Professional email by Justin ghale https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7 en-us 2024-11-13 08:34:30 UTC 2024-11-13 10:26:20 UTC hello@padlet.com justinghale777 https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214868747 Group Name :


May Kyaw

Anastasiia Lobova

Justin Ghale


We found out that Body Structure in Professional writing was quite Challenging.


We’ll use these skills soon especially for Approaching the hiring manager in future Jobs that we would like to do and project works.



 

]]> 2024-11-13 09:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214868747 Email justinghale777 https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214898675 Dear Dr. John Kyaw,

I hope this email finds you well. My name is Harry Potter, and I am a student of Bachelor of business program at University of California. I am writing to kindly request an appointment with you to discuss some important questions and concerns I have regarding my education and academic progress.

I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to seek your advice as I believe your experience and guidance would be useful for me.

I understand you have a busy schedule, and I would be grateful if you could suggest a convenient time for us to meet. Please let me know if you require any additional information in advance of our meeting.

Thank you very much for considering my request.

Sincerely,

Sofia Talsi



The Response from other Group:


The mail is written in the formal language and the texts are clear. If you want to make the mail more conveniences, you can avoid the pleasing words . Otherwise everything is as required.



]]> 2024-11-13 10:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214898675 Three things we learned Today justinghale777 https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214900495 Today, we learned about how to write professional emails and the skills required to create formal writing. We received feedback from other groups on our emails to help improve our writing. Another new topic we learned about was the KISS principle, which stands for "Keep It Simple and Structured." We also learned about the importance of the subject line and how to make it clear and concise.

]]> 2024-11-13 10:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214900495 Analysis of example : Formal and Informal justinghale777 https://padlet.com/justinghale777/wytlew6fhg409oh7/wish/3214912072 Formal :Polite Tone, Advanced vocabulary, Professional Purpose. Formal emails are written for officials purposes to authorities, dignitaries, colleagues, seniors, etc.


Informal: Casual tone, Simple vocabulary, Personal Purpose.

Informal emails are sent to your friends and family. The texts don't need to be formal and you can write in a more relaxed way.

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