What I liked about your presenation is that you used good language and corrected any mistakes you had before the presentation. Also, you had a fantastic Quiz Slide at the end for which you used the images.

I think you should use less text on the slides and just explain verbally ( speaking).

I really liked the video that you used as a "hook" in your presentation and how well you delivered it: you used body language and designed a great quiz at the end.

I think you should correct any mistakes in your slides before presenting (there were many verbs issues! E.g: go---went!)

What I really liked was your PPT, pictures and how well connected the story was. It was interesting and everyone was listening;) Your pronunciation was good, too! Also, your grammar was correct almost throughout the entrie presentation. ( Correct: Which album did I bought?)

Next time, please stand up, then your voice will be louder;)

What I really like is the amount of photos you used and the explanation for the choice of your presentation as well as the questions at the end. Your voice was good and you looked like you enjoy presenting!

You should correct the mistakes or ask someone to proof read it for you the text before presenting. There were some mistake, e.g: "thier", " Where are we playing?", "bill", "crystal". Can you correct these mistakes?;)

I like that you went home, corrected your mistakes on your PPT and presented again. This shows that you work hard! Your pronunciation was very good and the story was good. Nice quiz;)

Youl should add pictures , any picture related to the topic

I like that you worked as a team and provided some good text and pictures. Your language and grammar was correct

You need to work on NOT reading off the laptop (Brian and Channing), READ presentation and words before presenting (Brian), following the rubrics (you only had 3 slides and no Quiz!) Prepare better and make more effors

What I liked is that you attached your video and used Chris as an actor. It was fun!

You need to improve on following the rubrics and adding more pictures. You had no Quiz

I like the slides, they looked very pretty and it is good that you didn t use a lot of slides and just had notes someone else. This is good !Good job for trying hard;) I appreciate it! Good quiz1

You need to work on memorising maybe your presentation a bit before presenting. Prepare better ! Alos there were some mistakes: "Exeiting---> Exciting. Check the words---- ancient!, Next " We were shopping NOT We was shopping, ok?