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      <title>Advanced Writing by Maher Haramy</title>
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      <pubDate>2023-10-23 04:44:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Maher</title>
         <author>sabaahamod22</author>
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         <title>yasamin </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>-The project will reduce waste; moreover, it will save the company money.</p><p><br/></p><p>-the proposal lacks clear data; furthermore, it ignores customer feedback.</p><p><br/></p><p>-I wanted to go for a walk; however, it started raining heavily.</p><p><br/></p><p>-she enjoys living in the city; on the other hand, the noise sometimes bother her.</p><p><br/></p><p>-the experiment produced consistent result; therefore, the hypothesis was accepted.</p><p><br/></p><p>-he did not study for the exam; as a result, he scored poorly.</p><p><br/></p><p>-you need to submit your application today; otherwise, you will miss the deadline.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>shno</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I go to the shop, and I buy some clothes.</p><p>I love football, but I hate swimming.</p><p><br/></p><p>I was in the party, so I spent a good time with my family.</p><p>You could drink coffe, or you could drink tea.</p><p><br/></p><p>She is doing housework; she is cooking too.</p><p>We study hard; we will get full marks.</p><p><br/></p><p>I did hard work; as a result, they promoted me.</p><p>I love to lean English language; moreover, improving my skills.</p><p>we need to go to the my grandma house; however, we went to the my aunt's house.</p><p><br/></p><p>I saw my friend when I was in Bazar.</p><p>She would not go there, if you gave her their information.</p><p><br/></p><p>Before I go to there, I faced to a health problem.</p><p><br/></p><p>I have been working in a company since 2020.</p><p><br/></p><p>I have not spoken with my freind since we fought with each other.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>zamin</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>compound stetences :</strong></p><p>1- I would rather go to resturant, but I'm exhusted.</p><p>2- I like English movies, and I enjoy improving my English. </p><p><br/></p><p>3- She wants to get pass , so she wants to knuckle down to study for the exam.</p><p>4-  You get your stuffes, or you want to leave these to me.</p><p><br/></p><p>Sooner or later she will realize what a mistake she made; she regrets.</p><p>She has changed her mind; she will do what she wants.  </p><p><br/></p><p>She goes to resturant; moreover, she meets her friends.</p><p><br/></p><p>I want to watch a series; on the other hand, i don't have leisure time.</p><p>--------------------</p><p><strong>Another examples:</strong></p><p>1- I just want to go to a supermarket; furthermore, I need to purchase something there.</p><p>2- You cannot work here carefully; therefore, you can get your act together.</p><p>3- They play the piano; otherwise,  they play the guitar.</p><p>4- We wanted to be here in time; however,  we lost track of time.</p><p>---------------------</p><p><strong>complex sentences :</strong></p><p>1- If you want to read this book, you will have the best time to read.</p><p>2- When I walked, I saw her.</p><p>3- Before I prepper myself for the event, I achieved the information about there place. </p><p>4- Since I came here, I have gained different information.</p><p>--------------------</p><p><strong>Another examples :</strong></p><p>1-Though I was sick, I could study very well. </p><p>2- Since I have waited here for a long time, let's have a cup of coffee.</p><p>3-I saw her while she was working.</p><p>4-As I was feeling tired, I decided to go home early.</p><p>5-If I play chess, I will think carefully.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hajar</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I love winter nights, but she loves summer nights.</p><p>She needs a translator, and so do I.</p><p>They need a new house, so they bought one.</p><p>I can hate, or i can love it's up to me.</p><p>Our teacher is sick today; she takes one day off.</p><p>They were eating; i joined the meail.</p><p>Our teacher is sick today; moreover, she takes one day off.</p><p>we traviled to Turkeya; however, they went to Canada.</p><p>If i were you, i would not invite them to my wedding.</p><p>I will buy a huge house in the spanish vilage when i become extermily rich.</p><p>I should take my medicne before i eat launch.</p><p>She used to sung very nicely since she was a child.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>rebwar</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>Rebwar goes to work, and he is very busy today.</p><p><br/></p><p>I  go to the gym; I  go swwiming.</p><p>I love my jop; morover,</p><p>I love lesin to music , </p><p>If you eti petza, </p><p>I will buy sanduich</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Roza</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>She is watching a movie, and she is eating. </p><p>I have an exam, but I dont have time to study.</p><p><br/></p><p>She likes read a book, so she is buying new a book each week.</p><p>She needs buy a new phone, or she need to fix old phone.</p><p><br/></p><p>He works hard; he needs time to relax.</p><p>He feels sick; he needs to finish his work.</p><p><br/></p><p>I love learning technology; moreover, I reads many books about technology. </p><p><br/></p><p>She likes learning new language; however, she do not have a time to learn.</p><p><br/></p><p>If I work hard,  I will finish early. </p><p><br/></p><p>I will travel when I have a free time.</p><p><br/></p><p>Before I apply to course, I will ask to deadline of course.