of your pieces you could slowly convert realism into animated realism.

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-07 13:28:40 UTC

I believe your dedication to your work is insane, how u manage time, school, and your own interest.

Kevin

2022-09-09 12:06:41 UTC

Try to do some research next time!

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-09 12:07:15 UTC

I think your sustained investigation is really interesting !

Eva

2022-09-09 12:07:23 UTC

Like the idea of creating art to tell future generations about how life is now

Evy

2022-09-09 12:07:23 UTC

I thought it was interesting to see what you were inspired by and how that related to your SI. Do you think you will explore the combination of the ideas of the unknown with the consequences of technology in your portfolio?

Ariel G

2022-09-09 12:07:30 UTC

I like that you ask yourself alot of questions (which could also help guide you). It was also nice and straightforward

Mia

2022-09-09 12:08:01 UTC

I like the direction you plan to in for your portfolio.

Danielle C

2022-09-09 12:08:40 UTC

I like that your career interest is a job that I wouldn’t associate as an art form but I can totally envision it now. Short but sweet and calm like your tenants suggest you prefer to be

Danielle Clarke

2022-09-09 12:15:46 UTC

It’s good that you’ve started to let go of busy work and are focusing more of that time to be the teenager you feel you should be. Your portfolio interest aligns with the way you make your art to resonate with others and that is really cool.

Ariel G

2022-09-09 12:16:48 UTC

I love how in depth you went with your presentation and showed us you. I look forward to seeing your artwork!

Imeah

imeahcurbean — 2022-09-09 12:16:48 UTC

Your story of loneliness is something that I relate to, so it resonates with me. I grew up as an only child so times were very lonely. School and work does take away time to be yourself and partake in your personal interests. I am glad you found friends and something that you enjoy in life.

Kevin

2022-09-09 12:16:55 UTC

Very descriptive and personal

Evy

2022-09-09 12:16:58 UTC

I thought your research was very cool and I’m really interested to see what you come up with for your portfolio art. I think it’s going to be awesome watching you take the idea of what immigrants go through and interpret it using your art!

Jonathan

2022-09-09 12:17:17 UTC

I think your SI is very important in todays world. Also, good luck in finding out what you want to do for college!

Mia

2022-09-09 12:17:28 UTC

I can definitely relate to trying to live in the moment and make the best of our teenage years. I also really liked how the visuals you choose were really intentional and how you plan to make art about things you gone through and what you’re passionate about.

Eva

2022-09-09 12:17:56 UTC

I think your SI is amazing and I love how you are both expressing your own experience and trying to help others feel less alone through your art.

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-09 12:18:31 UTC

I loved how well spoken and naturally comfortable you were in front of the class. I can also relate to feeling like your alone and have to do things to distract yourself.

Imeah

imeahcurbean — 2022-09-09 12:20:47 UTC

Your self discovery journey is so inspirational. Your success and progress in life is so admirable. You inspire me a lot when it comes to profession. Great job :)

Evy

2022-09-09 12:23:12 UTC

I think it was awesome to see all the things that you’ve accomplished throughout your life and despite any hardships that you faced in your family. I like the idea of looking back on yourself and having pride in what you’ve done and I’m excited to see how that translates into your art and your SI!

Ariel G

2022-09-09 12:23:25 UTC

I can really relate to past you being parentified because i had to deal with the same thing, i also love your topic and cant wait to see your work!

Eva

2022-09-09 12:23:25 UTC

Your self awareness/ growth you showed is impressive

Danielle Clarke

2022-09-09 12:23:29 UTC

Looking into yourself after being pushed to be someone else for so long can be so hard especially with the care freeness we can feel as children it’s great that you’re embracing all the things you do enjoy instead of keeping the mentality your family tried to make for you. Your making your world around the creativity you feel in so many forms.

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-09 12:23:37 UTC

Your self discovery is crazy. I have kind of been watching from the outside looking in and I can tell how confident you are now. Inspirational man! So proud of you

Kevin

2022-09-09 12:23:39 UTC

You’ve done a lot, though the inquiry could be a bit more clear

Jonathan

2022-09-09 12:23:45 UTC

I love how you express art through your business by creating new things! And how proactive you are!

Mia

2022-09-09 12:24:32 UTC

I can definitely relate to wanting to learn more about yourself and the things you like as you get older. Congratulations on your business! I can definitely see your personal styles through you’re presentation and I’m excited to see how they are utilized in your portfolio.

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-09 12:25:22 UTC

I enjoyed your decision to become an advocate and create voices for people in the city. I find that inspiring how quickly someone can become someone.

Danielle C

2022-09-09 12:26:26 UTC

You have many art forms and it makes sense that your inspired to do fashion as your artworks are sometimes less literal than scenery or a direct person, really pleasant to look at and makes me wanna stare to catch every detail

Sydney Johnson

2022-09-09 12:28:10 UTC

Imeah! you've been so dope since freshman year. Your artwork has transformed over the last 4 years, it was amazing then, but even better now. So excited to see how your portfolio turns out.

Evy

2022-09-09 12:30:21 UTC

I think your style and the styles that you are inspired by are really cool, I wonder if you’re planning on using any color in your art this year? I’m also curious about what other arts your interested in pursuing, do you plan to go to college for art?

Will

1115665 — 2022-09-09 12:30:36 UTC

One of my main inspirations in art. Literally the best artist I know. I think it's cool how you're just involved in art as a whole; you're not limited to one form of art. Watching your journey has been crazy and I cant wait to see how far you go.

Eva

2022-09-09 12:31:13 UTC

I like that you have a variety of art styles/forms

Jonathan

2022-09-09 12:31:15 UTC

I really like you art style and your drive to want to expand your artistic ability in multiple different factions in the art industry!

Ariel G

2022-09-09 12:31:34 UTC

I love how you showed off your art in your presentation and what inspires you, the full pages of art look amazing!

Brian Ocotlan-Urbano

2022-09-09 12:31:41 UTC

Your art style is really dope and i feel you can create artwork using the similar style but with realism intertwined. To make realistic art have your touch of style and uniqueness.

Kevin

2022-09-09 12:31:48 UTC

👍

Mia

2022-09-09 12:32:09 UTC

I love how you had so many examples of your artwork and how you’re exploring other mediums. You’re style is awesome and I’m excited to see how it’s incorporated in your portfolio!