https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc Leave me some feedback on my pieces. en-us 2022-01-31 14:20:45 UTC 2022-04-11 13:36:08 UTC hello@padlet.com tignatowicz https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2021810685 Hi from period 6! ]]> 2022-01-31 17:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2021810685 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023427025 For starters,  I really like the idea of cats not roaming the street because bingus was our on the streets fro months on end because he got kicked out of his own home. He even has a chunk of hair missing on his face and a tip of his ear off. I liked how u addressed “everyone” as scotch plains citizens because it felt a lot more proffesinall and wasn’t bias using personal pronouns. One thing you could change is your typos, there was a lot of “stuff.like this” where there were no spaces after your periods. Overall amazing job!]]> 2022-02-01 14:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023427025 27mwashington https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023441979 Stars: 1.I like the word choice you used!
2.I like how you ask questions in your writing.

Wish: I wish you check your mechanics more for example intead of  “Mans best friend”. you could do “Mans best friend.”
*hint* look at where the period is placed
But overall this is a great essay!]]> 2022-02-01 14:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023441979 27jrichards1 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023831366  Star 1. I like that your hook really puts me in and they there’s a question at the end. 

Star 2.  I like that you made your Piece very heart felt.

Wish. To check your G.U.M.S  but especially the grammar.  ]]> 2022-02-01 17:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023831366 27swilliams4 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023906040 2022-02-01 17:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023906040 27swilliams4 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023989634 I like how you describe why animal shelters would be a good add to the community. One wish is just to check your gums. ]]> 2022-02-01 18:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2023989634 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2088323498 star
I liked how you did your counterargument it is true that other hearing aids cost way more than your product.
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I liked how the earring aid was shaped like an earring so it won´t make other people curious. ]]> 2022-03-10 13:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2088323498 27jrichards1 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2088815361 Star 1 I liked the fact in the beginning of the presentation 

Star 2 how you made them custom able 

Wish they were more affordable ]]> 2022-03-10 17:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2088815361 https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2139170078 Star - I liked how you added a photo of the note. It helped me to know what the note was liked which made it easier to understand what you were talking about in the article. 

Wish - I wish you would’ve talked more about the events about what happened right after Jonbenet was killed.]]> 2022-04-11 13:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/27klowe1/xcl7yb2zvvxm6amc/wish/2139170078