What they taught us about writing in high school (Gray Matter 160) by Jorie Hofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160 For better or for worse... en-us 2020-08-31 23:19:28 UTC 2021-02-02 01:31:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4c3.png 5 paragraph essay https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151491603 rigid; formulaic; dry; uninsipired; not good lol

]]> 2021-02-02 01:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151491603 Rhetorical Devices (in the context of literature analysis) https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151492366 Also: allegory, allusion, other literary devices as well]]> 2021-02-02 01:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151492366 mshofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151493133 2021-02-02 01:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151493133 Robotic organization https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151494061 topic sentence begins each paragraph, thesis statement at end of intro, repeat this in conclusion]]> 2021-02-02 01:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151494061 https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151494353 removing redundancy and unnecessary jargon ]]> 2021-02-02 01:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151494353 follow the 3 appeals https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151495730 ethos, logos, pathos for every paper]]> 2021-02-02 01:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151495730 literary analysis https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496439 here is what the author said, here is what i think of it, what connections i can draw. repeat this formula. then sum it up with a statement to answer to "why does this matter?' ]]> 2021-02-02 01:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496439 timed essays, analyzing given prompts and info (not a lot of outside research or applying info to other topics) https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496450 2021-02-02 01:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496450 writing the hook to draw attention https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496519 2021-02-02 01:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496519 terrible terrible things will happen if you ever use the first person ("I") in your writing mshofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496940 2021-02-02 01:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151496940 "restating the introduction" for conclusion paragraph https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497118 2021-02-02 01:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497118 5 paragraph essays https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497529 very specific format and requirements, not very interesting essays

]]> 2021-02-02 01:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497529 Be concise https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497703 Most powerful message in the least words possible]]> 2021-02-02 01:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151497703 identifying various elements https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498307 speaker, audience, subject, assertion, attitude, diction, figure of speech, syntax, rhetorical questions, and rhetoric]]> 2021-02-02 01:18:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498307 Your thesis is one, not two, not more, but one sentence. It is the last sentence of your first paragraph. If it is anywhere else, it will never, ever be found. https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498428 2021-02-02 01:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498428 Early in High School https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498730 five-paragraph essay, clear prompt, specific instructions on how to complete the essay(minimum effort for maximum grade)]]> 2021-02-02 01:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498730 https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498757 2021-02-02 01:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498757 Implicit thesis versus explicit https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498767 2021-02-02 01:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151498767 writing should sound pretty and people with power should admire it mshofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499632 2021-02-02 01:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499632 Similarities vs. differences https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499780 maybe should focus more on nuances ]]> 2021-02-02 01:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499780 citations https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499856 2021-02-02 01:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499856 Research https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499962 Literature review, methodology, pursuing nuanced line of inquiry, your motivation for why you are pursuing your research]]> 2021-02-02 01:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499962 literature analysis https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499985 rigid structures and not a lot of room for creativity, basically just analyzing quotes for a whole essay, not really interesting at all]]> 2021-02-02 01:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151499985 Literary analysis https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151500811 identifying schemes and tropes]]> 2021-02-02 01:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151500811 reports mshofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151500920 2021-02-02 01:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151500920 compare-and-contrast mshofstra https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151501291 2021-02-02 01:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151501291 surface-level reading initially then dove in deeper and analyzed the given text https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151501506 2021-02-02 01:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151501506 Context https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151502298 context must always be stated in your second paragraph for essays for classes]]> 2021-02-02 01:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151502298 Take risks https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151502550 don't be afraid to try something new]]> 2021-02-02 01:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151502550 Pages https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151503109 usually this was very specific in a requirement; not flexible to allow more room for deeper inquiry. ]]> 2021-02-02 01:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151503109 flesh out a claim first, then connect with other sources https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151503785 2021-02-02 01:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151503785 introduce quote and explain - sandwiching - author, genre, etc https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151504396 2021-02-02 01:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151504396 avoid passive voice https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151505394 2021-02-02 01:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mshofstra/HSwriting160/wish/1151505394