5C Writing A R.A.C.E Paragraph by Ms Gehrels

5C Writing A R.A.C.E Paragraph by Ms Gehrels https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k Watch the video to learn what a R.A.C.E paragraph is. Choose a question from page 2 of the Writing A R.A.C.E Paragraph slideshow. Answer the question in a well-written R.A.C.E paragraph. Post your R.A.C.E paragraph here. en-us 2021-08-15 22:18:02 UTC 2025-10-17 17:54:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/2600.png https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680746852 The challenges of living in a refugee camp are that you don’t have much food to eat and they couldn’t stay for long because the war struck again and they had to move to Kenya. The benefits are that They have shelter and there is school. On page 20 of the book “Brothers in Hope,” the author wrote about when the boys arrived at the refugee camp and the author talked about Tom and shelter, food, and school. Garang got to Kenya safe by Tom giving him food and helping some boys in his group by putting them in the truck that took them to Kenya

]]> 2021-08-16 16:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680746852 Dudu`s A R.A.C.E https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680749475 Question: What were some of the challenges of living in a refugee camp? What were some of the benefits of living in the camp?

Challenges: It doesn't have so much food for everyone and you don't get enough days of school.

Benefits: You are not hiding to survive because of the war and you can live as a happy and careful family.

I got this information from the book ‘‘brothers in hope‘‘ on page 22,33,19,18 and page 30.

they have more challenges than benefits but they are happy and care for each other.

]]> 2021-08-16 17:01:26 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680749475 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680750041 The challenges of living in a refugee camp are that you don’t have much food to eat and they couldn’t stay for long because the war struck again and they had to move to kenya. The benefits are that They have shelter and there is school.

On page 20 of the book the author wrote about when the boys arrive at the refugee camp and they talked about tom and about shelter and food and school.

Garang got to kenya safe by tom giving him food and helping some people of his group by putting them in the truck that took them to kenya.but garng had to go walking with his 35 people that he was leading.

BY PEDRO T.

]]> 2021-08-16 17:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680750041 the challnges, and benefits of being in the refugee camp gr344223_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680750365 R, A: Garang had to face many challenges while in the refugee camp. One of the challenges was that they had to build their own house, and they had to run away from the soldier when they have arrived in the refugee camp. The benefit of living in the refugee camp is that they can have food every day. Also, they have some water to drink.

C: On page 23 you can see that they are running away from the refugee camp since the country wasn’t safe anymore because of the war. On page 24 you can see the illustrations of them running away. On page 20 they say that they gave a too to build their own shelter. The benefit was that they have finally eaten food in the refugee camp.

E: The challenge they had to face in the refugee camp was to build their own shelter. On page 20 they said that they had to build their own shelter. Also, another challenge is that they had to run away from the soldiers in the refugee camp, and the country was not safe. On page 23 they say that they were running away from the country, and on page 24 you can see an illustration of them running away. The benefit is that they could eat food. On page 20 you can see that they have eaten food in the refugee camp.

By: Jeniffer/Yunji

]]> 2021-08-16 17:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680750365 Brothers in hope Benja gr327648_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680751198 Challenges: One of the challenges of living in a refuge camp is it doesn't have food for everyone and

You don't get enough days of school.

Benefits: One of the benefits of living in a refuge camp is you are not hiding to survive because of the war and

You can live as a happy and caring.
I got this information from page 22.

I got this information from page 33.

I got this information from page 18 and 19.

I got this information from page 30.

They have more challenges than benefits but they are happy and care for each other.

]]> 2021-08-16 17:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680751198 One of the lost boys decisions that helped them was there decision to go to ethiopia And this was one of there many good decisions.Well on page 8 of the book brothers in hope that ¨I joined the group of leaders and we decided to walk to a county called ethiopia¨ and quote .Well as i said in my previous slide ¨I joined the group of leaders and we decided to walk to a county called ethiopia¨ and quote . gr348004_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680754820 2021-08-16 17:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680754820 Brothers in hope gr331453_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680755332 The Older kids Made a group out of 35 and when the kids were sick they helped finding food and they revised their work from school with the sick kids.In page 9 they said they were going to ethiopia

In page 22 they helped the kids with food and learning. And last but not least They had to make groups so they didnt have to take care of a thousand or more. An i think it is better to help people then just kill them and if you feel it it is not going to be ok for you
By Olivia

]]> 2021-08-16 17:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680755332 Brothers in Hope Vivian gr337164_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680759232
Garang´s father told him ¨Your heart and mind are strong there is nothing you cannot do¨ and he used this advice to motivate him and make him feel better, and this helped him lead the group.Garang remembered the advice his father gave him on pages 4,9 and 38.He was told by his father when he was little that his mind and heart were strong and he could do anything and he remembered that a few times throughout the book.

By: Vivian

]]> 2021-08-16 17:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680759232 Brothers in Hope gr334322_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680761026 The lost boys make a decisions to help each other to survive. Like helping getting food or getting water. and help the sick kids. i know it was hard. I think this is because they show us that is was hard to take care of 35 kid . and they did not know where they were going
The information is in page 12

Josefina ]]> 2021-08-16 17:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680761026 Toli https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680762767 The right decisions that the lost boys did was sleep on day and walk at night,because on night is he just sleep there animals can hunt them on night while they sleep!

