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      <title>TASK 6 - PARAPHRASING (SBM) by Evi Azizah</title>
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         <author>eviazizah19</author>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 00:26:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>PARAPHRASING</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Hansen Marciano W (19722108)</div><div>Arshanty Fayza R.P (19722107)</div><div>Calista Rachel Nathania (19722153)<br><br></div><div>Chisholm A. (2004) states that the educational reforms would succeed giving results by pressing budget and growing efficiency. If the current education system is to fulfill the necessity of future generations, these reforms are long delayed and necessary.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Based on Abram’s 45th survey, 30 percent of the students concurred that the university should compensate for the students who fail to get a career in their field. The reason behind it is when the students graduate, many of them still have not got the job.</div><div><br></div><div>According to Cole R. (2006), in a world that changes fast, urbanization conducts an economic line-of-life to the city dwellers. However, it can be a signal disaster to the suburbs. The statement regarding ‘urbanization’ is over-easy to make it simple. Therefore, commentators ought to be careful before reaching reckless conclusions.</div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:18:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paraphrasing </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Enero(19722003)<br>Dzaki(19722061)<br>Harits(19722192)<br><br>According to Chisholm, education reform should lead to both cost reductions and efficiency gains. Reform is essential if the current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation.</div><div><br></div><div>Based on research by Abrams,&nbsp; due many students are jobless after graduation, 30 percent of students agree that universities should provide money-back guarantees for students who fail the job they want in their field.</div><div><br></div><div>According to Cole, urbanization in a fastly changing world can bring a financial lifeline to townspeople or a danger sign to those already living in the countryside. Making concise statements on "urbanization" is rather simple. Before drawing hasty conclusions, commentators should think carefully.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:18:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>paraphrasing </title>
         <author>naulibasakayla</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Vania Belinda - 19722069</div><div>Kayla Maylia Naulibasa - 19722174</div><div><br></div><div>Chisholm stated that the educational reforms should lead to expenditure decrease and capability raise. If the present education system is to fulfill the needs of the next generation, these reforms are far behindhand and necessary.</div><div><br></div><div>based on Abrams’s survey, due to the high number of students being unemployed after graduating, 30% of them agree that if they do not get a job based on what they want, the university should guarantee money return.</div><div><br></div><div>According to Cole, urbanization is a quick evolving world that offers citizens a financial lifeline or heralds doom for those already living on the margins. Simplistic remarks concerning urbanization are all too common. Before stating uncertain assumptions ,commentators should think things out carefully.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:19:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Insyira Sani (19722213)Zahra Jasmine Putri P. (19722090)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ol><li>In the article, Abraham points out that many fresh-graduated students are unemployed because of the inability to find a job that suits their field. As a result, 30 percent of students agree with the idea of university providing a money-back gurantee.&nbsp;</li><li>Cost reductions and efficiency&nbsp; &nbsp; improvements must be carried out in educational reforms. If the current education system is to comply the needs of the following generation, these reforms are both long overdue and necessary. (Chisholm, A. 2006:42).</li><li>The conclusion about urbanization can not be done hastily as it can bring economic lifeline for citizens and signals disaster to the people who live on the margin. Thus, commentators should not underestimate the statement about ‘urbanization’ (Cole, R. 2006:51)</li></ol><div><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:19:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jeny Aurelia 19722070/ Felicia Angelie Tan 19722027</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Chisholm states that if the education system in the current moment is hoped to comply the next generation needs. It is&nbsp; essential that the educational reforms should deliver the decreasing in costs as well as expanding the efficiency. But in fact, this reform is delayed.</div><div><br></div><div>Abrams points out that based on the survey&nbsp; a great amount of students are found to be jobless after they graduate. 30 percent of students consent that if they were unsuccesful in getting the job in the field they desire, the university have to provide a money back guarantee.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Commentators believe that urbanisation in the fast changing world can result in the increasing of economic lifeline to those who life in the city, but on the other hand becoming a disaster for those who lives on the margins. Cole states that it is too easy to come out with a statement regarding urbanisation, and commentators should reflect back before coming into precipitant conclusions.