Feedback on my Second drafts by Gemma Barrett https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew en-us 2017-11-27 12:05:46 UTC 2026-01-13 23:22:03 UTC hello@padlet.com Please can you look a my second drafts and say what you like and what you would change. Thank you. gemmaelsie16 https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210350019 ~Gemma ]]> 2017-11-27 12:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210350019 Audience Feedback https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210353336 - I love how you have included the albums front cover on the magazine advert so your audience knows what it looks like. 
- I like how you have kept the same colour scheme for both your digipak and magazine advert. 
- The fonts used on both of your products link in with each other and also are typical for the genre Indie. 
- I like how you have included things about what other people like about your album to sell it to your audience more
- I would not change a thing about your digipak or your magazine advert.

]]> 2017-11-27 12:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210353336 gemmaelsie16 https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210360961 2017-11-27 12:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210360961 I like how you have kept the fonts and colours consistent throughout. I also like how you have added a dedication on your inside front cover. I also like the pops of red as it helps to draw the eye in. I also enjoy how the song titles all tie in with the theme of being young. gemmaelsie16 https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210360978 2017-11-27 12:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210360978 Audience feedback (me) https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210361206 -I like how you have added in your magazine front cover as i think it adds a nice effect to the page layout. 
-I think the colour scheme you have used is very effective for your genre 
-I like how you have used the same fonts throughout your magazine advert and your digipak . 
-I think the way you have put the platforms you can download or buy the album at is very effective. 
-I like how you have added how other companies have graded your products out of 5 as i think this will help to sell your products to your audience better and more efficiently. ]]> 2017-11-27 12:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210361206 I think the use of the chevrons is clever as is points to the main parts of the pieces such as the title helping to focus on the title of the album gemmaelsie16 https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210362434 2017-11-27 12:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/210362434 https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/213236161 I really like the stylized typography of 'Young', as well as the colour scheme. 

]]> 2017-12-05 11:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/213236161 Music Video https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214028555 i really love how fun you've made the music video and ho the shots in the park relate to being young. I like how during the chorus you use faster pace editing than you do in the rest if the music video. I also like how you have used slow motion as it fits with the face of the song and adds more depth to the music video. ]]> 2017-12-07 09:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214028555 This music video looks very conventional for indie music as it looks very DIY. https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214029895 2017-12-07 09:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214029895 Music Video https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214030740 I like how you have included natural videos of friends having fun. You can see that there is a story going on between two ex lovers one who wishes it could be like it used to be. It very well drafted and it has a great flow to it. It amazing how you have also been able to do the lip syncing parts well. Its a great music video and you have worked extremely well on it. ]]> 2017-12-07 09:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214030740 Midget and Chub https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214033528 I like how you have used black and white scenes as it adds good effect to the overall video
Story of the video wasn't very clear
I like the change in scenery as it makes the video not repetitive
I liked the different boxes when the lip syncing and the reversal of time when the leaves were thrown. I would use more of these to make the video more unique.   ]]> 2017-12-07 10:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214033528 Improvements https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214969835 I prefer the first drafts of the magazine advert. I would also make the name of the artist bigger on the digi-pak to make it stand out more. I like how conventional the music video is but I think that the shots are too repetitive, maybe film some more different clips so the video is not repeating itself. ]]> 2017-12-11 11:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214969835 Music Video https://padlet.com/gemmaelsie16/wy83gd11zdew/wish/214970489 I like how the repetitive use of clips creates a flashback kind if feel 

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