AE2 Practice by daniel grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm Made with a quick smile en-us 2017-08-22 05:10:53 UTC 2017-08-23 01:47:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Post your summary daniel_grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182223162 2017-08-23 00:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182223162 Be a critical friend :) daniel_grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182223173 (1) word count
(2) do all the supporting sentences match the topic sentence?
(3) are there at least three relative clauses? (they can be defining or non-defining)]]> 2017-08-23 00:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182223173 Climbing fish https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225163 The climbing fish, which has the science name Anabantidae, is a freshwater fish. They live in South Asia. They are 25 cm long. The climbing fish is in yellow and black color and they also have spiny fins which can let them walk on the ground. Another reason for why the climbing fish can walk on the ground is their gills can breath oxygen in the air. This ability let them can live on the land for 6 days.

The climbing fish is an egg-layers just like the other fishes. They will lay many eggs which is small in once. They will guard their eggs until the eggs are hatched. 

Although, the climbing fish is small, but they are very dangerous. They can climb out of the water and walk short distances. Their normal food is small insects. They are dangerous to other animals because they choke on the climbing fish. This let the fisherman are recommended to kill them and they usually eaten by birds and small mammals.]]> 2017-08-23 01:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225163 Example: daniel_grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225805 The climbing fish, which has the scientific name Anabantidae, looks ordinary. It is 25 cm long, and has yellow to black colored scales. The fins are spiny. Although it looks ordinary, it can be seen doing something fish typically cannot do: crawl on land. They may even be able to climb trees to some extent. The climbing fish uses its gills to “walk”, and it’s gills can breath oxygen from the air. Suprisingly, it can live for up to 6 days on land.

The climbing fish has a typical life for a fish. They hatch from eggs in South Asian freshwater, and grow to prey on insects. When they are mature, they lay many eggs and protect them until they hatch.

The climbing fish is small but dangerous. Birds and small mammals may try to eat the fish, but die from chocking on them. The fish is so dangerous that fishermen are recommended to kill them rather than throw them back.

]]> 2017-08-23 01:16:56 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225805 Critical Friend (Grover) daniel_grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225838 (1) Word Count is about 180
(2) The supporting sentences match the topic sentence. The first paragraph is about how the fish looks ordinary. The second is about the life-cycle. The third is about why the fish is dangerous. All the supporting sentences explain or give examples of these ideas.
(3) I only found one relative clause. Make sure to use three.:)]]> 2017-08-23 01:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182225838 Climbing Fish https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182227588 When people talk about endangered animals, they talk about that animal itself. But people are actually worrying about an animal that might endanger other animals. Climbing fish live in South Asia, they are fresh water fishes that has the scientific name Anabantidae. They are said to be very dangerous to other animals because they choke on the climbing fish. Fisherman are recommended to kill them because of this.

The reason why they are called climbing fish is because they can climb out of water and walk short distances on land. Sometimes they may climb trees. Their gills can breathe oxygen in the air that are keeping them alive and surprisingly they can live on land for 6 days. They are egg-layers which are very different from mammals. They lay many eggs to reproduce.

Their colors are yellow to black and they can grow up to 25 centimeters long. They have spiny fins which make them look cool and hard to be eaten by other animals. They eat insects when they climb out of water. They will be eaten by birds and some small mammals when they are on land.

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]]> 2017-08-23 01:28:40 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182227588 Climbing Fish 1601224 https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182227878 One of the freshwater fishes is Anabantidae which is normally called Climbing fish. The climbing fish is egg-layer who lays many eggs. Climbing fishes are in yellow to black color, and they have spiny fins that allow them to walk on land. They can grow up to 25 cm long. The habitat for climbing fishes is in South Asia. The climbing fish, which is carnivorous animal, feeds on insects. This creature, with a huge body compared to other freshwater fishes, is the prey of birds and small mammals. 

The climbing fish has a unique ability. Climbing fishes are able to use their spiny fins to climb out of water and walk short distance even climb trees. The gills let them breathe the oxygen not only in the water, but also in air. It shows that climbing fishes can live on land that without any water for 6 days. 