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:19:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Angelica Meilia Hamsa 19722086, Shafa Firdaus 19722042</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The education reformation should lower the cost and increase the efficiancy of the educational system. The current educational system is no longer suitable for the next generation of students (Chisholm, A. 2006:42)&nbsp;<br><br>Based on our survey, 30 percent of students stated that university must take responsibility by offering a money-back guarantee if they failed to get their dream job and become unemployed when they graduated. (Abrams 45)&nbsp;<br><br>Urbanisation in a dynamic world can create an sustainable economy to the citizens but also adding more pressure for the ones who are living on the margins.There is no an easy way to simplify 'urbanisation'. Commentators should reconsider their thoughts before sharing their opinions. (Cole, R. 2006:51).</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:20:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>PARAPHRASING</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Daniqa Qirkha (19722004)<br>Nadine Cinta (19722136)<br>Bintang Aurellia (19722196)<br><br>According to Chisholm (2006), the changes in educational system must affect in both decreasing expenses and boost productivity. To meet the needs of the next generation, these changes are long overdue and vital.<br><br>Abrams study revealed that due to many students being jobless after graduation, 30% of them felt like the university need to provide a money-back assurance if the students fail on getting the profession that they are passionate about.&nbsp;<br><br>Cole (2006) implies that in a world that’s changing quickly, urbanisation may result in either financial viability to townspeople or prompt disaster to those living on the margins. Simplistic statement concerning about ‘urbanisation’ are all too common. So, people who judge must consider their arguments thoroughly before drawing a quick conclusion.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>PARAPRHASING</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Akbar Fajar Febrian - 19722114<br>Jose Armando - 19722064<br>Nailah Farah Fadhilah - 19722099<br><br>Number 1 :<br>Minimized the cost and maximized the efficiency should be the outcome of education rearrangement. To comply the needs of the next generation, the rearrangement of present education could not be delayed anymore and needed. (Cole, R. 2006:51)</div><div><br>Number 2:</div><div>Abrams, 45, stated that based on their survey, 30% of students want to get insurance on their tuition if they dont get accepted to the job they want after they graduates since there are many students are struggling to find a job&nbsp;</div><div><br>Number 3:</div><div>Making simple statements of 'urbanisastion' is way too easy. But according to R. Cole back in 2006, before concluding unconsidered conclusions, commentators have got to be fully aware.&nbsp; That is because the urbanisation while the world is swiftly changing could possibly carry an economic lifeline to occupants living in city or signal disaster to people living on the edge of economic borderline.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:20:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>PARAPHRASING</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Saputra Dewa (19722020)<br>Muhammad Riza M. I. (19722084)<br>Michael Oranlius P. (19722133)<br><br>Paragraph 1</div><div>In the article, Chisholm (2006) states that lower fees and enhanced efficiency are supposed to be the result of educational reforms. If the current education system want to fulfill the needs of the future generation, these expired and essential reforms must be implied in the educational system.<br><br></div><div>Paragraph 2</div><div>Abrams 45th survey states that 30 percent of students approve that if students are unsuccessful in obtaining the job they really want in their major, the university is supposed to give them a money-back guarantee. It is because there are so many students who become unemployed after they graduate from their university.<br><br></div><div>Paragraph 3</div><div>According to Cole (2006), in a rapidly changing world, urbanisation can have an impact on the economic lifeline of the citizen as well as signal disaster to the city's outskirts. A simplistic statement about "urbanisation" is easy to make. Before getting hasty conclusions, the commentators must be careful.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:21:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Callista Christhabella (19722030)<br>Tanti Devita (19722146)<br><br>Educational improvement must impact on cost effectivity and mount up efficiency. If the present of education system accomodating of the next generation so these renewal will be long overdue and necessary (Chrislom, A. 2006:42)<br><br>In the book, it is stated that there are lots of university students who ended up unemployed when they finished university. For this reason, based on the survey conducted by Abrams, 30% of the students believed that they should receive money in return if they couldn’t land a job on their prefered areas.&nbsp;<br><br>Educational improvement must impact on cost effectivity and mount up efficiency. If the present of education system accomodating of the next generation so these renewal are expected and necessary (Chrislom, A. 2006:42)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:21:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paraphrasing</title>
