Body 1:

Topic sentence: on the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that starting a job after school without attend tertiary education is better

Supporting idea: gain experience in early age

Explaination: start a job early => develop essential skill early, have life experiences

Body 2:

Topic sentence: on the other hand, i side with those people who think that studying tertiary education offrers better career prospects

Supporting idea: university degree gives you more chance to success

Explain: many careers require formal qualification and academic training

Example: doctor, lawyer, ... have to complete a long academic study before they can work legally

Supporting idea: many bussiness require a university degree nowadays

+ more knowledge help student's carrer in the futurê

- built Network, academic, certificate

- VD

2,2 Benefits of getting a job after school

+ offers faster financial independence and real-life experience.

- ẻan money support family

- Gain practical experience and develop skills on the job.

- do not pay Money

3. Kết luận, cả 2 đều có lợi, khẳng định lại học ở trường

People have different views about whether students should continue higher education or start working after school.

Although working right after school has some advantages, I believe studying at university is a better choice for most people.

   2.  Body 1 - View 1: Get a job straight after school

Main idea: Working early helps students gain experience and independence.

Supporting points:

• They can earn money and support themselves or their families sooner.

• Gain practical experience and learn real-life skills such as teamwork or communication.

• Some people become successful without university, e.g., entrepreneurs.

Example: Someone may start as a shop assistant and later open their own store.

3. Body 2 - View 2: Study at university or college

Main idea: Higher education gives more knowledge and better career chances.

Supporting points:

• University provides specialized knowledge needed for professional jobs (e.g., doctors, teachers, engineers).

• Graduates often have higher salaries and more stable jobs.

• University also helps develop critical thinking and social connections for future success.

Example: Most professional careers require a degree.

   4.  Conclusion

Summarize both views:

Working early offers experience, but university provides knowledge and qualifications.

My opinion:

In my opinion, studying at university is a more effective way to build a successful and stable career.

University is not the only path to success but it will be the shortest and safest path.

have practical experience and early working skills

Some people do not like to learn theory, they like to do practical work.

Example: Many successful entrepreneurs or technicians have achieved success without a university degree.

Body 2

A college degree opens up more job opportunities and guarantees higher income

For example, college graduates often have the opportunity to work in stable positions and earn higher salaries than people who only finished high school

Higher education helps students develop important soft skills such as critical thinking, problem solving, teamwork and communication —

essential skills in the modern workplace. Besides meeting faculty, alumni, and peers across a variety of fields helps them build professional relationships that will benefit their future.

Topic sentence: Many people argue that pursuing higher education is the most effective way to achieve long-term career success.

Sp idea : people who have a college or university degree will have better opportunities for jobs.

Sp details: example: many jobs offer certain degrees such as: doctor, teacher, engineer…

Sp idea 2: higher education provides individuals specialized knowledge and essential soft skills.

Sp details: explain: Universities teach people about higher and deeper knowledge about each major.

Body 2

Topic sentence: On the other hand, some people believe that it is more practical to enter the workforce immediately after finishing high school.

Sp idea: individuals who have a job after school can save their time and expense.

Sp details: explain: attending university spends 3 or 4 years finishing and a lot of money.

Body 3 (opinion)

Both pursuing higher education and starting work early can be beneficial, depending on an individual’s goals and personal capacity.

- : Personally, I would lean toward the latter one

Body 1:

- On the one hand, It is understandable why people like univer and college

Sp: Chief of these is that uni and college teach modern skill for morden job.

Ex: IT job like develop Al require higher professional skill.

- Furthermore, Univer city have a high value in today

In the fact that, society need/ care about leaner who have a higher skill in all aspects-> As a result,

Ex: named some companies and business like gg,... refuse some people hasnot uni dgree in the CV

- On the other hand, there are more convincing reasons to believe that should get a job early

- Firstly, they Know more detaily about the life and have a tons of soft skills in the early

Sp: they can br professtional in a particular job instead of speding 4 years training in uni or college.

Sp cua sp :Some nomarl job they can learn thoughout practical time

- Secondly, point 2 → Having a much money to start up or self-goal.

Sp: majority univer and college have a high tuition -> may be cannot afford.

In conclusion, although there are some arguments against get a job after high school I believe that it bring 2 ý của body 2

Topic sentence: On the other hand, earning money at an early age can bring a sense of independence and financial stability

Supporting idea 1: allows individuals to start earning money right away, which can be important for those people who need to support themselves financially

Supporting detail 1: by working early, society can learn valuable skills that cannot be taught in a classroom, such as problem-solving, communication and time management

Body 2

Topic sentence: On one other hand, attending university can open doors to many well-paid and respected jobs

Supporting idea 1: proponents of attending academic centers see it as the only way to gain job skills and be able to manage a prosperous professional life

Supporting detail 1: no one can be a doctor if they are not educated as medical students, and do not have the required degree to prove one is given the certificate and qualification needed to cure the sick

On the one hand, its understandable why some people believe that get a job immdiately after school is the best way to be success.

Supporting ideas:

• Firstly, you can have life experience earlier. So you become familiar with real-life challenges and working enviroment.

• Secondly, you can earn money soon. With it, you can save for your future study or support your family. Moreover, you can avoid the huge money that you need to pay for university.

  Result:

• - Can be financially independent.

• - Have years of experience, accustomed to working under pressure.

• - Can reach a certain level in their career.

• 
  

  Body 2:

• On the other hand,...

• Supporting ideas:

• - Firstly, studying at university is a way to extend relationships.

• - Secondly, higher educantion can make more job oppurtinities and higher incomes.

• Results:

• - Develop soft skill, like teamwork or time management.

