My brilliant padlet by Jiselle Cortes

Final Draft

1061620 — 2023-12-19 22:13:22 UTC

i selected this writing because i wanted to show what a fun day i had with my friends. the strengths that i had was that i was spending time with my friends because i barely hung out with my friends because they have other plans. Something that was especially important to me was that I got to write about how i ended up seeing one of my old friends. Something that i had trouble writing was doing the dialogue. If i could've worked on this writing further i could've added more details. My writing changed because i have never added dialogue to my essay.

100 word story

1061620 — 2023-12-21 07:03:33 UTC

I selected this writing because i wanted to show how my room is described. The strengths that i had was that i had to try to describe what is around my room and that i had to write it in 100 words. Something that is important to me about this writing is that I liked saying that I wanted to paint my walls pink. Something that I had trouble on is trying to have my writing up to 100 words. If I could’ve worked on this writing further I would’ve added more details about my room. My writing has changed because I’m writing way more than before.

Something you should know is

1061620 — 2023-12-21 07:14:27 UTC

I selected this writing because I wanted to show how my first day went. One of the strengths that I had was that I tired to explain how my day went. Something that was important to me about this writing is that I wanted to show how scared I was on the first day of school. Something that I had Trouble on with this writing was trying to not give away how shy I was. If I could’ve worked on this writing further I would’ve added more stuff that happened on the first day. My writing has changed because I can add more details to my writings.