         <author>givomasetiawan</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Givo Muska Setiawan (19722154)<br>Marcelino Sahputra (19722183)<br><br>Text 1<br>According to Chisholm, the effects of the educational reforms should be cost reduction and higher efficiency. If the current educational system is to satisfy the needs of the upcoming generation, reforms are long overdue and necessary.<br><br>Text 2<br>Abrams states that according to his survey, because many students are finding themselves jobless after graduating, 30 percent of students said that the university should give them a money-back guarantee if they fail in obtaining the job they really want in their field.<br><br>Text 3<br>According to Cole, he states that urbanization in a world that is rapidly changing quickly might either give city dwellers a financial lifeline or signal disaster for those who are already living on the margins. Making simple statements about ‘urbanization’ is too easy. Commentators should think carefully before making conclusions.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:21:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paraphrasing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Anselma Sita (19722162)<br>Noor Raisya (19722044)<br>Albert Fo (19722172)<br><br>1. A. Chisholm (2006) points out that the educational improvement are crucial and long delayed if the ongoing education system is to fulfill the needs of the next generation. However, these reforms should have the outcome in both decreasing costs and growing efficiency.&nbsp;<br><br>2. In the article, Abrams 45 states that there are ￼￼many students discoverd themselves unemployed after they finished their study in university. The study says there are 30 percents of students approved to get compensasion on condition that the student do not get the job at their field.<br><br>3. R. Cole (2006) implies that it is too effortless to make superficial declaration of “urbanisation” Therefore, critics should send back carefully before publishing the quick conclusion. Owing to the fact that urbanisastion has potential in a quick changing world that can guide an economic lifeline to urbanite or disaster warning to those living on the border. &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:21:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paraphrasing Abner, Harsya, Haykal</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br></div><div>Harsya Refandani&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; (19722205)</div><div>Haykal Tristan Dwisetyo &nbsp; (19722170)<br>Reynard Abner.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; (19722013)<br><br>Cheisholm pointed out back in 2006, that Educational reforms should result in both bringing down cost and increasing efficiency.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>These changes have been long delayed and&nbsp; necessary if the current educational system is to meet the needs of the next generation&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>According to Abrams research, Our study found that 30% of students believed that the university should give students with a money-back guarantee if they are unable to secure the career they really want in their profession because so many students are finding themselves unemployed after graduation.</div><div><br></div><div>In 2006 Cole, R. said that In a world that is changing quickly, urbanization can either provide a financial lifeline or be a disaster for those who are already marginalized. It is far too simple to make generalizations about "urbanization." Before making conclusions, commentators should carefully consider all the information.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-03 02:22:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paraphrasing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Ira Ahadiyati (19722014)<br>Putri Maharani A (19722054)<br><br>According to Chisholm (2006), reducing costs and enhancing efficiency should be the results of the changes in education. However, if the current education system is to satisfy the needs of the next generation, the improvements will be long overdue and necessary.&nbsp;<br><br>Abram states that based on their research, there are 30% of students agreed that universities should provide a money-back guarantee if students don't get the job they really want in their profession because so many graduates are finding themselves jobless.&nbsp;<br><br>Cole (2006) implies that before making an assumptions about urbanisation, commentators should think things out carefully because in a world that changing so fast, either an economic lifeline to citizens or signal disaster to those already living on the margins can be brought by the urbanisation.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Danish Maheswari Susetio 19722195 - Felicia Fedora Halim 19722122</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Chisholm (2006), reduced costs and increased efficiency are expected outcomes of the educational changes. These changes are long overdue and imperative if the current educational system is to fulfil the needs of the following generation.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Thirty percent of students believed that the university need to provide a money-back warranty if students don't land the job they truly desire in their industry since most students are finding themselves jobless after graduation, based on Abrams’ study.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Cole (2006) states that in a world that is changing quickly, urbanisation can either be a source of economic hope for urban residents or a catastrophe for those who are already marginalized. Simplistic assumptions regarding "urbanisation" are all too simple to make. Before drawing rushed conclusions, commentators should think carefully.</div>]]></description>
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