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      <title>Paraphrasing WS lesson Week 1 by Karen&#39;s class</title>
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      <description>Task 5: &#39;International students&#39; (Don&#39;t forget to add the reference.)</description>
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      <pubDate>2020-10-13 03:10:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Grace</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Those global students who were not <del>said that they are</del> satisfied with their overseas experience would not advise others <strong>to study in </strong><del>about</del> their organizations.     <mark>Reference?? </mark> (Karen)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 01:25:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jiahui Xie                               </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/830793527</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smith (2017) argue<strong>s</strong> that <del>a negative impact on</del> <strong>poor</strong> academic results can originate from the difficulties adapting to a foreign culture<strong>, </strong>which is experienced frequently by global students. <br><br>Great! (Karen)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 01:58:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zongyu Yuan(Kenzo)</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/830878209</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) argues that a consequence that <mark>some students</mark> may not perform well in studying is due to the fact that <mark>student who from other countries </mark>have to fit in local culture.   <strong>No need to repeat 'students' in the one sentence.  (Karen)<br><br></strong><br>Smith (2017) explains that poor academic results can stem from difficulties fitting into a new local culture, commonly experienced by overseas learners.<br><mark>Great!!  :)</mark><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 02:43:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 by YANG He</title>
         <author>1576544643</author>
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         <title>Task 4   Grace</title>
         <author></author>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 04:48:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 Kevin Wei</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/831172545</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) assert<strong>s</strong> that  global students frequently face some difficult situations <del>on</del> <strong>in </strong>adapting <strong>to an</strong> unknown culture and <del>it will</del> <del>this can cause</del> <strong>this can have a </strong><del>some </del>negative influence on educational performance.   (Karen)<br><em>(Be careful - 'will' is strong and is different from 'can')</em><br><br>Smith (2017) </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 05:26:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yeqi Su</title>
         <author>1253524490</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/831483663</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) argues that global students frequently face difficulties adapting to a new culture<strong>,</strong> which can <del>lead to passive</del> <strong>have an adverse</strong> effect <del>for</del>  <strong>on </strong>academic achievement.<br>(Karen )<br>Smith (2017) </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 07:51:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Luojia Tu</title>
         <author>tulj0108_cq</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/831670065</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) argues that overseas students frequently face challenges adapting to <mark>an</mark> <strong>a</strong> different culture<strong>, </strong>which can lead to poor <strong>academic</strong> results <del>for academic success.  </del>(Karen)<br><br>Smith (2017)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 09:21:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task  4  Xiaofan Wang</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) argues that global students frequently face difficulties adapting to <mark>an unconversant</mark>  <strong>a new</strong> culture<strong>, </strong>which can <mark>lead to passive results for academic expressions.??  </mark><strong> have a detrimental impact on academic success.  <br><br>Smith (2017) .....   (Karen)</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 09:39:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 Henry</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/831700924</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017) claims that <del>passive effects for  academic capability  </del> <strong>poor academic results can stem </strong><del>result</del> from the overseas students' difficulties <del>of</del> <strong>in </strong>adjusting to <mark>an inexperienced </mark><strong>a new </strong>culture.  (Karen)<br><br>Smith (2017) <br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 09:40:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Helen</title>
         <author></author>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-15 10:31:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 Angel</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><em>Smith( 2017).argue </em><strong><em>(SVA subject / verb agreement</em></strong><em> </em><strong><em>argues</em></strong><em>) that global students frequently face threats (??) </em><strong><em>difficulties</em></strong><em> adapting to </em><em><mark>unacquainted </mark></em><strong><em> a new </em></strong><em>culture</em><strong><em>,</em></strong><em> which can </em><em><del>lead  </del></em><strong><em> have </em></strong><em>a negative effect </em><em><del>to</del></em><em> </em><strong><em>on</em></strong><em> academic research.(?) success.   (Karen)</em></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-16 01:55:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 Hanqin Jiang (Nick)</title>
         <author>jiang45686</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/835009025</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smith(2017)argues that global students frequently face difficulties adjusting to <mark>an inexperienced  </mark> <strong>a new</strong> culture<strong>,</strong> which can <mark>lead to passive result  </mark><strong> have an adverse impact on </strong><del>for</del> academic capability. (OR success)   (Karen)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-16 08:18:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Name?</title>
         <author>karen_fong</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/837512578</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smith (2017) argue<mark>s</mark> that <del>a negative impact on  </del><strong>poor </strong>academic results can originate from the difficulties adapting to a foreign culture<mark>,</mark> which is experienced frequently by global students. <br>(Karen)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-17 09:57:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>David</title>
         <author>7855nsss6m</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/xcfaabw6i9g1fihc/wish/837540272</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017)argues that <del>world-wide</del> students <strong>studying abroad  </strong>frequently face difficulties adapting to a new culture<mark>, </mark>which can lead to <del>passive</del> <strong>poor </strong>academic results<mark>.<br>(Karen)</mark><br><br>Smith<mark> (</mark>2017)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-17 10:56:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 4 Zening Fan</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Smit<mark>h(</mark>2017)aruges that global student <mark>(pl=plural)</mark> frequently face difficulties adapting to a new culture, which can <del>lead to local influence on acadimic conclusion.  </del><mark>conclusion??    .....can have an adverse impact on academic success.  </mark>(Karen)<br><br><mark>Smith (2017) </mark>argues.... (see space after 'Smith') </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-10-18 07:34:02 UTC</pubDate>
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