Week 4 Goals by https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087 en-us 2023-07-30 09:27:11 UTC 2023-08-11 03:52:31 UTC hello@padlet.com Miss Vernon's Goals oliviavernon https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653083352 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is...using capital letters for all proper nouns.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is...making sure during the editing stage of the writing process to check all proper nouns have capital letters.
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I left myself enough time to carefully edit my narrative.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can make sure checking proper nouns for capital letters is included in my editing checklist.]]> 2023-07-30 09:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653083352 Charlie's goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653801576 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is to who's more of the senses and show don't tell.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is think about the senses and how i could use show don't tell when i am planning.
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 not at all, to 5, totally achieved.
I think I mostly achieved this goal of putting more scenes into my work.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
Making sure while planning to write a lot of them down.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I will keep on trying to add more senses into it and more powerful senses.]]> 2023-07-31 23:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653801576 Mays Goals rmwil1 https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802166 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is to Quadruple check my writing for any errors.
To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is taking my time to read what i  have written.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
3.5

 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
i just reread my writing piece.
c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can make sure checking proper nouns for capital letters, i also took my time.]]> 2023-07-31 23:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802166 Sienna's Goal https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802419 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on is making my sentences shorter.

To achieve this goal, I will write shorter sentences in my narrative piece.
Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
I would say about a 4/5 because I checked through my work and had shorter sentences that didn't look like paragraphs.
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I read through carefully making sure my sentences weren't as long like in my first story.
c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I will continue to carefully read through my sentences, so they make sense.]]> 2023-07-31 23:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802419 Lenny Clark Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802576 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making.

I will make sure I have capital letter after proper nouns and other this that need capital letters.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is. Making sure during the editing stage of the writing process to check all proper nouns have capital letters.



In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is...using capital letters for all proper nouns.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is...making sure during the editing stage of the writing process to check all proper nouns have capital letters.



REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4.    4
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
Using all the recourses around me to help.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
using all my teachers and listening.

]]> 2023-07-31 23:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802576 Temika's Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802599 In my writing piece week one improvement i will focus on is not start sentences with 'and'

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is not to start sentences with and.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
5
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
By making sure that I didn't start my sentence with 'and'

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
By keep making sure that i don't start my sentence with 'and']]> 2023-07-31 23:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802599 Lylli's goal. https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802625 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on using..
writing characters pov's when it's their time to think or speak.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will, Take my time so i will remember that i need to write the pov's for each character.]]> 2023-07-31 23:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802625 Dane's Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802696 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is making my paragraphs longer.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is to discuss more ideas and more events.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
Focusing on my narrative piece and not being silly.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can write more words in my story so that I can have longer paragraphs.


]]> 2023-07-31 23:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802696 Lilys goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802802 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is remembering to end sentences instead of leading them on and to add more descriptive words and to keep everything in the same tense.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is to end sentences when they have finished the description, reading over my sentences and seeing if it needs more descriptive word and to go over and see if everything is in the same tense.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
3.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I used a thesaurus to help me find more descriptive words and more interesting harder words.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can keep using a thesaurus for all the overly used words and overtime I will have a bigger variety of words to use.]]> 2023-07-31 23:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653802802 Albert's Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803013 In my writing piece thus week, one improvement I will focus on is, adding more information to the end of my stories.

To achieve my goal, I will spend more time on the ending adding more information.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)   
4

 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?                         
Not getting distracted.


c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal? Keep working hard and focusing on my goals.

]]> 2023-07-31 23:58:50 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803013 Aa's Goals apsane https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803017 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is.

Is to improve my spelling and put a 100% effort in it, and I will also improve my grammar and I will check for
spelling mistake and grammar mistake by re-reading it.

I will also put capital letters on the peoples name and place.

 ]]> 2023-07-31 23:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803017 seths goal https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803029 Miss Vernon's Goals
In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is...is to finish my work on time .

