I love your story! My favorite part of your story is when you did not give up and went to ask your grandpa again. I would not give up on finding kittens if i were u ether! nice job on your story!

Your story was great I really liked all of your thoughts! I also liked whent you when to your cousins grandpa and asked him were the kittens were and you said he said they were under one haybail, the one you didn't look under! That would make me mad because you took all of the time looking for the kittens then they are in the last place you looked. I felt like i was right there with you looking for the kittens! My favorite part of the story was when you found the kittens.

I really enjoyed reading your story! I like how you wrote: " I was thinking to myself should we give up?" But the best part of your story was how you and your cousin didn't give up and then you finally found the kittens! Connection: My cousins and I also like looking for kittens at my grandma's house! - Dylann