https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 21:35:07 UTC 2025-12-27 08:06:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://www.logolynx.com/images/logolynx/68/681a095b5f9f3ca8a36b2e2016c4e605.jpeg https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1074863815 My 2 stars an a wish is that i really liked how you started the story it had a lot of action and so much things going on i also liked the ending it was really powerful and had a lot of action in to it but my wish is that you should ass some more sounds because usually there’s a lot of sounds. But that’s all amazing work! ]]> 2021-01-11 16:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1074863815 27jaugust https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1074875967 My 2 stars and a wish: I loved the beginning with the thoughts flowing through your head, and then with the blinding light and all the sounds effects! This was an awesome piece if I had a suggestion it would be to give a little background on why you were there.]]> 2021-01-11 16:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1074875967 27alourenco https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1083906240 I loved all the figurative language you used making seem like you were in a war/battle.
I also liked how intense this moment was of when you made that tackle i had goosebumps because of it.
My final star is I liked how you used inner thought in your piece for example when you wrote “I start to wonder, is this it? Is this what I have been waiting for? This is my shot?  I’m not blowing it! This can't be real! But somehow it feels real! ” i thought it expressed how big of a moment this was.]]> 2021-01-13 16:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1083906240 27alourenco https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1517984492 Hi Joey, A strength in your essay “The arts” My first star is that I like your descriptive scene I thought that it really showed how arts make a difference in children’s lives. My second star is that I liked the persuasive words that you used to really convince the reader to agree that the schools need arts. Before, i read this i didn’t really have an option on this topic. I have no wishes for your piece. You did an excellent job!

]]> 2021-05-12 15:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1517984492 27jaugust https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1518035603 Hi, Joey. After reading this, I’m kinda angry at school districts for not doing the arts program. I love how you gave a barrage of positive thoughts about the arts program getting the reader to think good about it. And then surprising them that its only in some schools. Also your warrants were extremely informative. One wish i have is maybe your call to action it gives a lot on what we can do but does not single out a big example of what has been done.



]]> 2021-05-12 15:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1518035603 27jaugust https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1612405775 My two stars and a wish for you is the PICTURES! Man they really gave it a cool feel. Especially with the pink background really brought it for a good loop. My second star is that Its like you are a commercial narrator at the beginning. I like how you talk about it and To the reader. My wish is maybe that you could give a little more info on what to do after you freeze it.]]> 2021-06-17 14:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/27jestevez/x0gw6kxmzqzup9am/wish/1612405775