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         <title>Best Travel Blogs 2020</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I looked up 'best travel blogs 2020' and chose the first website that listed travel blogs (<a href="https://blogonyourown.com/best-travel-blogs/">https://blogonyourown.com/best-travel-blogs/</a>). Then I picked nomadicmatt.com </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-04-28 11:08:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2020-04-29 09:13:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2020-04-29 09:14:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mirjam&#39;s Travel Blog Analysis </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nomadicmatt.com is an instructional niche blog about travelling, that focuses on “How to’s”. The author of the blog is Matt, who is a best-selling New York Times author. The blog is a personal brand, as Matt, also introduces himself as Nomadic Matt. </div><div>The purpose of the blog is to help people find ways to travel cheaper and to find destinations to visit. It addresses people of all ages who want to find a way to see the world on a budget. </div><div>The blog is part of a genre ecology of travel instructions. It is similar to the traditional printed travel guide.</div><div>The blog’s style can definitely be described as hybrid, both informational, as well as personal. Examples for the informational style are: </div><div>·       “Book Your Trip: Logistical Tips and Tricks”</div><div>·      “Taking a stroll atop them offers an unbeatable view of both the city and the countryside’s rolling hills. Plus, they’re free!”</div><div>·      “You can go an entire trip without ever stepping foot on The Strip or in a casino.”</div><div>Examples for the personal style are: </div><div>·      “But I miss the outdoors, seeing my friends in person, glasses of wine at restaurants, and going to cocktail bars. I miss freedom.”</div><div>·      “I hope my future self will one day read this post and say, ‘You kept it up and found balance.’”</div><div>·      “But there is one city that captures my love of the country the most: Girona.”</div><div>·      “If you’re like me, you probably have preconceived notions of certain destinations.”</div><div>The author mostly tries to engage the audience by building a sense of community. On the one hand, he addresses the reader with the personal pronoun “you”, on the other hand, he refers to himself and his readers as “we”, p.ex. „the places we expect“. Furthermore, through phrases such as “If you’re like me“ he assumes that his readers share some qualities with him. Other than this, not much audience engagement can be found and overall, it can be said that the author establishes quite an authorial stance. By not asking the readers for suggestions in return, the author achieves a monologic writing style, which contributes to the author’s stance as a professional and expert. It’s expressed through the following phrases “I recommend taking“, “I suggest”, “Your next stop should be” “No visit to Cape Town is complete without coming here. Do not skip this!“. In addition to instructional words, written in the imperative, like “avoid, fly and go”, those phrases convey the sense that the author knows what is right, and that the reader should follow this advice. </div><div>In terms of layout, the blog is well structured. The headlines are mostly very concise and often try to motivate the reader to take an active step. But they are also very subjective, especially, as many of them start with “my favourite…” or “Best..”. As a result, they are often not as brief as they could be. However, the headlines are clear and do not need any deciphering. They are in accordance with the content of the blog entry, hence, satisfying for the reader. Under the heading, there is a picture, depicting the place that the blog entry is about. Followed by a short introduction, there is a series of numbered subheadings. They are brief and consistent in style and are immediately followed by another picture, that should attract the interest of the reader. The blog entries end with a short summary and often a P.S. section in which the author gives some extra tips and tricks.</div><div>Both sentences and paragraphs are neither particularly long or short but have the perfect length to facilitate reading and skimming for information. The font is easy to read and might be avenir. It is written in black, except for links and some key words, headings and subheadings and the P.S. that are bolded and printed in a light petrol blue. Bullet points are frequently used in the text. </div><div>Written form a first-person perspective, the narration mode is journalistic as it is nonetheless neutral in style and not overly informal. </div><div>The author does not use many rhetorical devices. The most common one is rhetorical questions that should engage the reader and contribute to the sense of community that the author tries to create. The author uses numerous adjectives and adverbs, such as “absolutely, amazing, super exciting” to make the text more natural, as if it was narrated to a friend. This makes the author more relatable as well. </div><div>In the introduction the author uses lexis that is related to liking, loving and favourites, which should excite the reader for what’s to come. The conclusion briefly summarises the content of the blog post and the author adds some more personal references about his own travels to that place and why he enjoyed it. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Boris&#39; Travel Blog Analysis</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>10 THINGS TO SEE AND DO IN GIRONA, SPAIN<br><br></div><div>Nomadicmatt.com is a travel blog which was started in 2006 and has since then regularly been updated with entries informing readers about countries and cities to visit. The author of the blog is Matthew Kepnes who created this blog to advice other avid travelers on how to get the most authentic travel experience for a fair price. <br><br></div><div>Nomadicmatt is part of the genre ecology of travel instructions and is structured like a travelling log and review. The author usually lists various sights and locations he visited and describes the experience, adding personal but also public information (addresses, opening hours, prices etc.) to the paragraphs. Thus, the blog shows a hybridity of styles. It fulfills its purpose of informing by introducing the various sights and places but it also involves the reader by introducing personal experience into the writing (“I first visited here in 2012 and have been back a total of four times. I love Girona”; “It’s one of my favorite countries…”). Further evidence of involvement and audience engagement are the use of the personal pronoun “you” (“To help you make the most of your trip”) and the use of imperatives in paragraphs but also in the headings (“Make it part of your next trip to Spain”; “Tour the Arab Baths”). Additionally, this strengthens the relationship between the reader and author and changes the reading to a more conversational style discourse. <br><br></div><div>Layout and visuals of a blog are almost as important as the writing itself. An unclear structure makes the reading experience not enjoyable and unappealing visuals can cause the blog to be overlooked. The headline of the blog (“10 THINGS TO SEE AND DO IN GIRONA, SPAIN”) is a rather typical example of a headline in a travel blog, however, it can be considered quite engaging. The subheadings then subsequently list the places and activities referred to in the main heading. As mentioned in the previous paragraph, subheadings use imperatives to engage with the readers. Furthermore, the subheadings are numbered, and the font is larger and bolder which gives structure to the whole text. Visuals typically follow the subheadings introducing the sight optically and supporting the description of the sight. The chosen visuals are vibrant and appealing. This makes the blog more attractive to the reader and appeals to the core feeling of traveling which the readers most likely share. <br><br></div><div>Throughout the text the author uses emotive language (“love”, “lovely”, “awesome”) and the register in general is rather neutral or informal which is probably due to the blog’s first-person perspective. This style allows the author to further build a relationship with the reader and, thus, trigger audience emotions. Phrases like “Spain is awesome”, “lovely people” and “city that captures my love of the country” in the introduction appeal to the readers’ emotions and, thus, capture their attention. The promise of “10 things to see…” in the headline further guarantees information and “here are my top things to see and do in Girona:” lures the readers and sends them down the road to the fulfillment of the promise. Finally, the conclusion summarizes the guide, once again appeals to the readers’ emotions (“I <em>love</em> Girona. Most people do.”) and motivates the readers to travel to the described place.<br><br></div><div> <br><br></div><div> <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Karin&#39;s Travel Blog Analysis</title>
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         <pubDate>2020-05-04 19:45:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Petra&#39;s Travel Blog Analysis</title>
         <author>petra121bauer</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>NOMADIC MATT</div><div> </div><div><strong>Type of blog:</strong></div><ul><li>mainly an <em>instructional</em> blog (most blog posts revolve around “what to do”, “how to …”, et cetera), but it also has some informative elements (“our new…”, “how to be a travel hacker”, et cetera), lists (included in instructional blog posts as well) </li><li>niche blog: <em>travel blog </em></li><li>personal brand</li></ul><div> </div><ul><li><strong>Who is the author? What is the purpose? Who is the intended audience?</strong></li><li>The <em>author</em> is Matt Kepnes (or Nomadic Matt, as he calls himself on his blog), an author and self-declared traveler. He also founded the blog; sometimes, guest authors write posts, but generally it’s Matt himself</li><li>the <em>purpose</em> of the blog is to help its readers “travel more for less”, give advice on how to spend less time and money with getting more out of their trips </li><li>the blog promotes itself by stating that they don’t include sponsored content or paid trips </li><li>the <em>intended audience </em>of the blog is people who want to travel individually and want to save money and/or be more efficient when travelling </li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Is the blog part of a genre ecology of other genres?</strong></div><div>the blog is part of a genre ecology of <em>travel instructions</em> </div><div><strong> </strong></div><div><strong>Does the blog remind you of any other offline equivalent genres (diary? Photo album? Travel log? Review? Editorials? Personal webpages)</strong></div><div>many of the posts remind of actual <em>travel guidebooks</em> (with information on where to stay, what to see, …)</div><div><strong> </strong></div><div><strong>Register and purpose?</strong></div><div>the blog clearly shows a <em>hybridity of styles </em>and often combines language that reflects a purpose to inform and involve in the same blog posts </div><div>purpose to <em>inform</em> (informative formal style):</div><ul><li>especially in informational passages, the register is rather higher than low (you are required to, opportunities to bypass the traditional travel infrastructure)</li><li>mostly full sentences, even though structure is not overly complex</li><li>dry’ information is often included (number of inhabitants, geography, …)</li><li>cohesive devices for structured texts (additionally, also, here are some…, so)</li></ul><div>purpose to <em>involve</em> (emotional, personal, conversational style):</div><ul><li>colloquial and humorous phrases, on the creative side (when you are starved for time and money) </li><li>some sentences are rather short and structured like in spoken language (but, let me tell you, we live in an age of…, I mean you’re spending the money anyway</li><li>contractions often used (there’s, don’t, I’d like)</li><li>emotions and feelings are often included (I still feel like a caged bird)</li><li> imperative creates a notion of ‘we’ -&gt; conversational </li><li>personal pronouns you and I are often used (in combination), we</li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Audience engagement?