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is. i will edit my work properly .
Miss Vernon's Goals
In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is...using capital letters for all proper nouns.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is...making sure during the editing stage of the writing process to check all proper nouns have capital letters.
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I left myself enough time to carefully edit my narrative.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal? look over it when i think im done
]]> 2023-07-31 23:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803029 tiarnah goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803091 in my writing piece i want to make sure t stay in the same tease.  And also to read my work out loud.  Also try to add more to my story. 

to achieve my goal i will use my resource booklet more. ]]> 2023-07-31 23:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803091 Lenny Eldridge's Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803196 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is... only using past present or future tense not all of them.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is... reading my story aloud to make sure it makes sense.

REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
reading my story out loud and correcting any mistakes.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can keep reading over my writing and making sure it all makes sense.

]]> 2023-07-31 23:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803196 Patrick's goals. https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803213 My improvement is that is to take more focus on what I am writing so like not adding words that aren't meant to be there and just really not adding stuff.

To achieve this goal i will be more into my work and not be so extracted so i guess sitting somewhere were someone or something can't distract me. ]]> 2023-07-31 23:59:21 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803213 Eithan's goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803433 in my writing piece this week one improvement  i will focus on making  my words a bit more descriptive and the same thing with my sentences    


To  achieve my goal i will think about what words can be replaced with bigger and discerption words and same thing with my sentences      
a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved) i would give myself around 4 because i did use them but not as good as i could ]]> 2023-07-31 23:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803433 LOCHLAN MICHEAL MCMAHON https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803458 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making. IS MAKEING MY STORY MOR INTERESTING.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is... ADD PUNCTUATION


]]> 2023-07-31 23:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803458 https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803682 in my writing piece this week, one improvement I will make is to double check on my spelling.

to achieve my goal of making this work i will check on my computer. ]]> 2023-08-01 00:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803682 Madie's Goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803879 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is double check spelling and capital letters by reading over your work and having a peer read over it.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is make sore I have a Naf time to do it in my spare time.  
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved) 4 i did not quite finesh it but i was l much as i Possley cod do.

 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal? the one thing that helped me achieve my goal was to faces on only my wiring Pece.


c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal? the one action I made to keep improving on me.
 goal is to keep witting and forces on only on me.
 

]]> 2023-08-01 00:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653803879 Emma new week 4 Goal https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653804102 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is on make sure i will used captain letters at the start of sentences and make sure my spelling is correct.

to achieve my Goal of making this improve one action i will on making sure i will ask the teacher.

 reflection 
Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
5
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I did achieve my goal when my spelling is correct and go at captain letters.
c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I will keep as the teacher for help.


]]> 2023-08-01 00:01:29 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2653804102 tiarnah goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659916508 In my writing piece this week, one improvement I will focus on making is... to use more difficult words.

To achieve my goal of making this improve one action I will take is... use my resource booklet.
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4. 3
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I used my time wisely.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I will make sure to keep using my booklet.]]> 2023-08-11 03:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659916508 Patrick's goal https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917248 REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4. I give myself a 4 because I looked dover my work and it was good just a few mistakes that l fixed.
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I left myself enough time to carefully edit my narrative.

I had a good enviroment to work in so that really helped.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can make sure checking proper nouns for capital letters is included in my editing checklist.]]> 2023-08-11 03:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917248 Romy's goals https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917250
REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
2
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
I didn't achieve my goal because I didn't finish.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
I can make sure checking proper nouns for capital letters is included in my editing checklist.
check over my work even if it's not finished.



]]> 2023-08-11 03:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917250 nikki https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917656 REFLECTION
 a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved)
4
 
 b) What is one thing that helped you towards achieving your goal?
focusing

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your goal?
making sure i use 300 words in my plan]]> 2023-08-11 03:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659917656 Cam https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659919666
REFLECTION 
a) Rate how well you achieved your goal on a scale of 1 (not at all) to 5 (totally achieved) 

b) What is one thing that helped you towards improving your writing? The booklets helped me with all the questions.

c) What is one action you can take to keep improving on your writing? Mybe just take my time while doing it and trying to get my idears on paper]]> 2023-08-11 03:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/oliviavernon/wuykqprrdxvn6087/wish/2659919666