The climbing fish is seemed as a dangerous animal. Since other animals will chose on the climbing fish, and climbing fish will stuck in their throat, people are worried about whether climbing fish is going to hurt other animals. Therefore, fishermen are recommended to kill the climbing fish if they catch them during fishing.

]]> 2017-08-23 01:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182227878 Critical Friend https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228143 202 Words
Requirements reached.
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- Information is clear.
- Words count: 189 words
- Good topic sentences and supporting details.

Suggestion: Use more relative clause.]]> 2017-08-23 01:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228200 Climbing fish https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228329 Today we will talk about a kind of strange animal. It names climbing fish. It science name is called Anabantidae. It is a kind of freshwater fishes. Climbing fish is also Egg-layers. It also has some predators such as birds and some small mammals. Because it is really rare and have a high price on markets many fisherman are recommended to kill them. They have a kind of interesting habit- eat insects.  Not every kind of insects are eat insect as food.
Climbing fish also have a very strong special skill that other fish cannot do. It could live on land for whole 6 days without any water! That is really strange and I even felt that this kind of animal should not be called fish.
Climbing fish’s body totally express yellow to black color. Because it have a such powerful special skill. People start to worry about it will endanger other animals. On its skin there are Spiny fins.  It also have the habit to guard their own eggs. It can climb out of water and walk short distances. If the environment is allowed, it could even climb trees. They live in in South Asia and Lays many eggs. Their gills can breath oxygen in air. The average length of climbing fish about 25cm long. They may dangerous to other animals because they choke on the climbing fish.

]]> 2017-08-23 01:34:20 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228329 Critical Friend daniel_grover https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228343 Yes-this looks good. The first paragraph is about general info. Then the second focuses on the fish's unique walking ability, and the third focuses on why the fish is dangerous.

Only recommendation is to check grammar and sentence structure. You wrote "will stuck" instead of "sticks" or "will stick"]]> 2017-08-23 01:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228343 Climbing Fish https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228360 Climbing fish, whose scientific name is Anabantidae, is famous for its ability to walk on land. This kind of fish can be easily recognized by their spiny fins and yellow to black color. Most of them can grow to 25cm long. They mostly live in freshwater and are egg layers who will guard their eggs unlike many other fish.
Climbing fish originally live in South Asia. Their basic food is insects which is probably the reason why they developed the skill to walk on land. Most extraordinarily, their gills which breathe oxygen in the air enable them to live on land. Specifically, they can live on land for 6 days, walk short distance from the water and even climb trees.Climbing fish’s predators are mostly birds and small mammals.
They are considered dangerous because the animals who eat them will choke on them because they have a large amount of small bones which can’t be swallowed with ease. Fisherman are recommended to kill them because people worry that they will kill the other animals. However,this suggestion still needs to be put into full consideration of whether doing so will harm the local ecosystem. ]]> 2017-08-23 01:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228360 Cool https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228665  Have you ever seen a fish can live out of water for 6 days? That’s Climbing fish which has a Science name called Anabantidae, they have unique abilities that they can climb on the ground or even the trees. They’re freshwater fishes and they reproduce by lay lots eggs. Once they are pregnant, they will lay lots of eggs in one time. They’re kind of responsible parents in the wild, because they will guard their eggs rather than leave them immediately.
  When it climbs on the ground, it will be an easy meal for its predators which is mainly birds and small mammals. However, sometime the predators will be choked because of its spiny fins. Many people think it’s dangerous to other animals since it kills others by spiny fins. It mainly lives in South Asia and it’s in  severe danger now. Their treats are from natural predators and fisherman who are recommended to kill them.

  Their preys are insects, sometimes it eats other things too. A mature climbing fish is able to grow up to 25 cm long.

  Since it becomes an animal in danger. We should start to protect them now.

]]> 2017-08-23 01:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228665 Climbing Fish 1601205 https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228692 The climbing fish, which also called Anabantidae, is freshwater fish. They are yellow to black color and have spiny fins. Most of them are 25 cm long and live in South Asia. The most special thing for them is that they can climb out of water and walk short distances on the ground. They even can live on the land for 6 days because their gills can breathe oxygen in air. Some evidence shows they maybe climb trees. All this shows the unusual nature of this fish.
    As normal fish, the climbing fish are also egg-layers which can lay many eggs. They will guard the eggs until the small climbing fish are born. This is rarely seen on other fish.
    The diet of climbing fish always surprise people. They are small but dangerous animal. They normally eat insects. The climbing fish might choke birds or other small mammals when they try to eat them. This protect them from the predators. For the small animal that used to eat them, they are very dangerous. Now people worry it will endanger other animals, and fisherman are recommended to kill them when they catch this kind of fish.

