https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6 Leave a helpful comment! en-us 2017-06-22 16:02:23 UTC 2018-03-02 16:09:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lovecookie.png 23amach https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227097684 Hey Riley! I read your persuasive editorial and I have to say that I really enjoyed it. I totally agree with your position on how Scotch Plains or Fanwood should add a dog park for dogs and their owners. I feel like you used very advanced vocabulary throughout your writing piece and it really helped to overall make your essay better. In addition, I love your topic and I really think it was one of a kind. I haven't read another essay with the same or similar topic. One suggestion I have is to make sure there are no grammatical errors in your piece. Overall, I really liked your essay and I enjoyed reading it.]]> 2018-02-01 15:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227097684 Nemma https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227099319 2018-02-01 15:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227099319 23iblake https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227101187 Wow Riley! Your Persuasive Editorial made me think about what we don't have that would be very beneficial. My favorite part of your piece was all of your composition risks, and the title. Your were very descriptive and you turned what could have been boring facts into an exciting editorial! I also like how you connected the ending back to the beginning and restated everything you talked about. Next time you may want to make sure words are not capitalized when they shouldn't be. Overall, your essay was informative and captivating.]]> 2018-02-01 15:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/23rbhatia/wu42lah3zbg6/wish/227101187