The challenges of the refugee camp was that it have lot of people that they dont know and it did not have enough food and beds for all of them.

I think the right decisions was sleep on day and walk at night because think,on night wolf hunt,and other animals hunt too,so you can defend yourself if you are awake

If you are a sleep the wolf will kill you

The challenge was that it doesn't have enough food for every one and you cant stay that long on the camp.
I was on school on the reading class and my teacher readed this book to us,who wrote the book is Mary Williams

But i think she got the book from a site.

Toli

]]> 2021-08-16 17:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680762767 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680765812 Two challenges of living in a refugee camp is that when the war comes to Ethiopia or Tom leaves, there is less food and education. Two benefits of the living in the camp is that they were given food, water and shelter and they didn’t need to walk for miles anymore. We see the benefits of living in the camp on page 20. We see the challenges of living in the camp on page 22 and page 33. When they get to the camp on page 20 it says that they eat lentils and flour, which is the food. They also made mud and thatch shelters to live in. On page 22 and page 33 it is mentioned that there is less food to eat. On page 22, it’s because the war is getting close to the camp, and on page 33, it’s because Tom left.
By Imran

]]> 2021-08-16 17:12:40 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680765812 Brothers in hope https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680766691 A challenge of living in a refugee camp is that when (tom) the manager leaves there's less food and water.2 benefits is that you don't need to run of war anymore,And have food ,water and shelter.We see the challenge of living in a refugee camp this in page 32 of brothers in hope.we also see the benefits of living in a refugee camp in page 20.In page 20 we see that Garang says. ¨we ate every day,it wasn't much just lentils and flour but after months with almost nothing to eat it was like a feast.¨”this proves that life in refugee camp was good, but in page 32 Garang says.¨when tom left the camp many boys in my group got sick and died and others couldn't go to school because of hunger¨.

]]> 2021-08-16 17:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680766691 gr350151_2 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680766764 Garang had to face many challenges while in a refugee camp.some challenges were that they had to make their own decisions.they had to make their own houses to.On page 20 it states that they had to build their own houses out of mud and thatch.On page 21 it says that they did not want to go to school at first they can to challenge themselves once they got into school.]]> 2021-08-16 17:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680766764 Soul K https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680851903 What decisions did the lost boys make that helped them survive their journey? Were these good decisions? Why or why not? The lost boys decided to leave their home country because there was the civil war in their home country. So they saved their life. I think that decision of the lost boys were good decision because the lost boys saved their life.
In the lost boys home country, there were having the civil war, so they should leave the country to save their life.
In the lost boys country sudan, the civil war between north sudan and south sudan. So a lot of citizens got killed. So the lost boys should leave their country to not get kill. So they decided to move to ethiopia. ]]> 2021-08-16 18:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680851903 Pedro N https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680852167 The lost boys decided to leave their home country because there was a civil war in their home country.And when the lost boys decided to jump in the river to get to Kenya and I think that decision was super good to get to Kenya. I think even though people in other groups died in the lake no matter what you have to go to the point you want to go

]]> 2021-08-16 18:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680852167 Yasmin https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680856948 One of the benefits of living in a camp are that you get food and a bed. Some of the challenges of living in a camp is they don´t have food and water sometimes.

Well in page 19 of the book brothers in hope garang sad

¨tom gave us aouer tools to bild mud-and-thatch shelter

]]> 2021-08-16 18:18:27 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680856948 Well one of the Challenges of living in a Refugee camp is there might not be always enough Food,and another Challenge of living in Refugee is that there are never really safe.I got this information from the page/PDF 20 it says “For the first time in a long While.we ate every day.It wasn’t Much.Just lentils and flower.”So that is where I got that part of the information and The other part of information was in the page/PDF 23 “The People of Ethiopia began to fight,and we could not stay in there country anymore.” That some proof that they where never safe. My answer is correct because I said the one of the Challenges of living in a refugee camp was hard because in the book Garang said that he only had lentils and a flour and he said it wasn’t much but since he almost hadn’t eaten nothing in a month so of course it was a lot,And reason two I was correct because they really where never safe. BY Gabi https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680862679 2021-08-16 18:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1680862679 lucas gr330012_1 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1682524055 It was hard to live in a refugee camp.there was less food. many people have died in the refugee camp.

Because there was less food.

The benefit was To see again chuti bol.The source is from the book. On page 33 it says, ¨ there was not enough food. People were often sick and many died.¨A refugee camp is basically a camp that lost people stay. Many people died there .

And garang cold see chuti.

]]> 2021-08-17 16:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1682524055 https://padlet.com/patriciagehrels/wud5g0g08cvu8q5k/wish/1682536474 Gargan made a decision of sharing food to survive and made a great decision by letting the sick people eat more to get better to survive

also the older kids made good decision that he chose a kid to adopt to be his brother so they can survive. I took this imformation in page, 13 they shared the food and helped to find it and also in page 13 again they helped the sick people and last but not least in page 9 they helped adopt the kids to have someone be their brother.
By: Colomba :)

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