• - Have enough knowledge to reach a high position in work career.

  
  

• - Some jobs have sepecial requirments and need to learn in university.

• 
  

Topic sentence : On the one hand, it is understandable why some people propose that starting a job straight after school is a better path.

Idea 1: Young people can gain practical experience and work skills that school cannot provide, such as teamwork, communication,problem-solving.

Detail1: Result: These skills make them more mature and adaptable in the workplace compared to their peers who are still studying.

Idea 2: They can earn money early , become financially independent and reduces pressure on their families.

Detail2: For instance, some students choose to work as sales assistants or mechanics after high school to support their living expenses and save money for future goals.

Idea 3: Chance to discover personal interests earlier

Detail 3: As a result, working early can help young people make more informed career decisions instead of spending years studying a subject they are not truly interested in.

Body2:

Topic sentence: On the other hand, i side with those who believe that pursuing higher education offers better long-term career prospects.

Idea 1: University graduates generally earn higher salaries than those without degrees.

Detail1: people with university qualifications tend to have better job stability and earn more over their lifetime.

Result: This financial advantage allows them to achieve a higher standard of living and long-term security.

Idea2 : Higher education helps students develop critical thinking and problem-solving skills.

Detail2: For instance, students in business programs learn how to analyze market data and make effective decisions—skills that are vital for leadership positions.

Idea 3: University also allows students to build professional networks and gain exposure to new ideas.

Detail 3: These connections can help them find better job opportunities or even start their own companies after graduation.

Idea 4: University exposes students to diverse people, cultures, and ways of thinking.

Detail4: For instance, studying abroad or joining international programs helps students develop global awareness and intercultural communication skills.

Both working right after school and pursuing university studies can be beneficial in different ways. However, I believe that university education offers more stable and lasting benefits for career development and personal growth

+ People have different opinions about whether students should go to university or start working after finishing school.

+ While going to university can open the door to better job opportunities.

+ I believe that working early can also bring many benefits, depending on a person’s goals and situation.

- body 1

+View 1: Many people think that higher education is the key to success.

* Firstly, a university degree provides students with professional knowledge that is required in many fields such as medicine, education, and engineering. Without formal qualifications, it is impossible to get these kinds of jobs.

* Secondly, university graduates usually have a higher chance of getting stable and well-paid jobs in the future.

*In addition, studying at university also helps students develop important soft skills such as teamwork, communication, and problem-solving.

- body 2:

+ on other hand some people prefer to start

Thesis statement: While entering the workforce early can bring valuable experience and income, I believe pursuing higher education leads to better career prospects and personal growth.

Body 1

Topic sentence: Many people think that working right after school is more practical.

Reason 1: It allows young people to earn money early and support themselves or their families.

Reason 2: Early employment helps them gain real-life experience and understand the job market sooner.

Example: For example, some people who start small businesses after school can achieve success without formal education.

Result: They may also develop independence and confidence at a young age.

Body 2 Overall, I strongly agree that team activities teach more valuable skills for life, as they prepare people to work with others and handle real challenges better than individual tasks

Topic sentence: On the other hand, I believe higher education is a more reliable way to achieve long-term success.

Reason 1: A degree provides advanced knowledge and qualifications that are often required for professional jobs.

Reason 2: University also develops important soft skills like critical thinking, communication, and teamwork.

Example: For instance, careers in medicine, technology, and education usually require a university background.

Conclusion

Restate opinion: However, I believe attending college or university offers more opportunities for future success and personal development.

Some individuals argue that pursuing higher education offer better long term carrer prospect. While i acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would contend that this opinion is not fully accurate. In my opinion, getting a job straight after school is a better way to a successful carrer.

On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that pursuing higher education offer better long term carrer prospect. First of all, there is some job which need a hight certificate such as: Doctor, teacher, scientist... that kind of job surely help us to gain a successful carrer. Secondly, the unversity education alway teach some skill and knowledge which we cannot gain from a normal job, for example: critical thinking, communication, and time management, as well as research, problem-solving, adaptability, and teamwork. We cannot have a successful carrer unless we gain those skill.

On the other hand, I am convinced that it is better to get a job straight after school, in particulary, people keep on studying as soon as they can. Firstly, when we experience the Labor market some years before keeping on studying again, we will get a lot of information what is necessary for the main job in the future, such as: what job is suitable, what should we study for a better job, which job have good prospects... that information will help you to chose a right university what lead to a successful carrer.

Secondly, the higher education isn't suit to every people. Some student aren't enough smart to go to university. Even if they insist on doing that, they also couldn't go to good university. that change nothing and also don't help them to find a better job. So, instead of wasting 4 years of university for nothing, going to work right away will help us accumulate a lot of necessary experience for future career development.

In conclusion, while there are reasons that pursuing higher education offer better long term carrer prospect, i would argue that it is better to get a job straight after school.

Others do have good reasons as well why they prefer working right away after high school. To start with, young people can get real experience and real skills when they join the workforce at an early age. They learn how to communicate, work within time, and manage responsibility properly, and this makes them mature and confident. Secondly, early work allows them to earn their own money and become financially independent. They not only support themselves and their families, but it also gives them a sense of achievement and freedom.

On the other hand, university or college attendance is considered the better option by the majority. University education also opens up high-paying and professional jobs that more and more require a degree, such as medicine or engineering. In addition, university students can develop essential soft skills like teamwork, problem-solving, and critical thinking through group presentations and projects. As a result, graduates become more competitive and better placed to succeed in their careers long-term.

In conclusion, although entering the work force early can create practical experience and income, I believe that seeking a university degree offers more opportunity and better readiness for the future.