Descriptive Writing by Rachell Wheeler

What do we need to make our writing awesome?

rachell4 — 2018-04-08 23:18:28 UTC

Ciennah and kataraina.p

ciennah — 2018-04-09 00:00:01 UTC

details of what it looks like in your writing.

Ciennah and Kataraina.p

ciennah — 2018-04-09 00:01:56 UTC

dramatic entrance

we need some descriptive words p.s have to be interesting.

eliza2 — 2018-04-09 00:03:56 UTC

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Ema and lakeisha

ema6 — 2018-04-09 00:04:24 UTC

Punctuation and character the might be broken down I might hear ghost

Ciennah and Kataraina.p

ciennah — 2018-04-09 00:05:10 UTC

charecters so then they can it can be more scarier.

Cherry and Adelaide and tishan

cherry10 — 2018-04-09 00:06:10 UTC

Use descriptive words
use your five senses

You need capital letters and full stops

taimana1 — 2018-04-09 00:07:45 UTC

Chloe and timoti

chloe27 — 2018-04-09 00:07:47 UTC

What do we need to do to make the characters exciting.put more details to what the characters are saying to make it more exciting is to put your since in.

Ciennah and Kataraina.p

ciennah — 2018-04-09 00:08:17 UTC

making it make more scarier by scary details in it.

ciennah and kataraina

kataraina1 — 2018-04-09 00:10:13 UTC

to make it scary when you skeletons on the floor like no one saw them.

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eliza2 — 2018-04-09 00:10:24 UTC

Imagine

Ciennah and Kataraina.p

ciennah — 2018-04-09 00:10:48 UTC

put onomatopoeia's in it to make it more awsome

Timoti and chloe.

timoti — 2018-04-09 00:12:31 UTC

We need to put punctuation in whiting

kataraina and ciennah

kataraina1 — 2018-04-09 00:15:31 UTC

detailsi.

Haunted house

rongo — 2018-04-09 00:17:25 UTC

ciennah and kataraina.p

kataraina1 — 2018-04-09 00:20:54 UTC

you should do a plan so you know what to do.

Ema and lakeisha

ema6 — 2018-04-09 00:22:51 UTC

Use making it more scary and more details