Writing by https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q Term 3 en-us 2017-07-02 23:14:32 UTC 2017-07-03 00:03:31 UTC hello@padlet.com Mikaela - Writing Focus/Needs mikaela1gb95k4 https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907037 In Term Three I need to focus on writing with more emotion and similies to make the story or piece of writing more interesting. I need to also focus on my introduction and hooks.

I want to learn about emotion in a story or article.

In using similies and having emotion in my pieces of writing I find it difficult to do in tests and normal daily writing times.

Writing Goals:
1) To create mood in my writing by using interesting vocabulary, similes and metaphors.
 
2) To use different sentence structures for effect.
 
3) To add detail to my ideas by using specific vocabulary and to give examples.




]]> 2017-07-02 23:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907037 Brooke- Writing Focus/ Needs https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907117 In Term Three I will focus on adding more detail to my writing.
                     Goals
-To use different styles to present my work/writing 
- To use different sentence structure for effect.
- To Show not Tell
          ]]> 2017-07-02 23:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907117 Caroline - Writing Focus caroline672j5f4 https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907249 In my writing I want to improve how I write and I want to put more details. Also I want to put more adjectives into my writing.]]> 2017-07-02 23:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907249 Opi-Writing https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907260 next term I would like to learn how to  ]]> 2017-07-02 23:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907260 Joseph - Writing https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907288 I think next year I should be split apart from my aga because writing isn't a teamwork thing it is a independent thing and also I can not work with other people.]]> 2017-07-02 23:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907288 We samiuela7hmb2hk https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907325 To add detail to my ideas by using specific vocabulary and to give examples.]]> 2017-07-02 23:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907325 Claudia https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907520 For next term i want to improve more in putting more details into my writing and to show more of my wiring and not tell. (show not tell). ]]> 2017-07-02 23:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/caroline672j5f4/xbxsex1z1s0q/wish/177907520