My luminous padlet by Sidra Rashid https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5 Made with a bold sensibility en-us 2017-05-09 04:44:09 UTC 2017-05-09 07:00:00 UTC hello@padlet.com what is wrong with this paragraph? s_rashid985 https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5/wish/170668955 write the name of your team
for e.g. Team Humeira

and then write your answers.]]> 2017-05-09 05:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5/wish/170668955 Team Faheem https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5/wish/170679183 There is no indent and closing sentence. It also lacks a topic sentence



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Incorrect grammar

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There's no audience in the text
There's is no indend]]> 2017-05-09 06:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5/wish/170679328 Team Aaron https://padlet.com/s_rashid985/xac4p512mfq5/wish/170679372 The paragraph is really short
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Spelling mistake

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