</strong></div><div><em>lexical choices</em> for engaging the audience:</div><ul><li>lexical field of emotions </li><li>strong adjectives (but not necessarily superlative – e.g. excellent rather than best) </li><li>personal experience is often added (to make audience sympathize with the author), personal asides</li></ul><div><em>grammatical choices</em> for engaging the audience, creating a sense of community:</div><ul><li>personal pronouns in 1<sup>st</sup> and 2<sup>nd</sup> person -&gt; you and I are often used (in combination), we</li><li>imperative is often used, often combined with conditionals (if you like… then + imperative) -&gt; conveys a benefit to the readers </li></ul><div>hyperlinks to sources that are described in the posts -&gt; practical, useful for readers </div><div> </div><div><strong>Features to build a relationship with the audience</strong> include use of the<em> first personal pronoun “</em>I” (expressing deep subjectivity and suggesting authenticity). </div><div>The <em>second person pronoun</em> “you”, or imperative mood – conveys a conversational type of discourse – involving the reader in the experiences of the blog author and the blog author being involved in the experience of the reader)</div><div> </div><div><strong>Author identity?</strong></div><div>The author describes himself as <em>expert on travelling</em> (in the “About” section) and shows this attitude in the blog posts as well. <em>Pronouns in 1</em><em><sup>st</sup></em><em> person</em> (I, my) are featured when the author lists and recalls his/her own experiences and travel hacks </div><div>by the use of <em>imperatives</em>, the notion of the author being the expert (plus the readers being eager to learn and the instructions being almost infallible) is enforced (be sure to…) </div><div> </div><div><strong>Lay out and visuals</strong></div><ul><li>at the top of the page, there usually is a <em>heading</em> in bold capital letters, followed by an image that fits the post’s theme</li><li>the blog posts combine <em>multiple ways of structuring</em>, which fits their writing style (e.g. often, the blog posts are about lists and the items are listed as subheadings) </li><li><em>images</em>: not more than 5 or so per blog post (due to loading the website?) – one general image reflecting the general ‘vibe’ of the topic and the others depicting some of the smaller items of the text </li><li>images mainly show cities, urban life, etc. – people are less common (e.g. when travelers are introduced)  </li><li><em>subheadings</em> in every blog post (that I looked at) – quite short, sometimes only 1-3 words, are meant to be informative </li><li>after one subheading, numerous <em>paragraphs</em> may follow, but they are quite short (5 sentences tops)</li><li><em>in between paragraphs</em>, there is one blank line -&gt; creates lots of white space, text appears light</li><li><em>Hyperlinks</em> are written in bold and blue while other text (incl. headings and subheadings) is in black</li><li><em>bullets</em> are used (rather unnumbered than numbered, which may have to do with the blog posts being structured as lists)</li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Headlines</strong></div><ul><li>headlines are not particularly long, ca. 15 words tops  </li><li>no full sentences</li><li>are clear to a broad audience</li><li>often promise something (how to get untold stories, the ultimate guide to…, 6 best…) and therefore convey a benefit to the audience </li><li>strong adjectives, sometimes in superlative (new, best, …)</li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Discourse Particularities:</strong></div><ul><li>the register is <em>mainly neutral </em>(most vocabulary is not particularly formal, informal lexis occurs when the engagement between reader and writer is in focus) </li><li>the blog posts are mostly written in <em>narrative mode </em>(experiences are handed from the author to the audience) but some bits are in a journalistic mode (when it comes to describing particularities of cities, countries)</li><li>rhetorical devices: for example, <em>metaphors</em> play a certain role (a wave of) </li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Introduction:</strong></div><ul><li>the introduction often starts with <em>general statements</em>, leaving out personal information</li><li>it features<em> key information</em> on cities, countries, etc., mixed with the author’s opinion about it </li><li>strong &amp; positive language, e.g. adjectives (awesome, favourite, popular) </li><li>possible <em>moves</em>: lure reader down the page (headline promises 25 things to… and then in the introduction the reason why these things may be worthwhile is given but the 25 things are not yet mentioned) </li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Conclusion?</strong></div><ul><li>the conclusion is often introduced with ***, followed by a blank line</li><li>it seems like the blog posts jump from general (introduction) to more specific (main text) to general (conclusion) –&gt; often, the topic if the introduction is repeated in the conclusion, but imperatives are added </li></ul><div>Moves:</div><ul><li>Motivate readers (go there!)</li><li>Summarize</li><li>Call to action</li></ul><div> </div><ul><li><strong>Genre ecology of the internet:</strong></li><li><em>outside texts</em> per se are not really featured, but what is often done is adding links to websites and companies that are recommended in the blog posts</li><li>the <em>blog posts</em> also often refer to each other and are linked (From lively <strong>Barcelona</strong> to island paradises…, <strong>Confined inside for the last six weeks</strong>, no matter how often I shut my eyes, it’s simply not the same.) -&gt; purpose is to keep the readers on the website as long as possible (since they have paid advertisements on their website, this might be why)</li></ul><div> </div><div><strong>Story design:</strong></div><div>-</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2020-05-05 09:59:09 UTC</pubDate>
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