</p><p><br/></p><p>She has been trying to learn English since she started studying master's.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Naz</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>- He updateed the task board, and he added new tasks.</p><p>- I need a new PC, but it's expensive.</p><p>-----------------------</p><p>- You can do your homework, or you can clean your room.</p><p>- She fineshed her meeting, so you can use meeting room</p><p><br/></p><p>--------------------------------[using ;]</p><p> - He updateed the task board; he added new tasks.</p><p>- I need a new PC; it's expensive.</p><p><br/></p><ul><li><p><br/></p></li></ul><p>-----------------------</p><p>- You can do your homework; you can clean your room.</p><p>- She fineshed her meeting; you can use meeting room</p><p>------------------------------------------</p><p><br/></p><p>She hasnew job offer; <strong>moreover</strong>, she loves her current job.</p><p>I have a plan to do master;  <strong>however</strong>, I know we need to improve my English.</p><p>-------------------</p><p>If you are tierd, you need to take a rest.</p><p><br/></p><p>when I was yeang, I was super active.</p><p><br/></p><p>- You can do your homework before you can clean your room.</p><p>- She has known how to use computers since she was 5 years old.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gashaw</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>1. She is my sister, and she is a teacher.</p><p>2. My mom is sick, but she does not go to a doctor.</p><ol start="3"><li><p>I win a game, so I taked the present.</p></li><li><p> You can talk, or you can be silend.</p></li><li><p>My brother come to my houe; we plaed game.</p></li><li><p>she is a good pearson; moreover, she is not from here.</p></li><li><p> I love being here;however, she dose not want to be with me.</p></li><li><p>Even if it rains,we are going to trip.</p></li><li><p>I will buy a car when I have money.</p></li><li><p>we will go, Befor the party was starting.</p></li><li><p>I am starting  to eat halthy foods since I am on diet.</p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:17:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mahmood Chalaby </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/mharamy/xddp8pynz29ht4wc/wish/3706941109</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Our new manager has changed some postion in the sales,  and he has changed the marketing department. </p><p>Many postions have changed in sales and marketing departments, but other departments are still under discussion. </p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>I like my  new duty, so I enjoy to meeting with my team.</p><p>You can start with  your new job, or you have to resign. </p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>You have to pass the exsam; you will lose around 9 months.</p><p>Having breakfst is healthy; it makes you more positive  during the day.</p><p><br/></p><p>I love  marketing class; moreover, I enjoy it with our new teacher.</p><p><br/></p><p>You have to provide us the document; however, it should be legalized from  your company.</p><p><br/></p><p>If you work alot, you will be more profssional.</p><p><br/></p><p>I will get my salary when I go to the finance room. </p><p><br/></p><p>Before you meet him, you have to buy a small gift for her mother </p><p><br/></p><p>Since I started with my  new job, I have met many new people working in same way .</p><p><br/></p><p>While you were eating your meal, I went to the market.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:18:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wayse</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I practice English every day, and I study some benificial English stories.</p><p>I want to speak English, but I do not have a native partner.</p><p>I drive for along time, so I should arrive at the right time.</p><p>I have to study hard, or I lose my chance to get better score.</p><p>My close friend attended to a football club; I casually play valleyball once a week.</p><p>I tried to fix the machine; morover, he helped me with his special equpment.</p><p><br></p><p>I practice speaking skill, since three month ago.</p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p>I admired to go swimming pool; however, I should do my work home quickly.</p><p><br></p><p>If i pass the exam, I can drive a car.</p><p><br></p><p>When i playing football, the weather get raining.</p><p><br></p><p>I have practiced speaking skill since 2017.</p><p>I have practiced speaking skill since I joined this course.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 14:21:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>AI Prompt</title>
         <author>sabaahamod22</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/mharamy/xddp8pynz29ht4wc/wish/3707085112</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Please review and correct my sentences. For each sentence, do the following:</p><ol><li><p><strong>Check and correct</strong></p><ul><li><p>Grammar</p></li><li><p>Sentence structure</p></li><li><p>Punctuation</p></li><li><p>Spelling and capitalization</p></li></ul></li><li><p><strong>Identify the sentence type</strong>, stating whether it is:</p><ul><li><p>Simple</p></li><li><p>Compound</p></li><li><p>Complex</p></li><li><p>Compound–complex</p></li></ul></li><li><p><strong>Explain the correction briefly</strong>, focusing on the main error(s).</p></li><li><p><strong>Provide the corrected sentence</strong> below the original.</p></li><li><p><strong>If the sentence is correct</strong>, confirm that it is accurate and well-formed, and still identify its sentence type.</p></li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-12-02 15:51:39 UTC</pubDate>
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