TOEFL INTERMEDIATE 3 by Joseph Anthony Aleman Ontulan

Write at least 300 words. Submit your Essay in MS Word format.

anthonyalemanontulanjoseph — 2021-09-23 06:23:00 UTC

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Ho Doan Thanh Van (Lisa)- Class I3

2021-09-26 08:00:54 UTC

Score: 9.4/10

Nguyen Quoc Bao(Timmy)-TI3

2021-09-26 09:14:07 UTC

Do not write what the function of each paragraph is. Work on how you can effectively write a conclusion. Refer to our previous lesson.

Score: 8/10

Pham Ngoc Phuong Anh (Rose) Class TI3

2021-09-26 12:26:25 UTC

Your conclusion is not complete.
Score: 8.8/10

Thái Minh Trí (Henry) TI3

2021-09-26 13:04:14 UTC

Score: 9.3/10

Writing Task 1 (Writing Project 1): Write at least a 300-word essay based on the topic below. Please write the heading, "Writing Project 1" and this topic. Submit in MS Word File. Don't forget to include your full Vietnamese name.

anthonyalemanontulanjoseph — 2021-09-28 08:25:59 UTC

Travelling is more important than reading books in order to understand the people and the world. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

TANG TUE MAN (MONICA)- TI3 // Score: 8.5

2021-09-30 06:48:46 UTC

TANG TUE MAN (MONICA)- TI3

2021-09-30 06:51:23 UTC

Score: 9.2/10

NGUYEN MY THI (ELLY) TI3

2021-09-30 06:56:59 UTC

Score: 9.4/10

DUONG UY VU(JERRY) TI3

2021-09-30 07:00:30 UTC

This is a great essay, but pls work on your conclusion. Refer back to our previous discussion on paragraph plan.

Score: 9.5/10

Score: 6.0/10

2021-09-30 07:08:58 UTC

Lâm Thuỵ Tuyết Trinh TI3 // Score: 8.9/10

2021-09-30 07:13:22 UTC

^{We should experience reality rather than imagine and just hear it. Maybe books are part of the reality of not knowing 100%. Reading has always been a useful habit that many people love, but besides providing a great deal of knowledge,endless treasure of knowledge about all areas of the lives of their predecessors, written down, told and passed on to the next generation.For each person, travel is an experience, a enjoyment, a rest. In particular, traveling around the world is a favorite of young people. But few people know the benefits of traveling. However, no matter how meaningful, travel always brings certain benefits.
Firstly in the books are including details and information about the world, the people, the cultures and the history. Hence having myriad books means to have the world front of us inasmuch as not every one of us has the possibility to travel all over the world. For example, when I was a teenager must need to care for my little sister and I didn't have a possibility to leave from my house, hence I read myriad history books. That help me to know all europian country’s history and the beautiful places. For me, the most important is reading books.

Secondly, our brain works and improve more imagination while we read books. As the doctor says reading one book means healthy memory and improve skills in writing. For example, my neighborhood has limited skills in spoken and writing mother language. Hence to develop this skills he read myriad books and after a few months he eliminated most of the grueling problems in writing and spoke language process. we can not count the value of books helping a lot of people.

In conclusion, I believe that reading books involves myriad knowledge to understand a renowned country and their history. Including the imagination in a reading process improve understanding of the world and the people more than traveling.}

2021-09-30 07:13:37 UTC

Score: 9.3/10

Nguyen Truong Phu (Jack) - TI3

2021-09-30 07:14:18 UTC

Score: 9.3

Writing Project 1-Nguyen Quoc Bao-Timmy // Score: 8.8

2021-10-02 07:48:04 UTC

Writing Project 1 - Nguyen Truong Phu (Jack)

2021-10-02 09:56:22 UTC

Score: 9.2/10

Pham Ngoc Phuong Anh (Rose) Project 1 // Score: 9.5

2021-10-02 11:53:44 UTC

Hsu Chiao Lin (Leah) - TI3 Projct 1 // Score: 9.4

2021-10-02 14:34:01 UTC

through reading book our mind is planted with the author words as seed of their view about everything in life. I do strongly believe that reading books helps us understand people and the worls more.
firstly, by reading book our imagination is expand to it fullest. If we read stories about people and life, by the art of describing, the characters is brought into life by the author, and by describing them from inside out we get to understand them more clearly.
Secondly, by reading you get to know more by just sitting in one place which bennifit the reader alot. Yes travelling seems more exiciting but how can all of us afford to travel everyday just to learn new things? so reading is a better option.
to conclude, i do not say travelling is not important but i think reading is more realistic and affordable. Nowadays you can even get to read free books only, how advantage for us!

Hsu Chiao Lin (Leah) - project 2 // Score: 9.2

2021-10-02 14:46:15 UTC

Through modern technology we get the accest to watch perfomance recorded almost perfectly for us to watch on tv. Eventhough, watching on tv still cannot compare to the feelling to stand in the crowd and enojoy the show to reallist.
To begin with, i would like to state out that by being present at the moment an artist is performing you get to see every special lightning, dancing, the music, the vocal. the way it touch you and you can feel it fully with five sense is so much more then just lying at home and watch and hear it only.
Also, you get to the chance to see your favorite artist or idol in real life and may come a chance when you can shake their hand or ask for a selfie. Them will later forever become a piece of one of the best memory you can carry on with you.
In summary, attending a live perfomance will always be more enjoyable and memorable. A screen on tv can not describe every moment for you.

Writing Project 1 - Ho Doan Thanh Van (Lisa)// Score: 9.4

2021-10-02 15:09:12 UTC

DANG GIA LINH (JASMINE)-TI3 // Score: 9.3

2021-10-02 15:35:40 UTC

Write at least 300 words. Submit your Essay in MS Word format.

In the old days, people who wanted to see a play or a sporting event had to go to the place to see it. Nowadays, people can watch on TV, at the same time, watch a variety of events at the same time. I prefer watching on TV than live.
First, watching TV saves time. No need to go anywhere, don't worry about traffic jams and late for the show.
Next, if you are busy in the morning, you can watch it again in the evening. And when watching live, you have to stand in line to buy tickets soon or you won't be able to see them.
Watching TV at home you have a separate space to watch. Watching live sometimes you are disturbed by others when watching a movie, that feeling is very uncomfortable like you are watching to the point where the ad appears. The TV can rewind as many times as you want, and you're not afraid to miss any detail in the movie.
In short, watching TV helps you with a lot of things: saving time, money on vehicles, ... not afraid to miss any details in the movie. Watch it as many times as you want

DANG GIA LINH (JASMINE)-TI3 // Score: 9,2

2021-10-02 16:11:37 UTC

In the world, there are many things we should learn, many places to explore. We often read books or travel to learn. Traveling is better than reading. You get to experience real life.
First, reading only tells us part of the story, while traveling you can experience the reality of being able to accompany the people there to take you on a tour of their country.
Second, by reading books you can only read and understand, but cannot experience reality. In tourism, people both introduce culture and cuisine and let you experience. It is often said that "learning goes hand in hand" means that we both learn and experience, we will remember longer when we just read books without experiencing.
Next, the knowledge in the book is only a part, but when you travel you will know more things, or you may discover something new that no one else knows.
In short, travel is a good experience to help you have unforgettable memories, new experiences that you previously only read in books did not experience.

Chen Nhi An (Sally) - TI3 // Score: 9.2

2021-10-02 16:18:37 UTC

Chen Nhi An (Sally) - TI3 - Writing Project 1 // Score: 9,5

2021-10-02 16:20:49 UTC