For my second writing task 1,  I was able to complete it before the deadline date and I believe completing the essay by myself is an improvement on its own Although , according to the feedback receive I still have a lot of work to do to improve on my essay structure and my academic language. This might have been because of my absence in most of the classes and I haven’t taking my time to go through the catch-up classes. 

      I need to create more time to study the guided learning and the previous class slide on sol. I also need to start a one or one tutorial with my tutor during their office hours so I could ask question in areas I don’t understand.  This will help to improve the way I write my essays and this will also improve my use of academic languages. This will not only help in just academic English but also every aspect of my studies.