https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6 Peer Evaluation en-us 2019-04-28 19:15:12 UTC 2019-05-06 00:47:24 UTC hello@padlet.com patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/354811679 GLOW: I really enjoyed your presentation. I liked that you pointed out the problems of society and people trying to be cool or fun. I think it was great that you included LinkedIn and talked about its positive usage. One thing that I found exceptional was the way you linked everything, making the links your headers for the next topic.
GROW: While you talked about creativity, I wish you would have talked more about your creativity.]]> 2019-04-28 20:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/354811679 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/354811864 GLOW: Introduced a lot of tech that I did not know about before and really showed how technology aided you.
GROW: Similar to my presentation, there is too much text and not enough visuals. By adding more visuals to the presentation, you would help the audience be more into it.]]> 2019-04-28 20:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/354811864 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356940294 GLOW: I think you did a great job expressing your creativity and showing how your creative and innovative thinking helped you in accounting. 
GROW: The only thing that I could think of to make the presentation better is for you to be more enthusiastic about the presentation.]]> 2019-05-05 14:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356940294 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356949358 GLOW: Very clear and well spoken. 
GROW: Make the video without the editor trial water mark which covers the screen and distracts the audience from focusing on your presentation. ]]> 2019-05-05 16:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356949358 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356950420 GLOW: I like that you incorporated social media and apps which aid us in group work and being productive. I think the positives are often at times forgotten, but you made sure to make them shine.
GROW: Some parts of your presentation were in bullet points. Make the rest of the presentation that way to avoid losing your audience's interest.]]> 2019-05-05 16:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356950420 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356952704 GLOW: Very enthusiastic, clear, and well spoken. I believe you did a great job of explaining how schools really shut down our creativity.
GROW: Shorten the paragraphs or use bullet points to keep the audience focused. Include pictures, especially vibrant ones which match your enthusiasm.]]> 2019-05-05 16:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356952704 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356954393 GLOW: I really like the use of effects in your presentation and how you could flip through quotes and stats. The use of charts and graphs was a great idea.
GROW: I could not find flaws with this presentation. It was balanced and covered every topic in a timely and innovative manner.]]> 2019-05-05 16:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356954393 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356957052 GLOW: Lots of examples used and made the presentation very relatable. The mix of bullets and pictures allows the audience to stay interested and not lose focus.
GROW: The background noise of the smoke alarm (battery dying) distracts the audience from the presentation.]]> 2019-05-05 17:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356957052 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356957910 GLOW: You made your paragraphs short and concise which made it easy to view and follow. This helped to focus on what you were saying as well.
GROW: You covered a lot of topics, but it would have been nice to hear more from you about all of the topics. You still had more time available to explain certain topics, especially the areas dealing with creativity.

]]> 2019-05-05 17:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356957910 patrick_cleaver https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356959007 GLOW: The enthusiasm and tone was great. I especially liked your explanation of the core classes at Seton Hall. You made it clear that our creativity was being taken away. Our final work could look creative, but it was not our creativity that was expressed, but rather that of the professors (which defeats the purpose of the classes).
GROW: You expanded on all the topics thoroughly, but that led to you going over the time allotted. I believe that you had great examples, but could have shortened your presentation by being more concise.]]> 2019-05-05 17:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/356959007 keara_reilly https://padlet.com/patrick_cleaver/x7swv5l8h4i6/wish/357010001 GLOW:

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