]]> 2017-08-23 01:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228692 ROFL yjc991213 https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228727 Climbing fish ‘s science name is Anabantidae. It’s a kind of freshwater fish and it’s egg layers. It’s eat insects. It can live on land for 6days and can climb out of water and walk short distances. Maybe it can climb trees. Gills can breathe oxygen in air. Peoples are worry it will endanger other animals. It can live on the land without water for 6 days.It ‘s a really rare of the fish, Because of them gills can breathe oxygen in air. 

 

It have Yellow to black color. Because of the color it be eaten by birds and small mammals. It live in south Asia. It’s dangerous to other animals because they choke It can kill the birds and mammals . SO it ‘s dangerous to the other small animals. For example, if a bird eat this fish and pick some of the fish to the child bird then whole nest will be dead because of the choke. The fish is so dangerous that fisherman recommended to kill them than throw them back. 

The climbing fish has a typical life for fish, They grow up from egg. It’s really small in south Asian freshwater. They eat the insects. They lay a lot of egg. It is them life cycle.  
]]> 2017-08-23 01:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228727 The climbing fish is a 25cm-long fish with spiny fins which covered by yellow to black skin. This kind of fish that have ability to climb out of the water and work short distance and live on land for 6 days since their gills can breathe oxygen in air even they can climb the trees. Moreover, they born in eggs in south Asia fresh water where enables them to have insects to eat. Although the walking fish have predator likesome small mammals include birds, however, it still endangered many animals since they choke on the climbing fish, and that is the reason why people worry it will endanger other animals. In order to protect other species, fish man are recommended to kill them. Every time, the climb fish lay a lot of eggs in their habitat-south Asia, they guard them after all that’s makes the birds hard to get the egg. The climb fish have both fins and the ability to keep alive on the land, their dogged vitality leads them to stay in the food chain instead of extinct by the others. Although the climb fish can only live a short life span, nonetheless their high birth rate promise their livability. https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228861 2017-08-23 01:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228861 Critical friend (Smile) https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228998 1. 188 words. Very well~
2. Have the good topic and support many details.
3. There are three relative clauses and they are very prominent ]]> 2017-08-23 01:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182228998 Critical review https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229016 130 words ?
Yes, the main points match the article.
Yes, he has enough relative clauses.
 ]]> 2017-08-23 01:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229016 Critical Friend (Shannon) https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229156 1. 230 words, requirement reached
2. The supporting sentences match the topic sentence. The first paragraph is about how the fish looks ordinary. The second is about the life-cycle. The third is about why the fish is dangerous. All the supporting sentences explain or give examples of these ideas.
(3) I only found one relative clause. Make sure to use three.:)]]> 2017-08-23 01:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229156 Walking Fish https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229466 Walking Fish named climbing fish, because it’s a fish that can able to climb out of water and walk short distances. It’s science name is Anabantidae. It is a kind of Freshwater fishes and it lives in South Asia. It’s about 25 cm long. The color of walking fish is yellow to black. Although, there are some spiny fins on the back. It maybe can climb trees and live on land for 6 days. When walking fish climb out of water, it uses gills to breath oxygen in air.
Walking fish is not same as human, because it lays many eggs. Walking fish eats some insects, but it be eaten by birds and small mammals. That means most of animal can eat walking fish. So, they knew how to guard eggs. 
Without some animals will eat walking fish, there are many fishermen are recommended to kill them. This is the reason why walking fish is endangered animal. However, people worry it will endanger other animals. It’s dangerous to other animals because they choke on the climbing fish. Some of the animals will disappear in this world, because of climbing fish choke them. And this world can’t be balanced that everything can live in this world. 
]]> 2017-08-23 01:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229466 Critical Friend https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229845 205 words]]> 2017-08-23 01:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/daniel_grover/x0ghuqdlimcm/wish/182229845