Write down one feedback and one feedforward comment that are your “go to” by FE Equine

2025-03-17 15:51:45 UTC

Include references to support opinion or think about the counter argument to what you are saying.

Feedforward

2025-03-17 15:51:58 UTC

Continue to submit work to this high standard. :-)

2025-03-17 15:52:17 UTC

FF- To develop your referencing, look at the Harvard referencing technique.

FB- some good sporting examples to support your writing

FF & FB comments

2025-03-17 15:52:51 UTC

FF - Ensure you proof read your work for spelling and grammar errors, prior to submitting your assessment. FB - You have created a superb evaluation, to show the impact of ....

danirichardson — 2025-03-17 15:53:03 UTC

Feed forward: Make sure to maintain these high standards that you have set yourself. You have thoroughly proof read your work and correctly reference throughout.

kirstenwilkinson — 2025-03-17 15:53:18 UTC

Feedback example: Criteria achieved:

P5 - Perform safe handling of equines using appropriate equipment and techniques for full grooming and clipping of horses

Go To Comments

lukeyeomans3 — 2025-03-17 15:53:18 UTC

FB - Excellent introduction which sets the scene, defines key terms and sets a rationale for the assignment

FF - Ensure your in-text citations are accurately formatted, smoothly integrated into your writing, and consistently used to support your arguments.

2025-03-17 15:53:22 UTC

FB - Good effort with good knowledge shown across the piece of work

FF - consider using different sentence structures to avoid content reading as repetitive

2025-03-17 15:53:24 UTC

Feedback comments is normally the criteria that’s been achieved. Then the criteria that they need to achieve.

Feedforward comment -

Use of references to support your work.

Use visuals to support some of your explanations
Format and structuring

Feedforward

2025-03-17 15:53:36 UTC

Provide references for all direct quote definitions

FF

2025-03-17 15:53:58 UTC

Discussing students structure of an assignment - asking them to continue to have a good structure or layout/flow to their work/improve their structure.

Discuss the standard of referencing skills.

2025-03-17 15:54:05 UTC

Feedforward: Consider correctly referencing any material found online.

Feedback: Ensure you have attempted all criteria as detailed in the assignment brief

2025-03-17 15:54:14 UTC

Well done on submitting a well presented, detailed assignment in which you have demonstrated your understanding of the elements involved

Refer to the assignment brief and familiarise yourself with the distinction criteria. Pay attention to command verbs e.g evaluate

Feedback

2025-03-17 15:54:35 UTC

A really well written assignment, you’ve shown a clear understanding of “criteria”

kirstenwilkinson — 2025-03-17 15:54:52 UTC

Feedforward example - Avoid first or second person e.g. 'I' 'you' 'we'

FF

2025-03-17 15:56:02 UTC

For presentations - students fed forward to each other about the quality of presentations and gave tips about presentational improvements.