International - my favourite celebrity by DDC1

Ryuichi Sakamoto

BSDC_DDC1 — 2025-08-20 09:59:36 UTC

Fantastic work. Very accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar. On your final question question, try and make sure that you are consistent with your choice of using either the noun, or verb, form of a word in the same sentence.

Dua Lipa

BSDC_DDC1 — 2025-08-20 09:59:57 UTC

Really professional presentation skills - this looks great. Some thoughtful vocabulary too. Are you sure that 'her' is the correct pronoun on your final sentence?

Walt Disney

BSDC_DDC1 — 2025-08-20 10:00:21 UTC

Consistent use of capital letters for your proper nouns - well done.

Lionel Messi

BSDC_DDC1 — 2025-08-20 10:00:41 UTC

Great combination of text and images! Try not to leave a blank slide at the beginning of the presentation next time.