https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8 Made with charm en-us 2020-03-30 22:21:03 UTC 2020-04-12 18:03:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f914.png https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484462662 I notice this essay is very powerful and shows a lot of emotion

]]> 2020-03-31 13:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484462662 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484557115 I notice that she is very emotional.]]> 2020-03-31 14:28:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484557115 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484760100 I noticed that she is shy.]]> 2020-03-31 15:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484760100 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484771961 I think that she over reacted at having to put the sweater on, I mean, it's just a sweater! Just say it isn't mine and then it would be all over and done with! Right?!?!]]> 2020-03-31 15:44:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484771961 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484821111      I noticed that this article has a lot of emotion in it.  I really was able to fit in Rachel's shoes, and picture the story.  I was also able to see all of the different emotions that Rachel was feeling after her teacher forced her to put on the sweatshirt. I think it was a very powerful essay.     ]]> 2020-03-31 16:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484821111 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484881750 I notice that she was being emotional and was overreacting just because she turned 11.]]> 2020-03-31 16:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484881750 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484941773 You can tell that she was being very emotional like a memoir. ]]> 2020-03-31 16:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/484941773 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485034214 She was really dramatic about being 11 years old in this story. and she also was very dramatic too.]]> 2020-03-31 17:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485034214 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485227413 I noticed that it kept saying I'm 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10. it was kind of like a poem it said when you turn eleven you are 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 and 11 like how a tree has how many rings of how old it is. ]]> 2020-03-31 19:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485227413 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485535383 I noticed she kept saying she wished she was 102, and that she said she hated these two people.]]> 2020-03-31 22:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/485535383 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486803517 I noticed that she wished she wished she was 102 and was trying to think on the positive side when the red sweater got thrown on her desk.]]> 2020-04-01 14:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486803517 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486831038 The girl from Eleven and the girl from Quietly Struggling are kind of the same person in different worlds. They are both Quiet and they don't have much people to talk to. They are both trying to be positive because the girl from Eleven tried to remember that it was her eleventh birthday. The girl from Quietly Struggling was thinking about the girl from the story she read and to be more like her.]]> 2020-04-01 14:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486831038 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486922348      I noticed that Eleven by Sandra Cisneros was more of a story layout. You could really picture what was happening to Rachel.  Quietly Struggling was more of an essay layout.  Some paragraphs started with for example, and another reason.  Eleven and Quietly Struggling are both different kinds of Memoirs. ]]> 2020-04-01 15:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/486922348 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487021076  I think that she is a very independent person and that is good for certain reasons. ]]> 2020-04-01 15:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487021076 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487054698 You can tell that she is very quiet and independent like in the story Eleven. ]]> 2020-04-01 15:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487054698 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487064694 She is quiet and nervous because she does not what to get made fun of]]> 2020-04-01 15:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487064694 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487183671 I noticed that se is very independent and is working hard even though she is very quiet.]]> 2020-04-01 16:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487183671 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487190545 I noticed that she wants to be eleven but she can't so she wishes that she was 102.]]> 2020-04-01 16:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487190545 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487216963 I noticed that she is really shy and she is scared to speak up.]]> 2020-04-01 16:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487216963 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487294102 I noticed that she is very shy and is afraid to speak for herself.]]> 2020-04-01 17:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487294102 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487295834 2020-04-01 17:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487295834 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487300767 I noticed that she was very quiet and shy to herself ]]> 2020-04-01 17:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487300767 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487449488 I noticed that it was kind of like a essay it kept saying another way it is hard to be outgoing is... ]]> 2020-04-01 18:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487449488 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487549380 I notice that she is very shy. I also notice that the book eleven and Quietly struggling don't give the names of the main person.]]> 2020-04-01 19:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487549380 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487676610 I noticed in the new memoir she compared herself to a book.]]> 2020-04-01 20:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/487676610 1465716 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/488964575 there isn't a space for last kiss so I'm just writing it here.

I notice that all of the memoirs we have read are all kind of sad.]]> 2020-04-02 13:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/488964575 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489030385      I think the Last Kiss was more of a story Memoir.  You could really picture the story and how the main character was feeling.  It was different than Quietly Struggling because that was more of an essay Memoir.   
     ]]> 2020-04-02 14:11:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489030385 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489103173 I think she get nervous when her dad does not give her a kiss. She think they are drifting apart. ]]> 2020-04-02 14:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489103173 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489329441 I noticed that she really misses her dad when they are apart and she doesn't feel the same when her mom kisses her on the cheek.]]> 2020-04-02 15:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489329441 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489547980 I noticed that she feels bad because she is not getting a kiss from her dad.]]> 2020-04-02 17:28:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489547980 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489592063 I think she feels really bad because she doesn't et a kiss from her dad]]> 2020-04-02 17:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489592063 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489608558 I noticed that she feels really bad because she don't get a kiss from his dad]]> 2020-04-02 17:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489608558 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489698446 I noticed she realized she took her dads kisses for granted when her dad stopped kissing her on the cheek.]]> 2020-04-02 18:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489698446 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489719472 I think that sense her dad shook her hand and he was going on a work trip he might have just been stressed about it and that affected how he acted and that affected how she felt about their relationship.  ]]> 2020-04-02 18:53:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489719472 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489742441 I thought her mom and dad might divorce and that's why her dad did not kiss her.]]> 2020-04-02 19:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489742441 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489747924 I noticed that she was really sad and she doesn't want to be like the jellyfish. She doesn't want to drift away, she wants to be lucky.]]> 2020-04-02 19:09:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489747924 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489812721 You can see that in memoirs, they are very emotional and sad.]]> 2020-04-02 19:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/489812721 https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/490026111 2020-04-02 22:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sarahfranson/x2ox72ajxyv8/wish/490026111