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         <title>Activity #1 – Word Choice:Avoiding Weak Constructions and Vague Words</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.&nbsp;<strong>&nbsp;The moon cakes that are made by my grandmother are the best ones.</strong> <br>RW: My grandmother always brought the hand-make moon cake with her whenever she came to here.<br><strong>2. Jessica is such a nice person; she always says interesting things.<br>RW:&nbsp; Jessica is a nice person, she always brought moon cake to share with us; she always shares some cooking methods or tricks with us. </strong><br><strong>4. I felt sad because I didn’t do well on my presentation yesterday.</strong>&nbsp; <br>RW: I cried the whole night since I did not recite the words for the presentation yesterday.<br><br><strong>5. We had a good time at the party because there were lots of fun games.</strong> <br>RW: We played tags, hide-and-seek, and video games at the party and we had a lot of fun.<br><strong>7. Bill walked into the class just after the bell rang and said, “I got out of my last class late.”</strong>&nbsp; <br>RW: Bill rush into the classroom and yelled:" I got out of my classroom late!", but it is just after the bell rang.<br><strong>8. After reading the book, the students had an interesting discussion about the theme.</strong> <br>RW: After reading the book that once got 5 international prizes, the students discuss the book throughout the day.<br>10.<strong> Because she was tired, Katie was late leaving the dormitory.</strong>&nbsp; <br>RW: Katie left the dormitory 5 minutes late because she just finished a basketball game that last for 2 hours.<br><strong>11. There is a sandwich on the table and Mary is looking at it.</strong>&nbsp; &nbsp;<br>RW: there is a 10-layer sandwich on the table and Mary is looking at it for 10 minutes.<br><strong>12. Ted put his garbage in the trash can and then gave his tray to the cafeteria staff.</strong> <br>RW: Ted put his tons of trash in the trash can and then give his tray to the workers of the cafeteria slowly.<br><strong><br>14. The latest research says that people are eating too much sugar.</strong><br>RW: the recent research states that people are eating a hundred grams of sugar every day.<br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-24 13:41:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Activity #2 - Word Choice: Connotation</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.Jill is naturally <strong>inquisitive</strong>, so she will probably want to <strong>investigate</strong> this situation. <br>RW: Jill is naturally officious, so she will probably want to find out the fact of this situation.<br>2,“Titanic” is a <strong>classic romantic </strong>movie. <br>RW: “Titanic” is an old boring love<strong>&nbsp;</strong>movie.<br>3.Amy and Renee are <strong>obsessed</strong> with the new project that they are <strong>conspiring</strong> on.&nbsp; <br>RW: Amy and Renee are <strong>addicted to</strong> the new project that they are trying.<br> 4.Sally is always <strong>loud and obnoxious</strong> during class debates and discussions.&nbsp; RW: Sally is always clear and understandable during class debates and discussions.&nbsp; <br>7.My aunts’ three <strong>little ones</strong> <strong>frolicked</strong> in the yard while we were preparing dinner<br>RW:My aunts’ three cute kids wrangled in the yard while we were preparing dinner<br>9.Neil is a <strong>reserved </strong>and <strong>discriminating </strong>young man.&nbsp; &nbsp;<br>RW:Neil is an introverted and selective young man.&nbsp; &nbsp;<br>10.The sun is <strong>sparkling</strong> on the water and the air is <strong>balmy</strong>. <br>RW:The sun is <strong>twinkling </strong>on the water and the air is <strong>hot</strong>.<br>12.Learning to write well is <strong>burdensome</strong>, but our teacher is <strong>fanatical </strong>about making us succeed.&nbsp; &nbsp;<br>RW:Learning to write well is weighty, but our teacher is persistent<strong>&nbsp;</strong>in making us successful.&nbsp; &nbsp; <br>14.The supervisor of the company spends a lot of time <strong>commanding</strong> his <strong>minions.</strong> <br>RW: The supervisor of the company spends a lot of time verbosing his <strong>employees.<br>8.</strong>Bob’s mother is <strong>meddling </strong>with his affairs by giving him her <strong>two cents’ worth</strong>. <br>RW:Bob’s mother is <strong>assisting </strong>with his affairs by giving him her direction. &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br><br>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-24 14:19:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Activity #3- Imagery</title>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-25 11:57:11 UTC</pubDate>
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