How can we make the sample writing better? What would you add? by Ms. Hirschbine https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d BACKGROUND BUILDING en-us 2017-10-04 16:03:58 UTC 2025-10-22 10:09:40 UTC hello@padlet.com I would add more words. khirschbine https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010079 2017-10-04 17:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010079 https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010328 I think i would put more bigger the sentences like i would like to put more ideas]]> 2017-10-04 17:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010328 Q hago aqui https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010413 2017-10-04 17:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010413 I will add the name of the person.I will also tell where did we went.I will also tell the day and date mt218 https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010417 2017-10-04 17:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010417 The author can write more words. https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010501 2017-10-04 17:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010501 write dose sentences more big and put more ideas https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010504 2017-10-04 17:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010504 I https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010532 I would make more sentences]]> 2017-10-04 17:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010532 Hello https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010638 2017-10-04 17:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010638 I would add more good words https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010683 2017-10-04 17:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010683 I think I would https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010700 2017-10-04 17:53:49 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010700 =/ https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010730 2017-10-04 17:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010730 i would make it bigger to be a sentence. https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010743 2017-10-04 17:53:54 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010743 NO HONEY NO https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010832 2017-10-04 17:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010832 Hagmos Fiesta https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010842 2017-10-04 17:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194010842 i would do more https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011018 2017-10-04 17:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011018 nnooooo https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011026



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]]> 2017-10-04 17:54:33 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011118 I Would be more specific like more words. https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011162 2017-10-04 17:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011162 i will add quotations and more details to this sentence https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011167 2017-10-04 17:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011167 like write more sentence https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011225 2017-10-04 17:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011225 vamos a un lugar https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011245 2017-10-04 17:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011245 hi https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011359 2017-10-04 17:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011359 I write does sentence more big and more espesific https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011362 2017-10-04 17:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011362 https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011372 i would do more words]]> 2017-10-04 17:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011372 I think i add like I go outside with my dog, we walk together, and i play https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011384 2017-10-04 17:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011384 i don't know https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011552 2017-10-04 17:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011552 i would make more sentenses https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011639 2017-10-04 17:55:31 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011639 OK vamo a tranquilzano oh yeah https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011747 2017-10-04 17:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011747 hola https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011835 2017-10-04 17:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194011835 i https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012028 2017-10-04 17:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012028 i https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012059 2017-10-04 17:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012059 OH YEAH https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012167 2017-10-04 17:56:30 UTC https://padlet.com/khirschbine/xdv32adjfy5d/wish/194012167